SINS OF EDEN
Chapter 5
WARNING!
This chapter has sexually explicit content. If you are offended by such,
then skip it. Keep in mind that some dialogue will happen that *might*
be important.
*****
Nui put down her phone as Akane hung hers' up. She knew she was better
off waiting, and she had been right. Akane's little meeting had not
gone well, and she needed someone to talk to.
With a determined look, she grabbed her things and exited her apartment,
closing the door behind her.
She turned to the elevator and stopped dead in her tracks.
Leaning on the door of one of the only available apartments of her building,
was a man. He had his eyes closed and his head sagged; his arms crossing
in front of his chest. He was dressed in jeans and a normal white shirt.
He would've passed for normal, but he had certain... attributes that stood
out.
She dared an extensive look at him and came at one conclusion.
He was easily the most handsome man she had ever seen.
His hair was short and of a bruinette color; obviously dyed. His hard and
firm body stood out, unhidden by the clothes he wore.
Nui whistled in a low tone as to not be heard.
He lifted his face and looked at her. She had never seen such deep, green eyes.
Nui blushed as he caught her staring. He simply nodded and smiled, then he walked
to the elevator and was gone.
She smiled to herself. *Ooooooh, I *know* what I'm doing when I get home!*
Practically glowing, she skipped down the hall. She got on the elevator, forgetting
about her new dream boat in favor of Akane...
Completly forgetting that the apartment still had the 'Available' sign hung on the
door.
*****
Akane had managed to get over some of her initial shock. She was now sitting
up on her bed, still sobbing a little from time to time.
It was still one major shock. To know that the man she loved, and still did
married someone else. And what put her down the most, was the fact that he would
not share the details of why they had married in the first place.
All the ordeal had left her shattered.
She heard a small knock on her door. She expected it to be Nui, since she had called
a while ago.
She got up and went to the door, opening it. It was Nui.
"Hey girl," she said half-heartedly.
"Hi," Akane responded as Nui stepped inside.
"So," she said, "go sit, and I'll get us some drinks."
"Nui, you know I don't drink."
"I know, I know. I'll just get you a soda."
Akane obeyed as Nui headed to the kitchen. A few minutes later, she emerged with
two cans.
"I thought you were gonna drink something," said Akane as she accepted her soda.
"Well, I forgot that he who doesn't drink, doesn't have 'drinks' at home," she responded.
Akane laughed. That had slipped her mind too.
"So, you wanna tell me?" asked Nui.
Akane sighed, a tear pinching her eye again.
"You can tell good ol' Nui," she said as she took her hand.
Akane sniffled. "It went horribly."
-----
An hour later, Akane had literally soaked Nui's shirt, but she felt much better.
Talking to her had lifted a great weight off her shoulders.
"So, the way I see it is that this guy is just a baby. I mean, who the hell keeps a
grudge after 6 years?"
Akane gave a small grunt. Nui's attitude *was* comforting and normal, but she had a
little bit of problems understanding about deep hurt.
"I wish I could answer that, but I can't. I just hope that I can talk to him
again..."
"DO, is the word I believe you're looking for. The only way you can get him to even
talk to you again is by seeking him out. I don't know about that girl he's with,
but, well, I don't know. You'll figure it out, I hope."
Akane laughed softly. "Thanks for listening, Nui."
"Hey, what are friends for? Besides, this is getting kinda interesting. You know,
like one of those never-ending soap's. Just think: Me, the best friend, you the
girl fighting for a love lost and found, and the evil girl, who can we name that?"
Akane stiffled a giggle. Nui always made her laugh.
"Well, seeing as to how my superb and wanted presence has eased you out of your
misery, I believe I will take my leave," she said as she stood.
"Thanks," said Akane as she hugged her friend.
"No problem. Just call me if you need to talk."
Akane nodded and opened the door to her friend. Nui 'winked' her eye at her and left.
Akane closed the door and sighed quietly. Now that she felt better, she would have a
more clear mind to think things through.
She sat on her couch, finishing the soda she had left un-attended, thinking of a way to-
*Huh?* she said to herself as she spotted a small envelope on the small table.
*How did that get there?* she asked herself. She was pretty sure that nothing had been
there just a few moments before.
In fact, she was sure about it.
The front read: 'Tendo', and that was it.
Curiousity got the best of her, so she opened it. Inside was a small note; nothing fancy,
with only a few words written.
'Just be ready for me.'
Akane blinked at the note. What the hell was this?
*****
Nui made her way quickly back home. She wanted to get there, having just remembered a certain
someone.
She was just about to enter her building, when...
"Hey," a voice said from beside her.
She turned her head and saw the man she had seen earlier.
"Um, hi," she said nervously. She had never been nervous around men, and a small part
of her wondered why she was with this one.
"I saw you earlier. We have not been properly introduced." He extended his hand to her.
"My name is Shin. It is nice to meet you Miss..."
"Oh! Nui!" she said as she shook his hand. She took a moment to study him. He wasn't
inmensly tall; he was maybe a scarse 5'8', but he was very handsome. There was just something
about him that screamed of a raw knowledge and experience. or something like that.
"Nice to make your acquaintance. So tell me, would it be all right for me to take you
out for something to eat? It is almost dinner time."
*Extra points for being nice!* she thought. "Of course! I'd love to go!"
He nodded and offered his arm, which she encircled her own on as they walked down the street.
-----
"Honestly, that had to be the most embarrasing moment of my life!"
"I beg to differ. Singing in front of your school is not that bad. Dancing, however,
is quite another matter."
Nui laughed at his statement. She hadn't had this much fun over dinner in ages. Now they
were facing her apartment door, ready to call it a night.
"Well, I had a great time, Shin. It was wonderful."
"Please, no need to thank me. It was my pleasure."
Nui smiled and made her one final test. She leaned her head towards his and was not
dissapointed. He leaned his towards her own and caught her lips in a kiss.
Nui had to concentrate to keep her knees balanced. His kiss made her dizzy; something
she'd never felt with anyone before.
Shin broke the kiss and looked at her. She had her eyes closed and her head was still
upturned. She slowly opened her eyes.
"Wow."
He smiled.
"I- I don't think I've ever been kissed like that."
"Well, there is something to be had from experience."
Suddenly overcome with a powerful urge, she leapt up to him and wrapped her arms around
his neck; kissing him passionately.
"Spend the night," she said between kisses.
"My pleasure," he responded.
Taking a moment, she turned to unlock the door. Once it was opened, she resumed her kissing.
She 'eeped' a little as he picked her up, and somehow managed to open the door with her
in his arms.
Shin closed the door with his foot and carried her across her apartment to her room.
Once inside the bedroom, he set her down, but she refused to stop kissing him.
With much effort, he managed to get a break from the kiss. He looked at her features.
Her face was flushed and red and she was shaking a little.
Nui trembled in anticipation. She wanted this man; badly. She nearly moaned when he cupped
her face.
Taking her face in his hands, he kissed her once more. He wanted this to last, so very
slowly, he trailed the contour of her figure, memorizing each curve, each hollow and
each part.
Nui moaned into the kiss as he began to explore her body. She burned with need, but he made
her feel things no man had ever before. She had done this before, but it was quick and
generally not that good. He made her body feel things unlike she had experienced.
Slowly, he began to kneed her breasts through the thin material of her cotton shirt. He
cupped them, and gently teased her nipples, going with a softness that was almost maddening.
Unable to stand anymore, she brought him down on her bed, cupped the sides of his face
and kissed him hard. She barely registered his hands starting to go under her shirt,
but she could barely think straight.
Lovingly, he brought the material off her body, revealing her breasts, barely covered with
a thin bra. He helped her body up a bit, reached behind her and undid the hooks.
He broke the kiss and looked straight into her eyes. She nodded, so he brought the material
off her body, revealing her almost perfect attributes into view. He smiled and
kissed the sensitive area around the nipple, not exactly going towards it, but avoiding
it for now.
Nui moaned and grabbed the sides of his head as she arched her back at him. He kissed and teased
her breasts to no end, until she thought she might as well die right then and there.
Suddenly, he caught her nipple in his mouth and the other with his fingers. He gently
bit and pulled at it, eliciting more moans from her.
Shin suckled softly at her, keeping it slow, but good. With an evil thought, he switched his
mouth to her other breast and brought one hand dowm her body. With expert movements, he undid
her belt and the button of her jean. He slowly moved his hand under her panties and
began to trail his fingers up her slit in a quick, but strong motion.
She had to stiffle a scream. He was driving her mad with need. She rocked her body against
his touch, eager for it. Quickly, she reached for his shirt and brought is off, letting
him return to his torture as she ran her hands over his well muscled back.
Shin teased her clit until a point where she would almost orgasm, but he had plans.
He stopped just as she was nearing her peek, which made her whimper, but he was not
finished. He put his hands on her hips and brought her jean and panties off her shapely
legs. Once off, he too took off his pants and underwear, exposing his rock hard shaft.
He trailed kisses on her inner leg, working his way up to her opening once more.
Nui stared at his naked body, her body aching now. How she wanted him, but he began kissing
her leg, until he reached her core again and licked her. She screamed and held his head
to her, digging her fingers in his short hair. He kept up his motions for a few minutes,
until she felt herself regaining her release, only to have him stop again.
Shin liked teasing her, but he himself could not hold it up much himself. He moved up and
kissed her lips. He positioned himself, his manhood at her opening. With a slow thrust,
he went into her, a moan of his own escaping him.
Nui thought she would die. He was so wonderful, making her feel things she hadn't before.
She rocked herself to meet his thrusts. Within moments, she found herself regaining her
orgasm, but he stopped kissing her in favor of looking into her eyes. She found herself
entraped by them.
"Give yourself to me," he said softly.
She moaned, but could not tear her gaze from his.
"Give yourself to me."
Nui's mind went blank as she nodded. He smiled and pushed himself deeper into her,
making her scream. Suddenly, she reached her peak and came, screaming at the powerful
sensation rocking her body.
He smiled as she clenched his member with powerful contractions, but kept up his pace.
Nui was spent as her orgasm subsided, but he began again, and she found it wonderful,
but his words echoed through her mind in rapid succesion, until she orgasmed again.
She did many times, lost in a whirl-pool of pleasure.
End of Chapter 5
Authors Notes
I know that this update is way overdue, but my PC has been in the shop and only recently
returned(YAY! Not to mention the site). This was already written, but I didn't get the chance to update before the PC broke down. Luckily, all my files were salvaged in time(WHEW!).
'Till next time...
BlackDragon
Chapter 5
WARNING!
This chapter has sexually explicit content. If you are offended by such,
then skip it. Keep in mind that some dialogue will happen that *might*
be important.
*****
Nui put down her phone as Akane hung hers' up. She knew she was better
off waiting, and she had been right. Akane's little meeting had not
gone well, and she needed someone to talk to.
With a determined look, she grabbed her things and exited her apartment,
closing the door behind her.
She turned to the elevator and stopped dead in her tracks.
Leaning on the door of one of the only available apartments of her building,
was a man. He had his eyes closed and his head sagged; his arms crossing
in front of his chest. He was dressed in jeans and a normal white shirt.
He would've passed for normal, but he had certain... attributes that stood
out.
She dared an extensive look at him and came at one conclusion.
He was easily the most handsome man she had ever seen.
His hair was short and of a bruinette color; obviously dyed. His hard and
firm body stood out, unhidden by the clothes he wore.
Nui whistled in a low tone as to not be heard.
He lifted his face and looked at her. She had never seen such deep, green eyes.
Nui blushed as he caught her staring. He simply nodded and smiled, then he walked
to the elevator and was gone.
She smiled to herself. *Ooooooh, I *know* what I'm doing when I get home!*
Practically glowing, she skipped down the hall. She got on the elevator, forgetting
about her new dream boat in favor of Akane...
Completly forgetting that the apartment still had the 'Available' sign hung on the
door.
*****
Akane had managed to get over some of her initial shock. She was now sitting
up on her bed, still sobbing a little from time to time.
It was still one major shock. To know that the man she loved, and still did
married someone else. And what put her down the most, was the fact that he would
not share the details of why they had married in the first place.
All the ordeal had left her shattered.
She heard a small knock on her door. She expected it to be Nui, since she had called
a while ago.
She got up and went to the door, opening it. It was Nui.
"Hey girl," she said half-heartedly.
"Hi," Akane responded as Nui stepped inside.
"So," she said, "go sit, and I'll get us some drinks."
"Nui, you know I don't drink."
"I know, I know. I'll just get you a soda."
Akane obeyed as Nui headed to the kitchen. A few minutes later, she emerged with
two cans.
"I thought you were gonna drink something," said Akane as she accepted her soda.
"Well, I forgot that he who doesn't drink, doesn't have 'drinks' at home," she responded.
Akane laughed. That had slipped her mind too.
"So, you wanna tell me?" asked Nui.
Akane sighed, a tear pinching her eye again.
"You can tell good ol' Nui," she said as she took her hand.
Akane sniffled. "It went horribly."
-----
An hour later, Akane had literally soaked Nui's shirt, but she felt much better.
Talking to her had lifted a great weight off her shoulders.
"So, the way I see it is that this guy is just a baby. I mean, who the hell keeps a
grudge after 6 years?"
Akane gave a small grunt. Nui's attitude *was* comforting and normal, but she had a
little bit of problems understanding about deep hurt.
"I wish I could answer that, but I can't. I just hope that I can talk to him
again..."
"DO, is the word I believe you're looking for. The only way you can get him to even
talk to you again is by seeking him out. I don't know about that girl he's with,
but, well, I don't know. You'll figure it out, I hope."
Akane laughed softly. "Thanks for listening, Nui."
"Hey, what are friends for? Besides, this is getting kinda interesting. You know,
like one of those never-ending soap's. Just think: Me, the best friend, you the
girl fighting for a love lost and found, and the evil girl, who can we name that?"
Akane stiffled a giggle. Nui always made her laugh.
"Well, seeing as to how my superb and wanted presence has eased you out of your
misery, I believe I will take my leave," she said as she stood.
"Thanks," said Akane as she hugged her friend.
"No problem. Just call me if you need to talk."
Akane nodded and opened the door to her friend. Nui 'winked' her eye at her and left.
Akane closed the door and sighed quietly. Now that she felt better, she would have a
more clear mind to think things through.
She sat on her couch, finishing the soda she had left un-attended, thinking of a way to-
*Huh?* she said to herself as she spotted a small envelope on the small table.
*How did that get there?* she asked herself. She was pretty sure that nothing had been
there just a few moments before.
In fact, she was sure about it.
The front read: 'Tendo', and that was it.
Curiousity got the best of her, so she opened it. Inside was a small note; nothing fancy,
with only a few words written.
'Just be ready for me.'
Akane blinked at the note. What the hell was this?
*****
Nui made her way quickly back home. She wanted to get there, having just remembered a certain
someone.
She was just about to enter her building, when...
"Hey," a voice said from beside her.
She turned her head and saw the man she had seen earlier.
"Um, hi," she said nervously. She had never been nervous around men, and a small part
of her wondered why she was with this one.
"I saw you earlier. We have not been properly introduced." He extended his hand to her.
"My name is Shin. It is nice to meet you Miss..."
"Oh! Nui!" she said as she shook his hand. She took a moment to study him. He wasn't
inmensly tall; he was maybe a scarse 5'8', but he was very handsome. There was just something
about him that screamed of a raw knowledge and experience. or something like that.
"Nice to make your acquaintance. So tell me, would it be all right for me to take you
out for something to eat? It is almost dinner time."
*Extra points for being nice!* she thought. "Of course! I'd love to go!"
He nodded and offered his arm, which she encircled her own on as they walked down the street.
-----
"Honestly, that had to be the most embarrasing moment of my life!"
"I beg to differ. Singing in front of your school is not that bad. Dancing, however,
is quite another matter."
Nui laughed at his statement. She hadn't had this much fun over dinner in ages. Now they
were facing her apartment door, ready to call it a night.
"Well, I had a great time, Shin. It was wonderful."
"Please, no need to thank me. It was my pleasure."
Nui smiled and made her one final test. She leaned her head towards his and was not
dissapointed. He leaned his towards her own and caught her lips in a kiss.
Nui had to concentrate to keep her knees balanced. His kiss made her dizzy; something
she'd never felt with anyone before.
Shin broke the kiss and looked at her. She had her eyes closed and her head was still
upturned. She slowly opened her eyes.
"Wow."
He smiled.
"I- I don't think I've ever been kissed like that."
"Well, there is something to be had from experience."
Suddenly overcome with a powerful urge, she leapt up to him and wrapped her arms around
his neck; kissing him passionately.
"Spend the night," she said between kisses.
"My pleasure," he responded.
Taking a moment, she turned to unlock the door. Once it was opened, she resumed her kissing.
She 'eeped' a little as he picked her up, and somehow managed to open the door with her
in his arms.
Shin closed the door with his foot and carried her across her apartment to her room.
Once inside the bedroom, he set her down, but she refused to stop kissing him.
With much effort, he managed to get a break from the kiss. He looked at her features.
Her face was flushed and red and she was shaking a little.
Nui trembled in anticipation. She wanted this man; badly. She nearly moaned when he cupped
her face.
Taking her face in his hands, he kissed her once more. He wanted this to last, so very
slowly, he trailed the contour of her figure, memorizing each curve, each hollow and
each part.
Nui moaned into the kiss as he began to explore her body. She burned with need, but he made
her feel things no man had ever before. She had done this before, but it was quick and
generally not that good. He made her body feel things unlike she had experienced.
Slowly, he began to kneed her breasts through the thin material of her cotton shirt. He
cupped them, and gently teased her nipples, going with a softness that was almost maddening.
Unable to stand anymore, she brought him down on her bed, cupped the sides of his face
and kissed him hard. She barely registered his hands starting to go under her shirt,
but she could barely think straight.
Lovingly, he brought the material off her body, revealing her breasts, barely covered with
a thin bra. He helped her body up a bit, reached behind her and undid the hooks.
He broke the kiss and looked straight into her eyes. She nodded, so he brought the material
off her body, revealing her almost perfect attributes into view. He smiled and
kissed the sensitive area around the nipple, not exactly going towards it, but avoiding
it for now.
Nui moaned and grabbed the sides of his head as she arched her back at him. He kissed and teased
her breasts to no end, until she thought she might as well die right then and there.
Suddenly, he caught her nipple in his mouth and the other with his fingers. He gently
bit and pulled at it, eliciting more moans from her.
Shin suckled softly at her, keeping it slow, but good. With an evil thought, he switched his
mouth to her other breast and brought one hand dowm her body. With expert movements, he undid
her belt and the button of her jean. He slowly moved his hand under her panties and
began to trail his fingers up her slit in a quick, but strong motion.
She had to stiffle a scream. He was driving her mad with need. She rocked her body against
his touch, eager for it. Quickly, she reached for his shirt and brought is off, letting
him return to his torture as she ran her hands over his well muscled back.
Shin teased her clit until a point where she would almost orgasm, but he had plans.
He stopped just as she was nearing her peek, which made her whimper, but he was not
finished. He put his hands on her hips and brought her jean and panties off her shapely
legs. Once off, he too took off his pants and underwear, exposing his rock hard shaft.
He trailed kisses on her inner leg, working his way up to her opening once more.
Nui stared at his naked body, her body aching now. How she wanted him, but he began kissing
her leg, until he reached her core again and licked her. She screamed and held his head
to her, digging her fingers in his short hair. He kept up his motions for a few minutes,
until she felt herself regaining her release, only to have him stop again.
Shin liked teasing her, but he himself could not hold it up much himself. He moved up and
kissed her lips. He positioned himself, his manhood at her opening. With a slow thrust,
he went into her, a moan of his own escaping him.
Nui thought she would die. He was so wonderful, making her feel things she hadn't before.
She rocked herself to meet his thrusts. Within moments, she found herself regaining her
orgasm, but he stopped kissing her in favor of looking into her eyes. She found herself
entraped by them.
"Give yourself to me," he said softly.
She moaned, but could not tear her gaze from his.
"Give yourself to me."
Nui's mind went blank as she nodded. He smiled and pushed himself deeper into her,
making her scream. Suddenly, she reached her peak and came, screaming at the powerful
sensation rocking her body.
He smiled as she clenched his member with powerful contractions, but kept up his pace.
Nui was spent as her orgasm subsided, but he began again, and she found it wonderful,
but his words echoed through her mind in rapid succesion, until she orgasmed again.
She did many times, lost in a whirl-pool of pleasure.
End of Chapter 5
Authors Notes
I know that this update is way overdue, but my PC has been in the shop and only recently
returned(YAY! Not to mention the site). This was already written, but I didn't get the chance to update before the PC broke down. Luckily, all my files were salvaged in time(WHEW!).
'Till next time...
BlackDragon