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Well, I got my first review on my first day! ( Okay, to the comments by Kell Shock: I know. All of that. :'( At the time of this baby's conception, I didn't really understand what really went on in Dragonlance. However, I Can defend myself.sorta.Lol. Anywho. This is a really bad AU. Like, seriously. Only mildly related to Dragonlance. The elven respect for life: Ariel grew up on the outskirts of a human village: tons of prejudice. The only elf she ever knew was her father and a few of his friends' families who didn't hate him for marrying a human. I realize now that that would not have happened very much with Kagonesti.but, eh. So, yeah. She's more human than elven in her personality. Also, she left home fairly young, and was trained as a New Age knight for a long time. Wiped a bit more elven-ness out of her. ( The dragon deally.I think it ws fairly young. In the sequal to this one there's ANOTHER red dragon that gets killed. I was rather mean to the reds when I was younger. :S And about the centaurs: I know.I'm not sure why I said centaurs.probably just to make it sound cool. :D I like centaurs.Shoulda gone with goblins, but I think I'd used goblins before.or after.Maybe humans? Lol. Anyway. Thank you very much! I found this a few weeks ago on an old disk, and it took me a few moments to realize I had actually written it that long ago. ( This is actually a part of a strange crossover series I made, but this is the only "completed" part. There's two other's about her sisters, Alicia and Juanita. Also, there's a sequel in the fixing-up stage. Back then I didn't know my Your and You're and Yore's or my There Their and They're s.or spelling. That's really all I fixed, though. Also, at the time of your review, the rest of the story wasn't showing on FF.Net (cause it's a tad slow. Lol) so, yes. There are five more "chapters" to read.they're rather short.Eh. Anyway, thanks again!
Well, I got my first review on my first day! ( Okay, to the comments by Kell Shock: I know. All of that. :'( At the time of this baby's conception, I didn't really understand what really went on in Dragonlance. However, I Can defend myself.sorta.Lol. Anywho. This is a really bad AU. Like, seriously. Only mildly related to Dragonlance. The elven respect for life: Ariel grew up on the outskirts of a human village: tons of prejudice. The only elf she ever knew was her father and a few of his friends' families who didn't hate him for marrying a human. I realize now that that would not have happened very much with Kagonesti.but, eh. So, yeah. She's more human than elven in her personality. Also, she left home fairly young, and was trained as a New Age knight for a long time. Wiped a bit more elven-ness out of her. ( The dragon deally.I think it ws fairly young. In the sequal to this one there's ANOTHER red dragon that gets killed. I was rather mean to the reds when I was younger. :S And about the centaurs: I know.I'm not sure why I said centaurs.probably just to make it sound cool. :D I like centaurs.Shoulda gone with goblins, but I think I'd used goblins before.or after.Maybe humans? Lol. Anyway. Thank you very much! I found this a few weeks ago on an old disk, and it took me a few moments to realize I had actually written it that long ago. ( This is actually a part of a strange crossover series I made, but this is the only "completed" part. There's two other's about her sisters, Alicia and Juanita. Also, there's a sequel in the fixing-up stage. Back then I didn't know my Your and You're and Yore's or my There Their and They're s.or spelling. That's really all I fixed, though. Also, at the time of your review, the rest of the story wasn't showing on FF.Net (cause it's a tad slow. Lol) so, yes. There are five more "chapters" to read.they're rather short.Eh. Anyway, thanks again!