Note: hiya! This will be chapter ten. oh, thanks a lot for those who
reviewed..
Aki Rei- pls continue your story. And hope you weren't offended by my suggestion. ^_^
Um. ehem. here it is.
X- Uncontrolled Anger
GOKU'S PROV
I'm coming, Sanzo. Just wait for me...
Yes, I am nervous yet excited. I can finally see Sanzo for the first time in 1 week and 1 and a half day. Yup, I have been counting every single day, every single hour and every single minute. I just can't wait! Even if Sanzo is not willing to go back with us at least I can say good-bye to him.. But I do hope he will come back with us..
Hakkai drove closer.. and there it was.. the temple where Sanzo is staying.. I saw Sanzo staring up in the window. All I can do was to stare at him but then I suddenly waved at him, I don't know what I was thinking. Stupid me!!!
After a couple of minutes, we found ourselves in front of the huge double door.
"are you ready, mina?" Hakkai asked softly, but his eyes were only focusing on me as if asking you ready, Goku?
I just nodded..
Well, Hakkai was satisfied with my silent reply. He got hold of the knob and then he then opened the door........
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SANZO'S PROV
They are here! I can't believe that even though I was cruel to them, they are here to save me. They do give people second chances.
Then suddenly I heard a voice at the coming from my back.
"yes, they are here. tell me, Sanzo, what will you do if they are here?"
it was obvious who it was, it was Homura.
"what do you mean, Homura?" I asked coolly.
He suddenly smiled. but this smile was kinda.. Different.
"I have been observing you these past few days. Do you know I have some kind of a "magical camera" in your room? With that magical camera, I know what you do in this room of yours."
"so what?"
"I realized that you hate me. You're starting to like Son Goku, aren't you?"
I was quiet for a few minutes.
Then I laughed.
"what makes you think I will like that bakazaru?" of course I was bluffing. I do like Goku.
He raised his eyebrow.
"do you think you can fool me, Konzen?"
I stopped laughing. I know I was busted.
"I think it's obvious that you like him..... Have a nice dream, Genjo Sanzo."
I saw a bright light coming towards me, all I was able was to stand. I froze. Then the bright light heated me and I fell to the ground. The last sound I heard was Homura's soft whisper.
"perfect." he said
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GOJYO'S PROV
Where the hell are the god-team?! They should be here by now.. I'm getting bored, those bastards should be here or else I'll change my mind of staying in this forgotten place.
"ahh. here you are AGAIN!"
again? Count me out. I wasn't here before.
Then the god-team appeared.. but someone was missing. Homura.
"I haven't you give up yet, Son Goku?" Shien asked.
"he-he! I'll never give up unless I can see Sanzo again and say a proper good-bye to him." The bakazaru answered. What a stupid reply!!!
"you never give up, do you?" Shien said then he suddenly frowned. "I cant let the happiness of Homura be away from him.."
I can't believe this guy!
"hey, Shien! Why do you have to be damn loyal to Homura! It's not like he's your lover or something!" I shouted.
Silence..
"oh my god." I said softly.
they say silence means yes but is it really true? I guess so.. Now, I understand..
"I and Homura had been together before we even came in this mortal place. I never expected that I will be admitting this but..."
"save it, Shien! Just shut up for a minute!" Zeon suddenly shouted.
"I can't believe that I have been with gays all a long! You two were having a relationship!? You already knew, Shien, that before we formed into a group we promised to each other that we will never hide a secret to each other."
"I-I' m sorry, Zeon. But we know you hate homosexual. So we have to keep it silent."
I looked at Hakkai and Goku. Yup, both have the same reaction. They looked very surprised. Well, I have to say I am surprised too. What can I say? I never suspected this even though I was a love detector. Well, the two are still fighting.. will they ever shut up?
"I just can't tell.."
"shut up, Shien!" finally, Homura is here.
Homura appeared. Where have he been doing?
"Homura. Where's Sanzo?" the monkey asked.
"Sanzo? I thought you'd never asked."
Homura snapped his fingers.
*GASP*
The scene was gruesome. We all saw Sanzo crucified in a cross. My god, he's naked!!!
"what have you done to Sanzo!?" Goku shouted angrily
"well, he was now beginning to hate me so I only have one choice." Homura replied.
"you're sick." Hakkai said
I can see everybody was disgusted of Homura. Ya, what was he thinking?
"is he dead?" I asked
"Iie, just fainted."
"look!" Zeon pointed.
Goku! Goku was now glowing. I saw the control deviceyou know, the one that will not make you a demon he was wearing was now on the floor.
"Goku, what were you thinking?" I heard Hakkai murmured.
Goku began to transform. His hair was longer, his nails were sharper and everything in him seems to change..
After a few minutes, Goku was a demon. I can feel this will now turn out to be a good day coz' you already know what happens when Goku becomes a demon..
Note: sorry if there are any mistakes. Hope you will still read chapter 11.
Aki Rei- pls continue your story. And hope you weren't offended by my suggestion. ^_^
Um. ehem. here it is.
X- Uncontrolled Anger
GOKU'S PROV
I'm coming, Sanzo. Just wait for me...
Yes, I am nervous yet excited. I can finally see Sanzo for the first time in 1 week and 1 and a half day. Yup, I have been counting every single day, every single hour and every single minute. I just can't wait! Even if Sanzo is not willing to go back with us at least I can say good-bye to him.. But I do hope he will come back with us..
Hakkai drove closer.. and there it was.. the temple where Sanzo is staying.. I saw Sanzo staring up in the window. All I can do was to stare at him but then I suddenly waved at him, I don't know what I was thinking. Stupid me!!!
After a couple of minutes, we found ourselves in front of the huge double door.
"are you ready, mina?" Hakkai asked softly, but his eyes were only focusing on me as if asking you ready, Goku?
I just nodded..
Well, Hakkai was satisfied with my silent reply. He got hold of the knob and then he then opened the door........
***********************************************************
SANZO'S PROV
They are here! I can't believe that even though I was cruel to them, they are here to save me. They do give people second chances.
Then suddenly I heard a voice at the coming from my back.
"yes, they are here. tell me, Sanzo, what will you do if they are here?"
it was obvious who it was, it was Homura.
"what do you mean, Homura?" I asked coolly.
He suddenly smiled. but this smile was kinda.. Different.
"I have been observing you these past few days. Do you know I have some kind of a "magical camera" in your room? With that magical camera, I know what you do in this room of yours."
"so what?"
"I realized that you hate me. You're starting to like Son Goku, aren't you?"
I was quiet for a few minutes.
Then I laughed.
"what makes you think I will like that bakazaru?" of course I was bluffing. I do like Goku.
He raised his eyebrow.
"do you think you can fool me, Konzen?"
I stopped laughing. I know I was busted.
"I think it's obvious that you like him..... Have a nice dream, Genjo Sanzo."
I saw a bright light coming towards me, all I was able was to stand. I froze. Then the bright light heated me and I fell to the ground. The last sound I heard was Homura's soft whisper.
"perfect." he said
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GOJYO'S PROV
Where the hell are the god-team?! They should be here by now.. I'm getting bored, those bastards should be here or else I'll change my mind of staying in this forgotten place.
"ahh. here you are AGAIN!"
again? Count me out. I wasn't here before.
Then the god-team appeared.. but someone was missing. Homura.
"I haven't you give up yet, Son Goku?" Shien asked.
"he-he! I'll never give up unless I can see Sanzo again and say a proper good-bye to him." The bakazaru answered. What a stupid reply!!!
"you never give up, do you?" Shien said then he suddenly frowned. "I cant let the happiness of Homura be away from him.."
I can't believe this guy!
"hey, Shien! Why do you have to be damn loyal to Homura! It's not like he's your lover or something!" I shouted.
Silence..
"oh my god." I said softly.
they say silence means yes but is it really true? I guess so.. Now, I understand..
"I and Homura had been together before we even came in this mortal place. I never expected that I will be admitting this but..."
"save it, Shien! Just shut up for a minute!" Zeon suddenly shouted.
"I can't believe that I have been with gays all a long! You two were having a relationship!? You already knew, Shien, that before we formed into a group we promised to each other that we will never hide a secret to each other."
"I-I' m sorry, Zeon. But we know you hate homosexual. So we have to keep it silent."
I looked at Hakkai and Goku. Yup, both have the same reaction. They looked very surprised. Well, I have to say I am surprised too. What can I say? I never suspected this even though I was a love detector. Well, the two are still fighting.. will they ever shut up?
"I just can't tell.."
"shut up, Shien!" finally, Homura is here.
Homura appeared. Where have he been doing?
"Homura. Where's Sanzo?" the monkey asked.
"Sanzo? I thought you'd never asked."
Homura snapped his fingers.
*GASP*
The scene was gruesome. We all saw Sanzo crucified in a cross. My god, he's naked!!!
"what have you done to Sanzo!?" Goku shouted angrily
"well, he was now beginning to hate me so I only have one choice." Homura replied.
"you're sick." Hakkai said
I can see everybody was disgusted of Homura. Ya, what was he thinking?
"is he dead?" I asked
"Iie, just fainted."
"look!" Zeon pointed.
Goku! Goku was now glowing. I saw the control deviceyou know, the one that will not make you a demon he was wearing was now on the floor.
"Goku, what were you thinking?" I heard Hakkai murmured.
Goku began to transform. His hair was longer, his nails were sharper and everything in him seems to change..
After a few minutes, Goku was a demon. I can feel this will now turn out to be a good day coz' you already know what happens when Goku becomes a demon..
Note: sorry if there are any mistakes. Hope you will still read chapter 11.