Title: A fight to Remember
Authors: Purrmeow and Krys
Rating: R (the first
few chapters won't seem like it.)
Disclaimer: The characters in this story
obviously do not belong to use, because if they did we would likely be rich and
not be writing a fan fiction, which makes us no money. This story is currently
being written in the format of RPing (role playing) between us, the two authors.
To make the shifts in POV clearer, each reply will be a separate chapter labeled
with the narrating character. This plot takes place just after where the TV
series leaves off. *Note: ~ will be used to indicate flashbacks and * to
indicate a shift to the POV of others characters, such as Tohru or Shigure.
Chapter Two: Yuki
Reflexes acting without conscious thought, the nezumi threw a formidable blow at
his carrot-headed opponent. With all his strength, all the bottled-up anger he'd
always held back, Yuki landed the punch on the advancing teen, striking him in
the chest, just to the left of his sternum. The neko stumbled backwards from the
contact, seeming winded and in shock. What the gray-haired attacker had not
anticipated was the result of such a move, as Kyou continued back only another
foot away from the mouse and tumbled off the moderately inclined roof. The
neko's wide-eyed and gently flailing fall seemed almost peaceful, and to Yuki's
surprise, the orange- haired shounen didn't even shout. Thumping into the grassy
earth, Yuki looked past the roof to see the other boy's motionless body heaped
on the vibrantly green lawn.
*** Steam rose softly off the freshly boiled tea. Tohru and Shigure sat
expectantly, waiting on the other residents of the secluded house. The gourmet
lunch slowly cooled on the table as the two stared out the open door leading
into the treeless area of yard. As if on cue, Kyou's form sailed past their
view, giving the appearance that he'd fallen from the sky like an angel. (HAAAA!
Kyou an angel?) The panic-prone brunette burst from her seat to the neko's
assistance. Once outside the house, Tohru could see the mouse still on the roof,
stunned. She'd seen them fight many times, but when had Yuki ever been this
aggressive? A foot away from the tanned boy's body, she stood, tense and afraid
to move or touch him; it may make the injuries worse.***
He knew he had to help. Still absolutely shocked at his actions, Yuki leaped
from the house, disregarding the distance to the ground. He hit the ground
heavily, and scrambled to the neko's side, shakily examining his cousin.
Unconscious, Kyou's body was a horrible sight, slumped carelessly and already
bruising. But what worried the nezumi most was the wet sound to his breathing;
it would only sound so if there were fluid in one's lungs. Upon closer
inspection, it was clear that a few ribs on the left were broken, and had likely
punctured his lung. 'I.I did this?' Yuki thought to himself, sitting motionless
in the grass. 'How could I get so carried away? Baka neko, he just wouldn't shut
up.'
Authors: Purrmeow and Krys
Rating: R (the first
few chapters won't seem like it.)
Disclaimer: The characters in this story
obviously do not belong to use, because if they did we would likely be rich and
not be writing a fan fiction, which makes us no money. This story is currently
being written in the format of RPing (role playing) between us, the two authors.
To make the shifts in POV clearer, each reply will be a separate chapter labeled
with the narrating character. This plot takes place just after where the TV
series leaves off. *Note: ~ will be used to indicate flashbacks and * to
indicate a shift to the POV of others characters, such as Tohru or Shigure.
Chapter Two: Yuki
Reflexes acting without conscious thought, the nezumi threw a formidable blow at
his carrot-headed opponent. With all his strength, all the bottled-up anger he'd
always held back, Yuki landed the punch on the advancing teen, striking him in
the chest, just to the left of his sternum. The neko stumbled backwards from the
contact, seeming winded and in shock. What the gray-haired attacker had not
anticipated was the result of such a move, as Kyou continued back only another
foot away from the mouse and tumbled off the moderately inclined roof. The
neko's wide-eyed and gently flailing fall seemed almost peaceful, and to Yuki's
surprise, the orange- haired shounen didn't even shout. Thumping into the grassy
earth, Yuki looked past the roof to see the other boy's motionless body heaped
on the vibrantly green lawn.
*** Steam rose softly off the freshly boiled tea. Tohru and Shigure sat
expectantly, waiting on the other residents of the secluded house. The gourmet
lunch slowly cooled on the table as the two stared out the open door leading
into the treeless area of yard. As if on cue, Kyou's form sailed past their
view, giving the appearance that he'd fallen from the sky like an angel. (HAAAA!
Kyou an angel?) The panic-prone brunette burst from her seat to the neko's
assistance. Once outside the house, Tohru could see the mouse still on the roof,
stunned. She'd seen them fight many times, but when had Yuki ever been this
aggressive? A foot away from the tanned boy's body, she stood, tense and afraid
to move or touch him; it may make the injuries worse.***
He knew he had to help. Still absolutely shocked at his actions, Yuki leaped
from the house, disregarding the distance to the ground. He hit the ground
heavily, and scrambled to the neko's side, shakily examining his cousin.
Unconscious, Kyou's body was a horrible sight, slumped carelessly and already
bruising. But what worried the nezumi most was the wet sound to his breathing;
it would only sound so if there were fluid in one's lungs. Upon closer
inspection, it was clear that a few ribs on the left were broken, and had likely
punctured his lung. 'I.I did this?' Yuki thought to himself, sitting motionless
in the grass. 'How could I get so carried away? Baka neko, he just wouldn't shut
up.'
