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me- sailor moon universe and the silver millennium
Chan ( my friend) - no duh!
Ok- to make myself clear, Serenity and Endymion haven't been born yet, Aurora is Queen Serenity's first child. I didn't know whether to post it here or somewhere else, but later on ill add Serenity and Endymion
Enjoy and please review, tell me about my writing style and how my story writing skills are, and what I can do to improve my writing
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Once they got to her room, Aurora shut the door and turned to the servant boy. "Okay who are you and why do you look exactly like the crown prince?"
"I have no clue what you're talking about." Although he denied it vehemently Aurora could tell he was lying.
She continued on as if he had never said a word. "In fact I would say you two were twins." At the word twins he flinched, but still denied it badly. A grin spread across her face. "If you don't meet my demands I will tell the whole kingdom about it." She grinned wickedly.
"Please I'll do anything you say, just please don't tell anyone that we're twins." The prince decided to throw himself at her mercy, hoping for the best.
Aurora smiles mischievously. "My first demand is that you give me your sword." He gives her a panicked look and interrupts her.
"I can't give you my sword, It's special!"
"Just get another one, the weaponsmaster promised to train me if I got a hold of a sword. Hmm. some comfortable clothes, boy clothes that would fit me, a serving girl's outfit from the Earth Palace. Unfortunately mother took all my comfy clothes and hid them from me. Oh yea I also need a safe haven to hang out in, your room should do nicely, and a lifetime supply of chocolate. I think that's all." She concluded looking thoughtfully. "And one more thing." The prince winced expecting another impossible demand. "What should I call you? If both you and your brother have the same name, you must call each other something else. You can just call me Aura."
He breathed a sigh of relief and grinned, grateful that this at least was easy. "Just call me Alex, and my brother is Andross, but I just call him Andy.." He grimaced at the thought of his brother. "Please, please, don't tell Andy, he'll kill me!!"
Aura looked thoughtful, but at his begging gave in. "Alright, only if you tell me why you're dressed like a servant." At his look of reluctance she decided to even the bargain. "In return I'll use my magic to help change your features, when you're not the prince." His eyes widened at the mention of magic but he didn't say anything.
"Fair enough. We have a special amulet that changes the wearer's hair to blond." At her look of impatience he hastily handed over the amulet and his sword and got on with his story. "Well from what I know my great grandfather was a twin. During his reign there was a civil war, a war between him and his brother for the throne, Mother and Father don't want that to ever happen again so they hid the fact that we're twins in hopes for peace." He trailed off. Then a mischievous smile crossed his face. "Let's seal the bargain with a kiss."
Aura stifled a laugh, and barely managed to keep a straight face. "Okay, close your eyes." When she was certain he had his eyes closed she opened her door and pushed him out slamming the door behind her and bursting into giggles. Alex stood dumfounded for a moment before banging on the door. Finally Aura opened the door for fear someone would hear. When she finally opened the door Alex leaned forward and kissed her on the check. Aura held her hand up to her check seemingly unable to say a word.
Alex broke the silence first. "Which way is it back to the meeting room?"
Aura just shut the door in his face again, and broke into hysterical laughter. Alex just shrugged and decided to turn right. Just then the door cracked open and Aura threw his amulet out at him, before promptly slamming the door again. Alex picked it up and put around his neck, then decided to wander around until he found someone familiar.
Eventually he ran straight into Andy knocking them both to the ground. Andy was not pleased and scolded Alex all the way home for getting lost and for "losing" his sword. After much internal debate Alex decided to ask Andy a question.
"Andy? I need your advice about something." At Andy's nod Alex continued. "Umm. while I was wondering around the palace I umm. kinda kissed a girl, on the check, but I'm not sure I should of. She slammed the door in my face." Alex trailed off with an apologetic expression on his face.
Andy had a horrified expression on his face. "You should never kiss any girl against their will, it is a grave sin. You must send her something to say you're sorry." He began in a lecturing tone. Alex sensed that Andy could and would drone on about this endlessly, so he hastily agreed with Andy and sat silently trying to think of what Aura would want that she hadn't already demanded.
Ok- to make myself clear, Serenity and Endymion haven't been born yet, Aurora is Queen Serenity's first child. I didn't know whether to post it here or somewhere else, but later on ill add Serenity and Endymion
Enjoy and please review, tell me about my writing style and how my story writing skills are, and what I can do to improve my writing
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Once they got to her room, Aurora shut the door and turned to the servant boy. "Okay who are you and why do you look exactly like the crown prince?"
"I have no clue what you're talking about." Although he denied it vehemently Aurora could tell he was lying.
She continued on as if he had never said a word. "In fact I would say you two were twins." At the word twins he flinched, but still denied it badly. A grin spread across her face. "If you don't meet my demands I will tell the whole kingdom about it." She grinned wickedly.
"Please I'll do anything you say, just please don't tell anyone that we're twins." The prince decided to throw himself at her mercy, hoping for the best.
Aurora smiles mischievously. "My first demand is that you give me your sword." He gives her a panicked look and interrupts her.
"I can't give you my sword, It's special!"
"Just get another one, the weaponsmaster promised to train me if I got a hold of a sword. Hmm. some comfortable clothes, boy clothes that would fit me, a serving girl's outfit from the Earth Palace. Unfortunately mother took all my comfy clothes and hid them from me. Oh yea I also need a safe haven to hang out in, your room should do nicely, and a lifetime supply of chocolate. I think that's all." She concluded looking thoughtfully. "And one more thing." The prince winced expecting another impossible demand. "What should I call you? If both you and your brother have the same name, you must call each other something else. You can just call me Aura."
He breathed a sigh of relief and grinned, grateful that this at least was easy. "Just call me Alex, and my brother is Andross, but I just call him Andy.." He grimaced at the thought of his brother. "Please, please, don't tell Andy, he'll kill me!!"
Aura looked thoughtful, but at his begging gave in. "Alright, only if you tell me why you're dressed like a servant." At his look of reluctance she decided to even the bargain. "In return I'll use my magic to help change your features, when you're not the prince." His eyes widened at the mention of magic but he didn't say anything.
"Fair enough. We have a special amulet that changes the wearer's hair to blond." At her look of impatience he hastily handed over the amulet and his sword and got on with his story. "Well from what I know my great grandfather was a twin. During his reign there was a civil war, a war between him and his brother for the throne, Mother and Father don't want that to ever happen again so they hid the fact that we're twins in hopes for peace." He trailed off. Then a mischievous smile crossed his face. "Let's seal the bargain with a kiss."
Aura stifled a laugh, and barely managed to keep a straight face. "Okay, close your eyes." When she was certain he had his eyes closed she opened her door and pushed him out slamming the door behind her and bursting into giggles. Alex stood dumfounded for a moment before banging on the door. Finally Aura opened the door for fear someone would hear. When she finally opened the door Alex leaned forward and kissed her on the check. Aura held her hand up to her check seemingly unable to say a word.
Alex broke the silence first. "Which way is it back to the meeting room?"
Aura just shut the door in his face again, and broke into hysterical laughter. Alex just shrugged and decided to turn right. Just then the door cracked open and Aura threw his amulet out at him, before promptly slamming the door again. Alex picked it up and put around his neck, then decided to wander around until he found someone familiar.
Eventually he ran straight into Andy knocking them both to the ground. Andy was not pleased and scolded Alex all the way home for getting lost and for "losing" his sword. After much internal debate Alex decided to ask Andy a question.
"Andy? I need your advice about something." At Andy's nod Alex continued. "Umm. while I was wondering around the palace I umm. kinda kissed a girl, on the check, but I'm not sure I should of. She slammed the door in my face." Alex trailed off with an apologetic expression on his face.
Andy had a horrified expression on his face. "You should never kiss any girl against their will, it is a grave sin. You must send her something to say you're sorry." He began in a lecturing tone. Alex sensed that Andy could and would drone on about this endlessly, so he hastily agreed with Andy and sat silently trying to think of what Aura would want that she hadn't already demanded.