A/n: I thank everyone who reviewed, but especially Prophetess of Hearts.
Your suggestions were helpful, and I decided to name it, Liam Hosea.
Does anyone want me to redo the prologue?
Disclaimer: Do I look Like Rowling to you? I do? Then why am I writing fanfiction?
Dedicated to paru/paul: He beta's things for me, after I post, but I do make corrections to things. He also reviews, even though I force him to read and review my stuff, right Paul!
Chapter 6: Harry's rescue
The redheaded man tiptoed up the pitch-black staircase. He moved with a silence learned from years dodging ancient curses. Step by step, he made his way up the stairs, until he reached the landing. Moving silently, he stepped on a creaky board, and heard it moan. Someone in the main bedroom must have heard the moan, because a light turned on and a shrill voice shrieked, "Vernon, go see if there is a thief in the house." A disgruntled voice answered, " Keep your hair on, I'm going, I'm going." Thinking quickly, the red-haired man muttered a charm to camouflage into the background. He would be like a chameleon that way. Moving with ease, he sneaked fast the abnormally large man, and made his way up to the second floor. "No one there Petunia, it was just your imagination." The large man then walked back up the stairs, mumbling about being woken in the middle of the night. The red-haired man laughed and cast a quick charm that would activate as soon as he left. The stairs would start to creak and moan as if someone was walking across them, yet no one would ever be seen.
The man moved slowly towards the hall, he noticed nothing wrong, but then heard a low cry from underneath him. He turned and ran down the stairs toward where the noise was coming from. HE stopped in front of a cupboard, and tried to open it. It was locked by about six different locks. HE whispered the unlocking curse again, and opened the door. He couldn't see, so he whispered Lumos. He was shocked terribly by what he saw. It was a young boy, with ebony hair, covered in blood and gore, and other, indefinably substances. He quickly cast charms to find out the extent of the boys injuries. The boy had broken, bruised, and cracked ribs; he was malnutrition, with a broken arm and leg. The worse thing though was that the boy was developing a cold, and with the condition the boy was in, it could turn into pneumonia at any time. He magically bound the boy's chest, and splinted his arms and legs. Picking him up, he noticed the scar, nearly covered in blood. "So, you are Harry Potter," he murmured to himself. "Well, not that you can hear me, my name is William Weasley, but you can call me Bill." Noticing the boy was shivering, he wrapped him in his cloak. On his way out, he resolved to come back and punish those people for what they would to a young child.
Walking out of the house, he summoned his motorcycle, and settled the boy onto it as carefully as possible. HE flew, literally, towards London, and Diagon Alley. When he arrived there, he got out and walked into the Three Broomsticks, where he asked for a room. While waiting for the key, he noticed, impassionedly, a blonde-haired lad entering the Three Broomsticks. "Here's you key Bill, third room on the left after going upstairs," Tom said to Bill. Bill took the key and didn't acknowledge Tom as he walked towards the stairway.
Reviewers:
Shinigami: Me, get in trouble on purpose, never. All will be explained in the next chapter or two.
Prophetess of Hearts: Thanks for the suggestions. Read the author note to find out which names I picked. I liked all the names. Thanks again.
Angel of Darkness: Thanks for letting me use your poem; I'll e-mail you when I get that chapter posted.
Jay: *blushes* Thank-you.
Nicky: All Shall Be Revealed.
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Does anyone want me to redo the prologue?
Disclaimer: Do I look Like Rowling to you? I do? Then why am I writing fanfiction?
Dedicated to paru/paul: He beta's things for me, after I post, but I do make corrections to things. He also reviews, even though I force him to read and review my stuff, right Paul!
Chapter 6: Harry's rescue
The redheaded man tiptoed up the pitch-black staircase. He moved with a silence learned from years dodging ancient curses. Step by step, he made his way up the stairs, until he reached the landing. Moving silently, he stepped on a creaky board, and heard it moan. Someone in the main bedroom must have heard the moan, because a light turned on and a shrill voice shrieked, "Vernon, go see if there is a thief in the house." A disgruntled voice answered, " Keep your hair on, I'm going, I'm going." Thinking quickly, the red-haired man muttered a charm to camouflage into the background. He would be like a chameleon that way. Moving with ease, he sneaked fast the abnormally large man, and made his way up to the second floor. "No one there Petunia, it was just your imagination." The large man then walked back up the stairs, mumbling about being woken in the middle of the night. The red-haired man laughed and cast a quick charm that would activate as soon as he left. The stairs would start to creak and moan as if someone was walking across them, yet no one would ever be seen.
The man moved slowly towards the hall, he noticed nothing wrong, but then heard a low cry from underneath him. He turned and ran down the stairs toward where the noise was coming from. HE stopped in front of a cupboard, and tried to open it. It was locked by about six different locks. HE whispered the unlocking curse again, and opened the door. He couldn't see, so he whispered Lumos. He was shocked terribly by what he saw. It was a young boy, with ebony hair, covered in blood and gore, and other, indefinably substances. He quickly cast charms to find out the extent of the boys injuries. The boy had broken, bruised, and cracked ribs; he was malnutrition, with a broken arm and leg. The worse thing though was that the boy was developing a cold, and with the condition the boy was in, it could turn into pneumonia at any time. He magically bound the boy's chest, and splinted his arms and legs. Picking him up, he noticed the scar, nearly covered in blood. "So, you are Harry Potter," he murmured to himself. "Well, not that you can hear me, my name is William Weasley, but you can call me Bill." Noticing the boy was shivering, he wrapped him in his cloak. On his way out, he resolved to come back and punish those people for what they would to a young child.
Walking out of the house, he summoned his motorcycle, and settled the boy onto it as carefully as possible. HE flew, literally, towards London, and Diagon Alley. When he arrived there, he got out and walked into the Three Broomsticks, where he asked for a room. While waiting for the key, he noticed, impassionedly, a blonde-haired lad entering the Three Broomsticks. "Here's you key Bill, third room on the left after going upstairs," Tom said to Bill. Bill took the key and didn't acknowledge Tom as he walked towards the stairway.
Reviewers:
Shinigami: Me, get in trouble on purpose, never. All will be explained in the next chapter or two.
Prophetess of Hearts: Thanks for the suggestions. Read the author note to find out which names I picked. I liked all the names. Thanks again.
Angel of Darkness: Thanks for letting me use your poem; I'll e-mail you when I get that chapter posted.
Jay: *blushes* Thank-you.
Nicky: All Shall Be Revealed.
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