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I'm Flames friend and I haven't sign up for fanfiction yet so this is my first fanfic my name is *~Blue_Sakura~*, so please give me some suggestions after you've read it. It's about a charactor that I've made up. You'll learn more about her when you read. She kind of takes up Mariah's place, but not really.
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It was a cool day, at dawn. Jessica was just sitting on
her usuall thinking spot. It's a little cliff where she
could see both when the sun rises and when it goes down.
She could still remember herself and Ray sitting
together, while the her mom was calling her for diner.
They saw the sun setting together. Jessica sighed. How
she wishes that she could have the preciouse moment
back.A tear rolled down her cheek.Her black hair blown
by the wind. It wasn't that chilly, but Jessica
shivered. She found out that Ray was here, in China, her
hometown for the Asian tornament. She knew that long
ago. After all, she had been in Japan with Ray, seeing
him batteling against Tyson. She even gave a few tips to
Tyson. You see, after Ray left the White Tigers, Jessica
went out searching for him. Found him at last, but only
to lose him to the Bladebreakers again.
Jessica took off her bandanna and touched it gently. As
she did, her hair flew behind her. Another tear trickled
down her cheek. She sighed, remembering the time when
Ray gave the bandanna to her. He was always so kind to
me, she thought, I'll never understand why he left us.
The sunset was so beautiful, as it seems to Jessica.
"Jessica! JESSICA!!" someone called from down the
cliff," come down here NOW!" Jessica looked down, and
saw Lee looking up at her. "What are you doing?!" Lee
called up," day dreaming again?!" "SORRY," Jessica
yelled, " I couldn't help it!" She put her bandanna back
on again and jumped down the cliff. " You know that
since Ray left, you were not to go on the cliff again,
remember?!" Lee said angrily as Jessica go to the
bottom. He glared at her.
So how was it? Remember, write me reviews and please no flaming! Thanks for reading!
I'm Flames friend and I haven't sign up for fanfiction yet so this is my first fanfic my name is *~Blue_Sakura~*, so please give me some suggestions after you've read it. It's about a charactor that I've made up. You'll learn more about her when you read. She kind of takes up Mariah's place, but not really.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
It was a cool day, at dawn. Jessica was just sitting on
her usuall thinking spot. It's a little cliff where she
could see both when the sun rises and when it goes down.
She could still remember herself and Ray sitting
together, while the her mom was calling her for diner.
They saw the sun setting together. Jessica sighed. How
she wishes that she could have the preciouse moment
back.A tear rolled down her cheek.Her black hair blown
by the wind. It wasn't that chilly, but Jessica
shivered. She found out that Ray was here, in China, her
hometown for the Asian tornament. She knew that long
ago. After all, she had been in Japan with Ray, seeing
him batteling against Tyson. She even gave a few tips to
Tyson. You see, after Ray left the White Tigers, Jessica
went out searching for him. Found him at last, but only
to lose him to the Bladebreakers again.
Jessica took off her bandanna and touched it gently. As
she did, her hair flew behind her. Another tear trickled
down her cheek. She sighed, remembering the time when
Ray gave the bandanna to her. He was always so kind to
me, she thought, I'll never understand why he left us.
The sunset was so beautiful, as it seems to Jessica.
"Jessica! JESSICA!!" someone called from down the
cliff," come down here NOW!" Jessica looked down, and
saw Lee looking up at her. "What are you doing?!" Lee
called up," day dreaming again?!" "SORRY," Jessica
yelled, " I couldn't help it!" She put her bandanna back
on again and jumped down the cliff. " You know that
since Ray left, you were not to go on the cliff again,
remember?!" Lee said angrily as Jessica go to the
bottom. He glared at her.
So how was it? Remember, write me reviews and please no flaming! Thanks for reading!