A/N: hey hey! I'm back. (woohoo?) after an extremely long hiatus of writing, i decided it was time to get my butt into gear and continue with this story. I apologize for this short chapter... but my muse left me to go on a very long vacation. i'm not having an easy time trying to end this fic without making it seem abrupt or whatever. in all honesty, i'm trying to finish this only becuz of prompting from a friend. :) you know who you are...(no matter what you say i didn't corrupt you... :P)
anywho, i really don't know what to do with this story... suggestions would be appreciated! now back to the story... remember MAX = Max Evans and Max = Max Guevara
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Liz coughed, trying to clear her throat from all the dust she had inhaled. The weight on her back was heavy and didn't move.
"MAX." She turned her head to see MAX's eyes closed while his arms were still around her. Pushing herself out of his grasp she sat up and held his still body.
"MAX??? Answer me!" ....
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Liz frantically tried to wake MAX up. Please God, don't let him die on me. She silently prayed. Max had already begun to bring the others to safety while Liz continued to struggle to lift MAX. "Common MAX, I'm not strong enough to carry you out. Please wake up." She pleaded. Suddenly his weight seemed lighter as she lifted him, not realizing that she wasn't lifting MAX anymore. It was the stranger who had saved them all from Kivar. Liz's mouth gaped wide open as she saw the woman lift MAX without even breaking a sweat. She stood up to help Micheal and the others when she noticed that they weren't even in the broken down room anymore.
Once Max laid MAX safely onto the ground she stood there watching him. This can't be happening again. I didn't go back for things to turn out exactly the same way! The thought of losing Logan, AGAIN, was almost too much for her to handle. She dropped to her knees as unwanted tears stained her face. She gently shook MAX, hoping, praying for him to be alright. Liz walked towards them, confusion written all over her face.
Suddenly, Max felt something eerily strange. Her head started to spin and she felt herself being transported to a dream-like state. Images upon images flashed in her head. She felt as if she was seeing through someone else's eyes. She found herself suddenly confined in some strange shell. She saw the shell break open and felt the person's initial fear of the unknown. She saw a little girl covered in a slime reach out her hand. She felt at peace suddenly. She felt the sadness when the little boy with spikey hair didn't reach for her hand. The panic and fear when two bright lights blinded her. She saw a little girl in the schoolyard, laughing and talking with her friend. She saw a fight break out in that restaurant she had been to. She saw the gun, heard the shot being fired. But she couldn't move to stop it. She felt the person's feeling of hopelessness as the scene unfolded in slow motion. She felt herself running towards the young Liz. She felt her hand being placed over Liz's heart and a strange tingling feeling ran throughout her entire body. She could feel the person's love for Liz. The silent love that had went unsaid for too long. Then, as quickly as the images had begun to flood her, they disappeared. And she found herself staring into the eyes of MAX. She probably would have continued to stare at him until he broke the silence.
"You're not human?"
TBC...
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see, i told you it was short. sorries. anywho. please review. i know that these words were all just thrown onto this page in some jumbled disorganized mess and prolly includes a whole lotta errors... so please be gentle. I'll prolly end up fixing this chapter anywayz... member, flames burn but constructive criticism doesn't. feedback is always appreciated.
anywho, i really don't know what to do with this story... suggestions would be appreciated! now back to the story... remember MAX = Max Evans and Max = Max Guevara
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Liz coughed, trying to clear her throat from all the dust she had inhaled. The weight on her back was heavy and didn't move.
"MAX." She turned her head to see MAX's eyes closed while his arms were still around her. Pushing herself out of his grasp she sat up and held his still body.
"MAX??? Answer me!" ....
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Liz frantically tried to wake MAX up. Please God, don't let him die on me. She silently prayed. Max had already begun to bring the others to safety while Liz continued to struggle to lift MAX. "Common MAX, I'm not strong enough to carry you out. Please wake up." She pleaded. Suddenly his weight seemed lighter as she lifted him, not realizing that she wasn't lifting MAX anymore. It was the stranger who had saved them all from Kivar. Liz's mouth gaped wide open as she saw the woman lift MAX without even breaking a sweat. She stood up to help Micheal and the others when she noticed that they weren't even in the broken down room anymore.
Once Max laid MAX safely onto the ground she stood there watching him. This can't be happening again. I didn't go back for things to turn out exactly the same way! The thought of losing Logan, AGAIN, was almost too much for her to handle. She dropped to her knees as unwanted tears stained her face. She gently shook MAX, hoping, praying for him to be alright. Liz walked towards them, confusion written all over her face.
Suddenly, Max felt something eerily strange. Her head started to spin and she felt herself being transported to a dream-like state. Images upon images flashed in her head. She felt as if she was seeing through someone else's eyes. She found herself suddenly confined in some strange shell. She saw the shell break open and felt the person's initial fear of the unknown. She saw a little girl covered in a slime reach out her hand. She felt at peace suddenly. She felt the sadness when the little boy with spikey hair didn't reach for her hand. The panic and fear when two bright lights blinded her. She saw a little girl in the schoolyard, laughing and talking with her friend. She saw a fight break out in that restaurant she had been to. She saw the gun, heard the shot being fired. But she couldn't move to stop it. She felt the person's feeling of hopelessness as the scene unfolded in slow motion. She felt herself running towards the young Liz. She felt her hand being placed over Liz's heart and a strange tingling feeling ran throughout her entire body. She could feel the person's love for Liz. The silent love that had went unsaid for too long. Then, as quickly as the images had begun to flood her, they disappeared. And she found herself staring into the eyes of MAX. She probably would have continued to stare at him until he broke the silence.
"You're not human?"
TBC...
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see, i told you it was short. sorries. anywho. please review. i know that these words were all just thrown onto this page in some jumbled disorganized mess and prolly includes a whole lotta errors... so please be gentle. I'll prolly end up fixing this chapter anywayz... member, flames burn but constructive criticism doesn't. feedback is always appreciated.