Sorry if there are out of character this is my first fanfic. So do you like it so far? Tell me please I would like to now if I should improve a little some or should I stay the same. I'm sorry if they're a little off character, this is my first fanfic you now.
I killed Goku mwahaha! Wait a second, I killed Goku, why did I killed him he was one of my favorites, not my most, but still a fav.
Just in case your thinking things like, so what if Goku died they can still wish him back with the Dragon Balls. All I got to say to that is NO THEY CAN'T because they don't have the dragon radar and it would be really, really, really, really hard to find all the Dragon Balls without it. They also can't get the radar because Bulma also went into hiding because of the horrible army spreading everywhere. Neomail me if you go to Neopets.com; my name is mage_of_mindWell bye until next time.
Please review it really counts.
Hello again! :) I forgot to tell you that I divided my prologue in two sense I barely get time on the computer, so the next thing you'll read will be prologue part two. Sorry if this part is shorter than my last, which was also pretty short.
Disclaimer: *Sniff* No I don't own DBZ, *Sniff* but someday I might, so cross your fingers for me okay.
Enjoy the fic!
"Gohan come back, please!" Chichi let a taer slide down her cheek. He's going to lose; he's not strong enough yet. If I don't go after him right now I will lose my baby forever like Goku. I can't have that! Chichi jumped out of her hiding place still holding the snoring baby Gohan.
She slipped Goten into a well-hidden shallow hole then ran as fast as she could in the direction of Gohan. Gohan looks as if he might win, but so did Goku. With that thought Chichi quickened her pace.
Gohan kicked one of the Vice reaching out to punching him, a sickening crack echoed everywhere into the city. Gohan almost lost it when he saw the Vice's head slowly tear off. Gohan wouldn't get sick by this, his dad wouldn't. (I don't really think Goku ever did that; oh well)
Gohan couldn't help, but watch as the Vice slowly fell onto his knees, then fell forward. Gohan shudder at the empty eyes staring blankly up at him from the head lying next to the leg of the headless, of course, Vice. Before he could recover from the incredibly ugly sit he felt something grab his right arm and another someone grab his left arm and pin him into the ground.
Gohan struggled under the pressure put on to both of his arms succeeding in only lifting his arms two inches from the rocky surface. Looking up to his two captors he saw two purple and white masks. The Vice holding his right arm came closer to Gohan's face.
"You killed my brother, squirt, so I have to make you suffer." The Vice spat at Gohan's face.
Gohan scrunched his nose. His breath smells really bad, maybe I should tell him that. Before Gohan could say anything though a small sting came to his side and his whole body suddenly become paralyze.
"Before I began my fun I first had to paralyze you so there wouldn't be anyway you could fight back and also that you're very much helpless." The Vice slipped his mask off showing green bumpy skin, two beady eyes and one slit as a nose. (He's free to date; anyone wants him? You can have him I don't want him.) The Vice stood up on his legs and smiled before kicking in the side of his stomach. Even if I didn't beat them dad at least I'll get to see you again was all the defenseless Gohan could think of as his body rolled over rumble from long time destroyed buildings.
Oh no they touched my baby with that stupid paralyzing machine. (I don't know what to call it, so why should she?) Got to hurry up can't let Gohan die; can't let Goten die without an older brother to look up to! Chichi watch in silent horror as Gohan was punched and kicked around, leaving pools of blood everywhere he touched. Chichi could see it on the ugly green freak that he was quickly getting bored with her son with every passing second he pushed Gohan around.
"I'm tired of this game I might as well kill you now." Chichi heard the Vice say as he left his hand up and start forming an energy ball. Please no not yet! I'm almost there; only a few steps more. "Game over kid. You los-"
"Noooo!" Chichi kicked the Vice with all her power into a glass window of a torn up window. She hastily grabbed Gohan and ran for it to the spot she had hid Goten. She didn't notice the other Vice pull out a gun and shoot it at the loving mom.
Chichi winced at the sting in her neck and the pain spreading from it. Her body started felling weaker and her speed started to lower. Her heart jumped with joy when she was finally a few yards from the shallow and well-hidden crevice. She threw Gohan softly into the hole as her leg gave away from under her. She landed face forward onto the ground only her eyes in the view of Gohan in the hole.
I love you. Chichi thought hopping the message reached her son. She sadly watch tears leak down Gohan's paralyzed face. Chichi's fell into the hole next to Goten's soft sleeping body. Chichi started feeling dizzy as something picked her up.
"I found the women, but can't see the other anywhere near." Chichi heard someone say.
"The parellyzation probably already worn off. That's okay we'll meet up with him one day." Another voice said.
Good they wont find them they wont find my babies. Then everything went black.
Well that was kind of sad. *Sniff*
Please review or I'll…I'll…I will do something, but I haven't figure it out yet, so hold on a sec.