THE DAYSTAR
BY: GABRIELLA THE FAIR
Chapter 25
TEACH ME TO DANCE
"What was she like, how would you explain her?" With a faraway smile, he looked up to the sky and answered, "She was the Daystar, lighting up the day during our darkest hour, warming the earth with her love." "She is as clear as the moon, as fair as the sun, and as glorious as an army under one banner"
To most she was a loving friend, her fairness lighting up the world, no matter what the weather. To some a companion, and one a lover and dream. Yet, many feared her dignity in her footsteps, power in her stride, and authority in her eyes. This is her story.
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"I will paddle now, Legolas."
"No, I am fine." Legolas said, his arms putting down the paddle as Aragorn called a break. Raquel sat in front of him, on the floor. In front of her sat Gimli, who slept soundly with little snores every now and then. It was the seventh day of their journey and their wasn't much conversation coming from any of the boats. Raquel and Legolas had taken turns paddling the boat, though Legolas was very reluctant to let Raquel paddle.
"No, really, I will, you need a break." she said, looking up at him. He only shook his head.
"Fine be stubborn." she muttered, laying her head down on his knee. She muttered something else in Elvish. He smiled and bent down, whispering.
"Tomorrow you can paddle, happy?"
"O yes, very." she said, sleepily.
Deciding to sleep while she can, she repositioned her head on his knee and fell asleep. The last thing she remembered was feeling Legolas kiss her softly on the top of her head. She smiled and let herself fall into a deep sleep.
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"Frodo what is wrong, why is Sting drawn?"
"Someone is out there." Frodo whispered to Raquel, looking up at her. She had just appeared out of the shadows, surprised by the sudden sound of a sword being drawn. It was the same night, and they had decided to camp. Frodo had taken watch. Raquel looked to the River and walked soundlessly to it.
"Frodo, what is going on, where is Raquel?" Aragorn jumped up, woken up also from the cold sound of Sting.
"I am right here, and noting is going on, unless you count a log with eyes is following us." she appeared again as she did before, not seeming to be seen clearly unless she was right in front of Frodo.
"Otherwise known as Gollum." Raquel tilted her head to the side and turned it towards the River. "Even now he retreats, he knows I have found him." she whispered, listening to splashes that only an Elven ear would pick up.
"Gollum." Aragorn sighed, "I have been tracking him and trying to catch him, though he is sly." he turned to them, "Go, both of you, get some rest, I will take over watch."
They both left without any further words, Frodo going to his sleeping stuff.
"Do not worry Frodo, no harm will come to you, I will make sure of that. Rest in peace." she said to him softly, smiling lightly as she did. Frodo noticed that Sunstone was around her waist, even at night. Before falling asleep Frodo saw Raquel sitting a little ways off, Sunstone in one hand, and a leaf package held to her heart.
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That night passed without any signs of Gollum near. They started the next morning, and continued on until mid afternoon. Sam looked up,
"Look, Strider, look at all the birds!"
Aragorn looked up and saw birds circling above them, black crows. Raquel took her eyes off the paddling and looked up to the sky. Black crows circled the air above them, leaving in lines. Aragorn called a halt, staring hard at the birds. The Company set up a small camp, and everyone talked quietly.
"Raquel, Legolas, come here, what is that?" Aragorn shouted to the Elves. Raquel walked over to him, Legolas following.
"It is an eagle, a hunting eagle." Legolas said.
"And it is far from the mountains, what is it doing here?" Raquel said, turning to Aragorn and Legolas.
"We will not start until nightfall." Aragorn said, never taking his eyes off the sky.
It was dark when the Company started again, Raquel paddled. She had an uneasy feeling of the shores.
"Legolas, I do not like the feeling of these shores." she whispered, bending down to him. He nodded.
"Neither do I." he put a hand on her leg and gave her a little reassuring squeeze, thought his grip was a bit weak.
"What is it that troubles both he and I?" she wondered to herself, looking at him as his eyes darted from shore to shore.
Sam was given the task of watchmen since he was in the leading boat. After a few minutes he gave out a cry.
"O, there Aragorn, hoy!" Boromir's boat gently bumped into Aragorn's.
"Turn, everyone! The rapids are in front of us! I am out of my reasoning, I thought we were half a day away from these." he whispered the last part to Frodo and Sam.
"Turn, Raquel, turn!" Boromir called.
Raquel took the paddle and plunged it into the sand beneath the boat, pushing it with all her strength. Legolas took up the other paddle, helping as much as he could.
"Ahhh!!!" Frodo shouted from behind. Arrows whizzed by them, hitting Frodo in the chest, but bouncing off his hidden treasure and landing on the floor of the boat. More arrows flew by, getting Aragorn through the hood and Merry by the hand.
"Yrch!" both Raquel and Legolas fell into their own tongue.
"Orcs!" Gimli said.
"Raquel!" Legolas shouted in her ear, "I will paddle, you get your bow!" she nodded and brought out her already strung bow. She fell three before she felt the crunch of earth below the boats. They had to push themselves up there to escape the rapids.
"They trapped us!" Raquel said to Legolas, before shooting another Orc.
"I know, keep shooting!" he pushed again.
She shot five more until they reached a shore. Legolas brought the boat by it and laid down the paddle, jumping out. Raquel followed. They walked silently up the bank and a few feet away from that. Legolas stopped and Raquel did the same.
"What do you see?" Legolas asked, Raquel closed her eyes. He looked at her slightly, "Open your eyes Raquel!"
"The.sky, its something in the sky."
"What is it?" he asked.
"Cold, its dreadfully cold, and evil, yes, extremely evil." she whispered, shuddering as she opened her eyes. She shivered.
"Elbrereth Gilthoniel!" Legolas sighed. Raquel looked up in the direction he was. A dark cloud hovered in the sky, blacker than night itself. It got bigger as it got closer to the Elves.
"Raquel, your bow!" Legolas drew his up, Raquel followed, her arms shaking. She concentrated, sweat appearing on her forehead. Her whole body quaked from the shivering. From the boat, Frodo gave a short cry, clutching his old wound. He bowed his head as if in hiding. The thing got closer, and Raquel put an arrow to the string. A soft hissing came from the "thing".
"Come with us, she-elf, he calls for you!" it said. Raquel looked up with fear stricken eyes. Legolas stared in utter despair, "He wants you, come, come with us!"
"Never! I do not fear you!" she yelled, shooting her arrow at the creature, Legolas following her example.
The bows of Lorien sang, flying through the air. It struck the thing, it swerved and landed on the ground with a tremendous thud. Raquel stared and watched, but Legolas pulled her to the boat.
"Come on Raquel, we must go." he shoved her into the boat and took up the paddle.
"Praise be to the bow of the Galadrim, Lady Raquel and Legolas!" Gimli said, eating a piece of lembas. "That was a great shoot my friends." They sat in the boats on the western shore. The Orcs and the foul thing were across the way.
"But the question is, what did it hit?" Legolas said, Raquel was utterly quiet.
"I do not know, and I wish not to. It felt evil, like the Balrog." Gimli said, shuddering.
"No, It was not a Balrog, it was to cold. It was more like.like, well I don't want to say." Frodo whispered. Raquel looked at him, her eyes narrowed.
"Well, let us rest right now, we will stay here in the boats and start tomorrow morning. Have your weapons close at hand. What will the day reveal to us?" he turned in his boat and laid down. Everyone slowly drifted off to sleep and did not hear Raquel leave, except one.
"What is wrong?" Legolas came and sat next to Raquel. They were away from the camp, but still in hearing distance if something were to happen.
"I miss Lothlorien." she whispered.
"Yes, I know that, but what is really wrong?" he asked, pressing the question.
"I know what that thing was, and I dislike it all the more." Raquel turned away.
"Yes, I know, I hate them too." Legolas' face hardened.
"Hate?" Raquel looked to Legolas, her eyes questioning, "You can hate nothing, it is not possible, you may hate the outcomes, but you may not hate anything. It is a strong word and can only be used wisely, Legolas. Do not be so quick to use it."
Both were quiet for awhile, Raquel let out a sigh.
"Raquel, tell me what is wrong! You will not tell me." he said.
"Legolas, like I said, I know what those things were. They were the Nazgul, and they."
"What?"
"I knew they would seek me out, but I did not expect them to seek me out. They said he wanted me." she stopped, "I am very scared, I do not know what to do." she dropped her head in her hands.
"Raquel, they will never get you." Legolas said softly, running his hand through her hair.
"And how can you be so sure?" she asked, then stopped and noticed her choice of words. She spoke softly, "Wait, last time I used these words you told me something I will never forget. Now what will you tell me?"
"That I would fight and die knowing that I tried to save you."
"And what makes you think I cannot save myself?" she asked, raising her brows slightly.
"Everybody needs somebody Raquel, even you," Legolas smiled as she closed her eyes. "You are the most independent person I know, but you must let go of that sometimes. Lean on someone else for a change."
"But, it is so hard Legolas." she whispered.
"You know you want to." he whispered in her ear like he did the one night in Lorien, "Just admit it, you like it."
"Fine, but must you rub it in?" she looked up at him and gave a little smile.
"No, I meant nothing of the sort." he stared at her and she laughed, getting up and running away.
"Raquel! Where are you going?" he hesitated, but got up and ran after her. She got ahead of him and he lost sight of her, but found her after a few minutes some ways ahead. She had Sunstone out and was doing a sword dance. He stopped and stared from a distance. It was like she was dancing, a rhythm and beat in her step as she slashed her sword. Legolas stared in awe as she weaved her way in and out of the dances, ducking and stepping. She stopped.
"So, you came." she looked up at Legolas smiling, "Come, will you join me?" she stepped toward him and swung Sunstone around, silver streaking through her smile. He went toward her and she took his hand.
"Come on, what is wrong, I will not hurt you!" she laughed and pulled him toward the spot she was dancing at.
"Raquel wait." she stopped and looked at him, "I have a request."
"Yes, what is it?"
"When you can, when time allows, will you teach me to dance?" he asked.
She smiled, "Of course." she mocked bowed to him, "It would be an honor, my Prince." she stayed on the ground, her smile showing, even though she bowed her head. He bent down next to her,
"Well I look forward to the day that you and I can be at peace." her smiled faded and a sense of reality came over her. She closed her eyes sleepily and let weariness flow over her.
"Sleep, Raquel, do not let evil control you." he brushed a hand across her cheek. "You need not hide your weariness anymore."
She sighed, letting her head fall to his shoulder.
"Finally, you have overcome it." he whispered, picking her up.
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"Legolas, what is wrong with her?"
"Nothing, she just sleeps." Legolas laid her down in the boat and covered her with a blanket. Aragorn stood beside him.
"What do you mean?" Aragorn asked
"She has not slept since we left Lorien, she would not let herself. Finally she has." he stared at her and turned to Aragorn.
"I will not ask how you know this or why, but I thank you for finally brining peace to my sister, she has needed it for a long time and will need it in the future."
"What do you mean by that Aragorn?"
"She has not had many chances at peace in her life Legolas, but now she does, and I am glad that you can give it to her." Legolas looked at Raquel sleeping.
"She seems so peaceful." Legolas said, "Though I know it is not true, she hides it, I am amazed at how she can control her feelings so."
"Yes, and please, do not hurt her, she does not need more disappointment in her life."
"I would never do that, Aragorn."
"I know, but if you did I would have to join Haldir and hunt you down, utterly destroying you in any way possible." he gave his friend a soft clap on the shoulder and left to go back to sleep. Legolas shook his head, laying down himself.
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so how was it? pleaz tell me if this is turning into a mary-sue! I haven't really gotten any criticism and its kinda scarin me cuz I know there has to be something wrong with this story. I haven't really even gotten a flame, and I feel that I need some sort of somethin like thatpleaz.im beggin u if theres anything at all tell me, I want ur input. im scared this is turning into a sappy mary-sue, but who would kno better than me? YOU! so tell me! anywho, next chapter-let me write it! thanx to everyone who reviewed-
Rachael- thanx, u don't know how much that meant to me, since I really want to be an artist or author when I grow up! its nice to hear that people actually like my stuff! thanx again!
Elena- as usual, thanx, u've really been great, reviewing and all. I hope u keep reading, even if its not my fics!
mermaid-yea, I wish I could get the original draft back! anywho, thanx, I hope u keep reading, cuz its only gonna get better and better (I hope! lol)
Orli_Lover- thanx, I don't want this romance to go to fast, and on some things im not sure. like I said, I don't want this to become a sappy mary- sue! Yea, I luv pippin, cuz he's jus like me if id be in the fellowship, a klutz, but definitely not as cute as him! thanx again, have a great day!
Roxy angel-thanx, im glad u like the story, keep readin!
again guys, ur support is awesome. anywho, I gtg, have a good day!
*~*~*Gabi*~*~*
"What was she like, how would you explain her?" With a faraway smile, he looked up to the sky and answered, "She was the Daystar, lighting up the day during our darkest hour, warming the earth with her love." "She is as clear as the moon, as fair as the sun, and as glorious as an army under one banner"
To most she was a loving friend, her fairness lighting up the world, no matter what the weather. To some a companion, and one a lover and dream. Yet, many feared her dignity in her footsteps, power in her stride, and authority in her eyes. This is her story.
INEEDBORDERSINEEDBORDERSINEEDBORDERSINEEDBORDERSINEEDBORDERSINEEDBORDERS
"I will paddle now, Legolas."
"No, I am fine." Legolas said, his arms putting down the paddle as Aragorn called a break. Raquel sat in front of him, on the floor. In front of her sat Gimli, who slept soundly with little snores every now and then. It was the seventh day of their journey and their wasn't much conversation coming from any of the boats. Raquel and Legolas had taken turns paddling the boat, though Legolas was very reluctant to let Raquel paddle.
"No, really, I will, you need a break." she said, looking up at him. He only shook his head.
"Fine be stubborn." she muttered, laying her head down on his knee. She muttered something else in Elvish. He smiled and bent down, whispering.
"Tomorrow you can paddle, happy?"
"O yes, very." she said, sleepily.
Deciding to sleep while she can, she repositioned her head on his knee and fell asleep. The last thing she remembered was feeling Legolas kiss her softly on the top of her head. She smiled and let herself fall into a deep sleep.
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"Frodo what is wrong, why is Sting drawn?"
"Someone is out there." Frodo whispered to Raquel, looking up at her. She had just appeared out of the shadows, surprised by the sudden sound of a sword being drawn. It was the same night, and they had decided to camp. Frodo had taken watch. Raquel looked to the River and walked soundlessly to it.
"Frodo, what is going on, where is Raquel?" Aragorn jumped up, woken up also from the cold sound of Sting.
"I am right here, and noting is going on, unless you count a log with eyes is following us." she appeared again as she did before, not seeming to be seen clearly unless she was right in front of Frodo.
"Otherwise known as Gollum." Raquel tilted her head to the side and turned it towards the River. "Even now he retreats, he knows I have found him." she whispered, listening to splashes that only an Elven ear would pick up.
"Gollum." Aragorn sighed, "I have been tracking him and trying to catch him, though he is sly." he turned to them, "Go, both of you, get some rest, I will take over watch."
They both left without any further words, Frodo going to his sleeping stuff.
"Do not worry Frodo, no harm will come to you, I will make sure of that. Rest in peace." she said to him softly, smiling lightly as she did. Frodo noticed that Sunstone was around her waist, even at night. Before falling asleep Frodo saw Raquel sitting a little ways off, Sunstone in one hand, and a leaf package held to her heart.
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That night passed without any signs of Gollum near. They started the next morning, and continued on until mid afternoon. Sam looked up,
"Look, Strider, look at all the birds!"
Aragorn looked up and saw birds circling above them, black crows. Raquel took her eyes off the paddling and looked up to the sky. Black crows circled the air above them, leaving in lines. Aragorn called a halt, staring hard at the birds. The Company set up a small camp, and everyone talked quietly.
"Raquel, Legolas, come here, what is that?" Aragorn shouted to the Elves. Raquel walked over to him, Legolas following.
"It is an eagle, a hunting eagle." Legolas said.
"And it is far from the mountains, what is it doing here?" Raquel said, turning to Aragorn and Legolas.
"We will not start until nightfall." Aragorn said, never taking his eyes off the sky.
It was dark when the Company started again, Raquel paddled. She had an uneasy feeling of the shores.
"Legolas, I do not like the feeling of these shores." she whispered, bending down to him. He nodded.
"Neither do I." he put a hand on her leg and gave her a little reassuring squeeze, thought his grip was a bit weak.
"What is it that troubles both he and I?" she wondered to herself, looking at him as his eyes darted from shore to shore.
Sam was given the task of watchmen since he was in the leading boat. After a few minutes he gave out a cry.
"O, there Aragorn, hoy!" Boromir's boat gently bumped into Aragorn's.
"Turn, everyone! The rapids are in front of us! I am out of my reasoning, I thought we were half a day away from these." he whispered the last part to Frodo and Sam.
"Turn, Raquel, turn!" Boromir called.
Raquel took the paddle and plunged it into the sand beneath the boat, pushing it with all her strength. Legolas took up the other paddle, helping as much as he could.
"Ahhh!!!" Frodo shouted from behind. Arrows whizzed by them, hitting Frodo in the chest, but bouncing off his hidden treasure and landing on the floor of the boat. More arrows flew by, getting Aragorn through the hood and Merry by the hand.
"Yrch!" both Raquel and Legolas fell into their own tongue.
"Orcs!" Gimli said.
"Raquel!" Legolas shouted in her ear, "I will paddle, you get your bow!" she nodded and brought out her already strung bow. She fell three before she felt the crunch of earth below the boats. They had to push themselves up there to escape the rapids.
"They trapped us!" Raquel said to Legolas, before shooting another Orc.
"I know, keep shooting!" he pushed again.
She shot five more until they reached a shore. Legolas brought the boat by it and laid down the paddle, jumping out. Raquel followed. They walked silently up the bank and a few feet away from that. Legolas stopped and Raquel did the same.
"What do you see?" Legolas asked, Raquel closed her eyes. He looked at her slightly, "Open your eyes Raquel!"
"The.sky, its something in the sky."
"What is it?" he asked.
"Cold, its dreadfully cold, and evil, yes, extremely evil." she whispered, shuddering as she opened her eyes. She shivered.
"Elbrereth Gilthoniel!" Legolas sighed. Raquel looked up in the direction he was. A dark cloud hovered in the sky, blacker than night itself. It got bigger as it got closer to the Elves.
"Raquel, your bow!" Legolas drew his up, Raquel followed, her arms shaking. She concentrated, sweat appearing on her forehead. Her whole body quaked from the shivering. From the boat, Frodo gave a short cry, clutching his old wound. He bowed his head as if in hiding. The thing got closer, and Raquel put an arrow to the string. A soft hissing came from the "thing".
"Come with us, she-elf, he calls for you!" it said. Raquel looked up with fear stricken eyes. Legolas stared in utter despair, "He wants you, come, come with us!"
"Never! I do not fear you!" she yelled, shooting her arrow at the creature, Legolas following her example.
The bows of Lorien sang, flying through the air. It struck the thing, it swerved and landed on the ground with a tremendous thud. Raquel stared and watched, but Legolas pulled her to the boat.
"Come on Raquel, we must go." he shoved her into the boat and took up the paddle.
"Praise be to the bow of the Galadrim, Lady Raquel and Legolas!" Gimli said, eating a piece of lembas. "That was a great shoot my friends." They sat in the boats on the western shore. The Orcs and the foul thing were across the way.
"But the question is, what did it hit?" Legolas said, Raquel was utterly quiet.
"I do not know, and I wish not to. It felt evil, like the Balrog." Gimli said, shuddering.
"No, It was not a Balrog, it was to cold. It was more like.like, well I don't want to say." Frodo whispered. Raquel looked at him, her eyes narrowed.
"Well, let us rest right now, we will stay here in the boats and start tomorrow morning. Have your weapons close at hand. What will the day reveal to us?" he turned in his boat and laid down. Everyone slowly drifted off to sleep and did not hear Raquel leave, except one.
"What is wrong?" Legolas came and sat next to Raquel. They were away from the camp, but still in hearing distance if something were to happen.
"I miss Lothlorien." she whispered.
"Yes, I know that, but what is really wrong?" he asked, pressing the question.
"I know what that thing was, and I dislike it all the more." Raquel turned away.
"Yes, I know, I hate them too." Legolas' face hardened.
"Hate?" Raquel looked to Legolas, her eyes questioning, "You can hate nothing, it is not possible, you may hate the outcomes, but you may not hate anything. It is a strong word and can only be used wisely, Legolas. Do not be so quick to use it."
Both were quiet for awhile, Raquel let out a sigh.
"Raquel, tell me what is wrong! You will not tell me." he said.
"Legolas, like I said, I know what those things were. They were the Nazgul, and they."
"What?"
"I knew they would seek me out, but I did not expect them to seek me out. They said he wanted me." she stopped, "I am very scared, I do not know what to do." she dropped her head in her hands.
"Raquel, they will never get you." Legolas said softly, running his hand through her hair.
"And how can you be so sure?" she asked, then stopped and noticed her choice of words. She spoke softly, "Wait, last time I used these words you told me something I will never forget. Now what will you tell me?"
"That I would fight and die knowing that I tried to save you."
"And what makes you think I cannot save myself?" she asked, raising her brows slightly.
"Everybody needs somebody Raquel, even you," Legolas smiled as she closed her eyes. "You are the most independent person I know, but you must let go of that sometimes. Lean on someone else for a change."
"But, it is so hard Legolas." she whispered.
"You know you want to." he whispered in her ear like he did the one night in Lorien, "Just admit it, you like it."
"Fine, but must you rub it in?" she looked up at him and gave a little smile.
"No, I meant nothing of the sort." he stared at her and she laughed, getting up and running away.
"Raquel! Where are you going?" he hesitated, but got up and ran after her. She got ahead of him and he lost sight of her, but found her after a few minutes some ways ahead. She had Sunstone out and was doing a sword dance. He stopped and stared from a distance. It was like she was dancing, a rhythm and beat in her step as she slashed her sword. Legolas stared in awe as she weaved her way in and out of the dances, ducking and stepping. She stopped.
"So, you came." she looked up at Legolas smiling, "Come, will you join me?" she stepped toward him and swung Sunstone around, silver streaking through her smile. He went toward her and she took his hand.
"Come on, what is wrong, I will not hurt you!" she laughed and pulled him toward the spot she was dancing at.
"Raquel wait." she stopped and looked at him, "I have a request."
"Yes, what is it?"
"When you can, when time allows, will you teach me to dance?" he asked.
She smiled, "Of course." she mocked bowed to him, "It would be an honor, my Prince." she stayed on the ground, her smile showing, even though she bowed her head. He bent down next to her,
"Well I look forward to the day that you and I can be at peace." her smiled faded and a sense of reality came over her. She closed her eyes sleepily and let weariness flow over her.
"Sleep, Raquel, do not let evil control you." he brushed a hand across her cheek. "You need not hide your weariness anymore."
She sighed, letting her head fall to his shoulder.
"Finally, you have overcome it." he whispered, picking her up.
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"Legolas, what is wrong with her?"
"Nothing, she just sleeps." Legolas laid her down in the boat and covered her with a blanket. Aragorn stood beside him.
"What do you mean?" Aragorn asked
"She has not slept since we left Lorien, she would not let herself. Finally she has." he stared at her and turned to Aragorn.
"I will not ask how you know this or why, but I thank you for finally brining peace to my sister, she has needed it for a long time and will need it in the future."
"What do you mean by that Aragorn?"
"She has not had many chances at peace in her life Legolas, but now she does, and I am glad that you can give it to her." Legolas looked at Raquel sleeping.
"She seems so peaceful." Legolas said, "Though I know it is not true, she hides it, I am amazed at how she can control her feelings so."
"Yes, and please, do not hurt her, she does not need more disappointment in her life."
"I would never do that, Aragorn."
"I know, but if you did I would have to join Haldir and hunt you down, utterly destroying you in any way possible." he gave his friend a soft clap on the shoulder and left to go back to sleep. Legolas shook his head, laying down himself.
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so how was it? pleaz tell me if this is turning into a mary-sue! I haven't really gotten any criticism and its kinda scarin me cuz I know there has to be something wrong with this story. I haven't really even gotten a flame, and I feel that I need some sort of somethin like thatpleaz.im beggin u if theres anything at all tell me, I want ur input. im scared this is turning into a sappy mary-sue, but who would kno better than me? YOU! so tell me! anywho, next chapter-let me write it! thanx to everyone who reviewed-
Rachael- thanx, u don't know how much that meant to me, since I really want to be an artist or author when I grow up! its nice to hear that people actually like my stuff! thanx again!
Elena- as usual, thanx, u've really been great, reviewing and all. I hope u keep reading, even if its not my fics!
mermaid-yea, I wish I could get the original draft back! anywho, thanx, I hope u keep reading, cuz its only gonna get better and better (I hope! lol)
Orli_Lover- thanx, I don't want this romance to go to fast, and on some things im not sure. like I said, I don't want this to become a sappy mary- sue! Yea, I luv pippin, cuz he's jus like me if id be in the fellowship, a klutz, but definitely not as cute as him! thanx again, have a great day!
Roxy angel-thanx, im glad u like the story, keep readin!
again guys, ur support is awesome. anywho, I gtg, have a good day!
*~*~*Gabi*~*~*