Hey people, hows it goin?

I hope u are liking my story so far and I really would like if I got some reviews from people who aren't my best friends(although I love those also). Right now my house my mom is making dinner and it smells really good hee hee (god im hungary) well anyways, here we go again………….

            I turned into an alley and found my head met with a swift punch, enough to  knock me out.   "Damn you Blinker,"……………………..Everything went black.

            (narrative point of view) Bumlets and Mush were walking back to the lodging house.  They just came back from a diner a few blocks away.  They realized that lodging house curfew was ascending on them, so they took a short cut they knew.  As they turned into the alley they were confronted with Spot's body lying limp on the ground.  "O shit," whispered Mush.

"You tellin' me, I sure hope he is not dead," said Bumlets

"Lets take him back to the lodging house……..NOW.

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"What the hell is this!" said Jack

"SHHHHHHH you'll wake the fuckin city up," whispered Bumlets

"We found him crumpled in an alley all crumpled like that," said Mush

(*hahaha typo but I had to keep it in*)

"I pretty sure I know how we can wake him up," snickered Jack.

Jack lightly grabbed the cane (*Kimberly-hahaha*) firmly grasped in Spot's hand.  Jack pulled the cane out of Spot's hand he immediately shot up and threw his fist towards Jack's face.  Jack had assumed this reaction and quickly dodged the punch.

"That's the thanks I get when my newsies carry your body from and alley all the way back to the lodging house?!" said Jack

"What happened to ya Spot?" questioned Mush

"Blinker, Blinker happened to me," said Spot angrily.

"What?  I thought u guys were chums (*Carrying the Banner*)," said Jack

"Yea me too, but I guessed I pissed him off or something."

"Shit Spot, what did you do?"

"Well there was this girl he liked and we were both smashed and I didn't think it was a big deal and……."

"You stole his girl, man Spot that is pretty bad.  What were you thinking?"

"I told you, I wasn't, I was real drunk."

"So what happened?"

"He saw us kissing and then he said something about how he was going to put up a fight, that there was gonna be trouble, big trouble he said.  Then he ran away and as I turned into an alley he punched me in the face and I blacked out."

"So what you gonna do about it"

"Guess I'se  best be going to Brooklyn in the morning and talk to my newsies about who is their real leader."

"Yea but not till the morning cause Spot I'm an honest guy.  And too be honest, you look like shit"