hiyas all! hope ur all likeing the fic...tis not the greatest but meh
oh ya and i sorta forgot to place the disclaimer on the first 2 chaps but u know...if i were the owner of this amazing anime do u think id be writeing storys for fafiction.net and liveing in a small town in western canada?
CANADA 4 EVER!!! Eh?
peace,
Aila
P.S. i KNOW i suck at spelling and grammer but w/e
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Chap 3
Her eyes opened slowly and only very slightly, but seening nothing more than her knees which she was hugging close to her chest, she closed them again.
"W--Where am I?" She asked aloud, her voice echoing around her. A peaceful quite and soothing voice answered but it seemed to be in her head
"You are here...rest...rest...go back to sleep..."
This seemed like a very good suggestion untill her own thoughts, a very LOUD thoughts in her head screamed out,
"What if i dont wana!? WAKE UP KAGOME! OPEN YOUR EYES!" Kagomes eyes blasted open. She would of been considered jumping from her crouched position if she was actually standing on anything; she seemed to be floating in this mist that was hanging around her.
'ok. think kagome. where were you last? you were having a fight with everyone...and i remember that i wasnt wanted by anyone...' whith this thought her head sunk low abit; but this was the chance the cold mist around her was waiting for. With a quickness that was unbeliveble the mist drove itsself into kagome's heart and wispered,"thats right...you are here because you are not wanted...rest." It was just too much for the girl to handle.
agenst the voice in her head that was screaming for her to stay awake, she fell once more into this mist that was making everything seem so peaceful..the mist that was holding her, body and soul, from leaving.
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Okies that was SUPER short but i dont gots much choice thats all i had for my outline of chap 3 and the outline knows all!!woooooooooo! scarey...sorta...mabey...ok not really but w/e ^_^'''
tell me watcha think and if i get at leats afew good comments i might cont if not im gona put my efforts into the other fic im writing and have no clue where its going,(but ppl seem to like it anywho)
peace all,
Aila
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oh ya and i sorta forgot to place the disclaimer on the first 2 chaps but u know...if i were the owner of this amazing anime do u think id be writeing storys for fafiction.net and liveing in a small town in western canada?
CANADA 4 EVER!!! Eh?
peace,
Aila
P.S. i KNOW i suck at spelling and grammer but w/e
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Chap 3
Her eyes opened slowly and only very slightly, but seening nothing more than her knees which she was hugging close to her chest, she closed them again.
"W--Where am I?" She asked aloud, her voice echoing around her. A peaceful quite and soothing voice answered but it seemed to be in her head
"You are here...rest...rest...go back to sleep..."
This seemed like a very good suggestion untill her own thoughts, a very LOUD thoughts in her head screamed out,
"What if i dont wana!? WAKE UP KAGOME! OPEN YOUR EYES!" Kagomes eyes blasted open. She would of been considered jumping from her crouched position if she was actually standing on anything; she seemed to be floating in this mist that was hanging around her.
'ok. think kagome. where were you last? you were having a fight with everyone...and i remember that i wasnt wanted by anyone...' whith this thought her head sunk low abit; but this was the chance the cold mist around her was waiting for. With a quickness that was unbeliveble the mist drove itsself into kagome's heart and wispered,"thats right...you are here because you are not wanted...rest." It was just too much for the girl to handle.
agenst the voice in her head that was screaming for her to stay awake, she fell once more into this mist that was making everything seem so peaceful..the mist that was holding her, body and soul, from leaving.
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Okies that was SUPER short but i dont gots much choice thats all i had for my outline of chap 3 and the outline knows all!!woooooooooo! scarey...sorta...mabey...ok not really but w/e ^_^'''
tell me watcha think and if i get at leats afew good comments i might cont if not im gona put my efforts into the other fic im writing and have no clue where its going,(but ppl seem to like it anywho)
peace all,
Aila
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