Should I switch between the two later in my story or do you like the Grissom POV? I just thought I put Sara through enough pain with my other stories and her POV would only mean a state of mind since she isn't allowed to know about the case. What do you think?
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Chapter 4: The Officers vs. The Scientists
When we got to the station we were all a little worried about Sara. According to Jeremy she would be held at the police station, but we were directed to the building next door to drop off our gear and check in. We went in single file through the double glass doors.
"Sorry but we have to check you guys in first. Come on my boss can't wait to meet you."
"It sounds like we have fans." Nick grinned. "Who thought we were so popular."
Jeremy called back to Nick in a happy tone. "You are the best team. By the end of the year we are always compared to Vegas when it comes to solving crimes. We do okay I suppose, better than most."
"Well I had no idea we got such credibility. I mean we were just doing our job." Nick replied. "And having so much fun too." Warrick added.
"Well now you know. Wait here." Jeremy disappeared into a office.
"Hey Gris," Warrick called.
"Yes."
"Do you think someone is trying to set Sara up? I mean, we haven't even collected evidence and it looks to me like foul play."
"We have to follow the evidence Warrick. I know its hard, its hard for all of us, but the evidence has never failed us before."
"What if it does?" Nick countered.
"Then we bust her out of her and make a run for it." Catherine said grabbing Nick's shoulder for reassurance. "It will all work out Nicky. I promise."
Jeremy returned with a older heavyset man in tow. "This is Mr. Nathaniel Dobbs head of CSI: San Francisco."
"Its nice to meet you." I said shaking his hand.
"No the pleasure is mine. I just wish we could have met over better circumstances."
"I agree. Have you seen her?"
"No I haven't been to the hospital yet."
"But Dobbs," Jeremy interrupted. "Sara was released into custody about two and half hours ago."
"What? We haven't even processed her or got a statement yet. Who is the officer?"
"Ethan."
"Well lets go. I bet Sara could use the break."
I took notice that the lab was nice, very nice. Everyone seemed efficient and busy with work. The design was something that San Francisco had on us. In Vegas, the crime lab was part of the police department. There was definitely more space here. The buildings were separate but joined by a hallway located behind the lab. I didn't even notice that they were connected out front. It was a very good design.
Once we stepped through the doors that lead into the police department it was chaos. The quiet efficiency of the lab was left behind, replaced by shouting and typing. It was a sea of blue uniforms instead of white lab coats. The confusion was enough to give me a headache. Dobbs lead the way through the commotion and Jeremy picked up the rear. We caught a few unhappy faces. I knew then that the difference between CSI and police officer was a problem here. I was grateful we got along so well with our officers back home.
Dobbs checked a roster board of some sort outside of one of the interrogation rooms. I instantly knew that the only thing separating me and Sara was that door.
"Well, the good news is that she didn't confess to anything. And she is alone. That means we won't have a fight on our hands with Ethan to speak to her."
"The bad news?" Catherine asked.
"The bad news is that her interrogation just ended."
"Jesus. She's been in there for almost two hours being grilled by Ethan and his buddies." Jeremy added.
"Mr. Grissom you can come see Sara. I am sure she could use a friend. The rest of you can watch the questioning from in there." He pointed to a side door. The crew gave me a smile of reassurance then I turned back to Dobbs.
"I haven't seen Sara since she left about three years ago." Dobbs started. "I want to warn you that she may not be...in great shape. Jeremy filled me in on what he saw when he found her. I'll go get the casefile and have one of my assistants bring it to you as soon as possible."
"Thank you." I pushed through the door and softly closed it behind me.
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tbc...