Well, this is going to be an on going project, and with nothing else to
say, let the re-write of Chapter 2 begin.
/./ = Yugi thinking to Yami //.// = Yami thinking to Yugi Bakura = Yami Bakura
***
Yami looked at the cloaked pyramid breaker-into-er with humor in his eyes. "Well of course YOU know who it is! It IS you! Or more correctly, _was_ you, and if you know what's good for you, you won't interfere with what's going to happen."
Bakura muttered to no one in particular, "'If I know what's good for me?!' What the fuck is that!? Like I'm gonna listen to you; you lost the authority to order me around a long time ago. And even then I didn't obey you. No. I'm going to do things my way." At this, Bakura made an effort to slink away from the group, despite the fact that some of the cactus needles were still stuck to him. Those didn't matter. All that mattered was what he was aiming to do.
And so, the group continued to walk. Yami, who was at the head of the group, hadn't noticed that Bakura had left until he realized that he didn't hear as many footsteps as before. Yami turned around to find Bakura yards away, in the direction of the cloaked figure. Yami noted that Bakura hadn't noticed that he had been spotted. Calmly, Yami ran over to where Bakura was. In spite of the fact that he was barely as tall as Bakura, Yami lifted him. by the collar and said, "We don't appreciate your company either, but I insist that you STAY!" Yami shot a sideways glance at the wide-eyed Yugi and Bakura. He looked back glaring hard at Bakura. Yami pulled at him tighter and closer. Fiercely and angrily, he said in a low voice, "You know that we have been sent back to ancient Egypt. But what you may not know is that you CANNOT change anything that happened in the past. Who knows, maybe what you have now is the best hand that Fate will ever deal you! You could end up in far worse situation. If anything happens to Yugi because of you, then I, personally will bring you to a place far worse than Hell!"
Yami then proceeded to drop Bakura to the ground and glare at him reprovingly. Bakura, at that moment, felt his hatred for Yami grow past the absolute abhoration that he had already felt for him. Still, he had his mission in his mind. Instead, while Yami was still glaring hard at him, Bakura kicked threw a great multitude of desert sand in the air and ran away with great ease.
"OH FUCK! YOU FUCKIN BASTARD!!! YOU'RE GOING TO PAY NOW!!!" Yami had a lot of sand in his eyes. He cursed at Bakura many more times before he got most of, but not all of, the sand out of his eyes. He looked up. "THE HELL!?! WHERE'S BAKURA???"
Yugi and Ryou were silent, not wanting to anger the infuriated Yami any further.
Yami frowned and began to run in the direction of the pyramid.
Unfortuanatly, Yugi and Ryou weren't quite as used to running on sand as Yami and Bakura prenatally were.
"WAIT! We can't run as fast as you!" Ryou cried out in desperation.
"THEN STAY THERE!!!" Yami ordered and ran even faster.
Yugi and Ryou watched Yami run until Yugi said with a mischievous glint in his eye, "I'm going, do you want to come?"
Ryou looked shocked, " Y-you want to go? After MY maniac yami? Well, I suppose I should go, we shouldn't get even more separated, and besides, I won't let you go alone."
Yugi smiled, "Okay! We better hurry though, if we take too long, someone's going to end up hurt."
Ryou and Yugi ran as fast as they could in the direction that Yami had gone until they reached the pyramid.
"Hmm? Where are they?" wondered Ryou.
"I'll try to link with Yami," Yugi said.
***
Yami and Bakura were pinned against a wall with spears wielded by some royal looking guards. "What business do you have to impersonate our Pharaoh?" shouted the main-looking guard.
Yami looked at the guard stupidly. Most of his memories were hidden from him, but he at least known that he was the Pharaoh of Egypt. "Hm? Aren't I supposed to be the Pharaoh?"
The Guard merely put his spear closer to Yami's throat.
//Oh shit... //
/What was that, Yami?/
//You heard that? Well, don't be concerned.just don't come by the... // Yami looked around, but didn't move enough to bring the spear closer to his neck. //Palace-looking thing any time soon... //
/Hey, I can see it! I'll be right there! /
//NO! //
/See you, Yami! /
"Damnit," Yami muttered under his breath. All of sudden, the guards all backed away. A loud, booming voice that was quite familiar to Yami shouted, "What do you have to say for yourself?"
Yami, in an amused tone replied, "Hi, me."
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There it is. I'm still not quite satisfied, but I still think that it is better. Count on some MAJOR changes in the up-coming re-writes. Suggestions are still welcome since I'm changing so much. I LOVE reviews, so please do so, your opinion is valued, and IF you flame, you have to give me constructive advice.
/./ = Yugi thinking to Yami //.// = Yami thinking to Yugi Bakura = Yami Bakura
***
Yami looked at the cloaked pyramid breaker-into-er with humor in his eyes. "Well of course YOU know who it is! It IS you! Or more correctly, _was_ you, and if you know what's good for you, you won't interfere with what's going to happen."
Bakura muttered to no one in particular, "'If I know what's good for me?!' What the fuck is that!? Like I'm gonna listen to you; you lost the authority to order me around a long time ago. And even then I didn't obey you. No. I'm going to do things my way." At this, Bakura made an effort to slink away from the group, despite the fact that some of the cactus needles were still stuck to him. Those didn't matter. All that mattered was what he was aiming to do.
And so, the group continued to walk. Yami, who was at the head of the group, hadn't noticed that Bakura had left until he realized that he didn't hear as many footsteps as before. Yami turned around to find Bakura yards away, in the direction of the cloaked figure. Yami noted that Bakura hadn't noticed that he had been spotted. Calmly, Yami ran over to where Bakura was. In spite of the fact that he was barely as tall as Bakura, Yami lifted him. by the collar and said, "We don't appreciate your company either, but I insist that you STAY!" Yami shot a sideways glance at the wide-eyed Yugi and Bakura. He looked back glaring hard at Bakura. Yami pulled at him tighter and closer. Fiercely and angrily, he said in a low voice, "You know that we have been sent back to ancient Egypt. But what you may not know is that you CANNOT change anything that happened in the past. Who knows, maybe what you have now is the best hand that Fate will ever deal you! You could end up in far worse situation. If anything happens to Yugi because of you, then I, personally will bring you to a place far worse than Hell!"
Yami then proceeded to drop Bakura to the ground and glare at him reprovingly. Bakura, at that moment, felt his hatred for Yami grow past the absolute abhoration that he had already felt for him. Still, he had his mission in his mind. Instead, while Yami was still glaring hard at him, Bakura kicked threw a great multitude of desert sand in the air and ran away with great ease.
"OH FUCK! YOU FUCKIN BASTARD!!! YOU'RE GOING TO PAY NOW!!!" Yami had a lot of sand in his eyes. He cursed at Bakura many more times before he got most of, but not all of, the sand out of his eyes. He looked up. "THE HELL!?! WHERE'S BAKURA???"
Yugi and Ryou were silent, not wanting to anger the infuriated Yami any further.
Yami frowned and began to run in the direction of the pyramid.
Unfortuanatly, Yugi and Ryou weren't quite as used to running on sand as Yami and Bakura prenatally were.
"WAIT! We can't run as fast as you!" Ryou cried out in desperation.
"THEN STAY THERE!!!" Yami ordered and ran even faster.
Yugi and Ryou watched Yami run until Yugi said with a mischievous glint in his eye, "I'm going, do you want to come?"
Ryou looked shocked, " Y-you want to go? After MY maniac yami? Well, I suppose I should go, we shouldn't get even more separated, and besides, I won't let you go alone."
Yugi smiled, "Okay! We better hurry though, if we take too long, someone's going to end up hurt."
Ryou and Yugi ran as fast as they could in the direction that Yami had gone until they reached the pyramid.
"Hmm? Where are they?" wondered Ryou.
"I'll try to link with Yami," Yugi said.
***
Yami and Bakura were pinned against a wall with spears wielded by some royal looking guards. "What business do you have to impersonate our Pharaoh?" shouted the main-looking guard.
Yami looked at the guard stupidly. Most of his memories were hidden from him, but he at least known that he was the Pharaoh of Egypt. "Hm? Aren't I supposed to be the Pharaoh?"
The Guard merely put his spear closer to Yami's throat.
//Oh shit... //
/What was that, Yami?/
//You heard that? Well, don't be concerned.just don't come by the... // Yami looked around, but didn't move enough to bring the spear closer to his neck. //Palace-looking thing any time soon... //
/Hey, I can see it! I'll be right there! /
//NO! //
/See you, Yami! /
"Damnit," Yami muttered under his breath. All of sudden, the guards all backed away. A loud, booming voice that was quite familiar to Yami shouted, "What do you have to say for yourself?"
Yami, in an amused tone replied, "Hi, me."
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There it is. I'm still not quite satisfied, but I still think that it is better. Count on some MAJOR changes in the up-coming re-writes. Suggestions are still welcome since I'm changing so much. I LOVE reviews, so please do so, your opinion is valued, and IF you flame, you have to give me constructive advice.