Re-writes continue, I hope that you are happy with these...
/./ = Yugi thinking to Yami //.// = Yami thinking to Yugi
***
"Ryou's dead.?" Yugi suddenly had a very blank, panic-ish look.
"WHERE'S BAKURA?" Yami roared. Although he wasn't as close to Ryou as Yugi was, Ryou was still his friend and Bakura always knew just where Ryou was...
The person looked a little surprised to see that a person who sppeared the Pharaoh (but appartently wasn't) was calling shots but replied, "Akinu is being held just inside...By the way, who exactly are you?"
Yami pointed at Amenhotep, "I'm him, but a couple millennia older." Yami finally noticed that the Pharaoh was looking quite pissed. "Oh yea, I realize that you're still in charge here...anyway, can you grant me permission to enter my, or at least formerly my, palace?"
The pharaoh still looked quite pissed, "Fine, since the only kind of threat you pose is to my pride, but after this, you must explain to me why you are here."
"Whatever, let's just go already!" Yami demanded. Yugi had retained his nervous, paniced-look, but huried after Yami, he, too, was quite anxious to confirm the fate of Ryou.
Another excited looking person ran up to Amenhotep and bowed. "I have captured Akinu!"
"NO! That can't be!" yelled the first person. "I found him myself; someone had tightly tied him to a cactus upside-down."
Yami chuckled at this. "Then let's go and find out which one we have."
So, one of the guys led the Pharaoh, Yami, and Yugi into the palace.
***
Despite the sadness he was still experiencing, Yugi couldn't help but be awed by the palace.
/Whoa! /
//So you're feeling better, Yugi? //
/NO! ...Well, yes... is that so wrong? /
//No, it's not wrong, especially since nothing has been proved. I'm not going to mourn until I see his dead body myself. //
At least ten or twenty guards were holding down one of the white-haired demons. "DAMN! LET GO! In a way, at least, I'm NOT the one you want... anymore...!"
Yugi sweat-dropped. Yami was holding back a laugh, "That is definitely the Bakura from our time."
Yami forgot that he wasn't really the Pharaoh any more and waved the guards away.
Since, the Pharaoh often wore stuff similar to what Yami was wearing, the guards didn't know that this wasn't really their pharaoh, so they shrugged and left, thinking that they just were tired, and that was why there were two pharaohs.
The pharaoh looked even more pissed off, "HEY!!! What the fuck was that?!"
"Huh? Oh, my apologies..." said Yami, almost as an after thought. "Bakura, what happened to Ryou?"
"Ryou...? Why would I give a fuck? It's harder to track him when he's not wearing the ring, and then your fucking guards attacked me!" Bakura closed his eyes and concentrated hard in an effort to sense Ryou; not that he was going to tell them that, but it was actually quite obvious what he was doing.
"Well...?" Yugi timidly requested.
Bakura glared at him, causing him to falter a little. Yami, of course, noticed and began to advance toward Bakura. "WELL? ANSWER HIM!"
Bakura looked pissed off, but decided, for some weird reason, to comply. "All I know is that he is near and that he's not dead. Now, GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME!!!"
There was a knock at the door.
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Quite a few changes here (short chapter in general) but not as much as there will be. I hope this was entertaining. Keep checking back for more updates.
/./ = Yugi thinking to Yami //.// = Yami thinking to Yugi
***
"Ryou's dead.?" Yugi suddenly had a very blank, panic-ish look.
"WHERE'S BAKURA?" Yami roared. Although he wasn't as close to Ryou as Yugi was, Ryou was still his friend and Bakura always knew just where Ryou was...
The person looked a little surprised to see that a person who sppeared the Pharaoh (but appartently wasn't) was calling shots but replied, "Akinu is being held just inside...By the way, who exactly are you?"
Yami pointed at Amenhotep, "I'm him, but a couple millennia older." Yami finally noticed that the Pharaoh was looking quite pissed. "Oh yea, I realize that you're still in charge here...anyway, can you grant me permission to enter my, or at least formerly my, palace?"
The pharaoh still looked quite pissed, "Fine, since the only kind of threat you pose is to my pride, but after this, you must explain to me why you are here."
"Whatever, let's just go already!" Yami demanded. Yugi had retained his nervous, paniced-look, but huried after Yami, he, too, was quite anxious to confirm the fate of Ryou.
Another excited looking person ran up to Amenhotep and bowed. "I have captured Akinu!"
"NO! That can't be!" yelled the first person. "I found him myself; someone had tightly tied him to a cactus upside-down."
Yami chuckled at this. "Then let's go and find out which one we have."
So, one of the guys led the Pharaoh, Yami, and Yugi into the palace.
***
Despite the sadness he was still experiencing, Yugi couldn't help but be awed by the palace.
/Whoa! /
//So you're feeling better, Yugi? //
/NO! ...Well, yes... is that so wrong? /
//No, it's not wrong, especially since nothing has been proved. I'm not going to mourn until I see his dead body myself. //
At least ten or twenty guards were holding down one of the white-haired demons. "DAMN! LET GO! In a way, at least, I'm NOT the one you want... anymore...!"
Yugi sweat-dropped. Yami was holding back a laugh, "That is definitely the Bakura from our time."
Yami forgot that he wasn't really the Pharaoh any more and waved the guards away.
Since, the Pharaoh often wore stuff similar to what Yami was wearing, the guards didn't know that this wasn't really their pharaoh, so they shrugged and left, thinking that they just were tired, and that was why there were two pharaohs.
The pharaoh looked even more pissed off, "HEY!!! What the fuck was that?!"
"Huh? Oh, my apologies..." said Yami, almost as an after thought. "Bakura, what happened to Ryou?"
"Ryou...? Why would I give a fuck? It's harder to track him when he's not wearing the ring, and then your fucking guards attacked me!" Bakura closed his eyes and concentrated hard in an effort to sense Ryou; not that he was going to tell them that, but it was actually quite obvious what he was doing.
"Well...?" Yugi timidly requested.
Bakura glared at him, causing him to falter a little. Yami, of course, noticed and began to advance toward Bakura. "WELL? ANSWER HIM!"
Bakura looked pissed off, but decided, for some weird reason, to comply. "All I know is that he is near and that he's not dead. Now, GET THE FUCK AWAY FROM ME!!!"
There was a knock at the door.
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Quite a few changes here (short chapter in general) but not as much as there will be. I hope this was entertaining. Keep checking back for more updates.