Wow. This story seems to be a hit! ^__________^
Again, I'm really sorry if I insulted n-e-one. I just don't think before I
speak. and I speak too fast.
*RANDOM THOUGHT* Mi birthday is in a week.. I'll be.. *cringe* 12. I HATE
the number twelve .. ;_; I WANNA STAY ELEVEN! *shrivels in a corner*
..OH! And forgive me if the chapters are short. My chapters tend to do
that... ^_^;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;
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Yuzora traveled down to a small, quiet brook, surrounded by tall oak trees. It was dusk, and the sky was painted orange, pink, and crimson. She smiled as she placed herself on a rock in the middle of the brook (which is quite thin). After watching the sunset for a few minutes she tried to sing her mother's song. She sang it to her before they found out she was a half demon. Anyway. Singing was a huge mistake. All that came out was horrible screeching noise. And to make matters worse, Yuzora was tone deaf.
Not far off, Hiei was trying to find himself a nice tree for the night. That's when Yuzora's "singing" reached his unfortunate ears. He ran towards the brook, where he assumed the noise was coming from. After weaving his way through a forest of trees, he saw what the noise was.
"What do you think you're doing?" He yelped. The girl turned around. She clapped her hands to her mouth. "WELL!?"
"I.. I'm sorry..I didn't think anyone would hear me here.." She said. Hiei examined the girl. She looked about five-foot-two, had reddish-brown hair with an outward flip at the end and hazel eyes. She wore a black spaghetti- strap shirt with two sleeves, one set rested on her arms, the other on her shoulder and a black skirt, and a sword rested on the rock she sat on. She looked about twenty.. maybe twenty-three. She had two odd markings, one on her right arm and one on her right cheek. The one on her arm seemed to be a ring all the way around with dots on the top and bottom. The one on her cheek was a simple curved triangle under her eye.
"You look gothic." Hiei said. The girl snorted.
"You're one to talk. My name is Yuzora. And you?"
"Hiei. You might want to leave before you disturb anyone else with that screech of yours." he eyed Yuzora. She was fairly pretty and..
Hiei stopped himself before he went any further.
"I will!" Yuzora said, sticking up her nose, "Cheshire Puss!"
Hiei wore a confused look on his face. Then he looked at the moon, where Yuzora was looking.
The supposedly crescent moon over a tree branch slowly became the smile of a cat. After the smile came a head, and after the head the rest of the cat. Hiei stepped back in astonishment, looking the opposite direction of the cat to see the real moon.
"What is that..that..that THING!?" he asked.
"I am a cat, not a THING." The cat said. The cat was a tabby, striped fuchsia and purple. It had large yellow glowing eyes and, of course, wore a huge grin on its face. "I'm Chessy the Cheshire Cat. Friend's call me Chess."
"Hn. Chessy's the best you could do?"
"Like you could do better." Yuzora said, grabbing her sword and walking into the woods. "Come on Chess!" And with that Chess jumped of the branch onto the ground in a graceful leap. "AND I HOPE WE NEVER MEET AGAIN!" Yuzora yelped after she was far in the dark depths of the woods.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Okay so it took 6 days to write this. GUESS WHAT! Mi birthday is tomorrow, and the epi of YYH when I became a Hiei fan girl IS ON MI BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!! *celebrates* yay...... Freaky coincidence! ^________________^ Anyway. Good constructive flames are accepted. But whatever you do please R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
~Hiei-Maru
=3
*RANDOM THOUGHT* I use too much dialogue.
Yuzora traveled down to a small, quiet brook, surrounded by tall oak trees. It was dusk, and the sky was painted orange, pink, and crimson. She smiled as she placed herself on a rock in the middle of the brook (which is quite thin). After watching the sunset for a few minutes she tried to sing her mother's song. She sang it to her before they found out she was a half demon. Anyway. Singing was a huge mistake. All that came out was horrible screeching noise. And to make matters worse, Yuzora was tone deaf.
Not far off, Hiei was trying to find himself a nice tree for the night. That's when Yuzora's "singing" reached his unfortunate ears. He ran towards the brook, where he assumed the noise was coming from. After weaving his way through a forest of trees, he saw what the noise was.
"What do you think you're doing?" He yelped. The girl turned around. She clapped her hands to her mouth. "WELL!?"
"I.. I'm sorry..I didn't think anyone would hear me here.." She said. Hiei examined the girl. She looked about five-foot-two, had reddish-brown hair with an outward flip at the end and hazel eyes. She wore a black spaghetti- strap shirt with two sleeves, one set rested on her arms, the other on her shoulder and a black skirt, and a sword rested on the rock she sat on. She looked about twenty.. maybe twenty-three. She had two odd markings, one on her right arm and one on her right cheek. The one on her arm seemed to be a ring all the way around with dots on the top and bottom. The one on her cheek was a simple curved triangle under her eye.
"You look gothic." Hiei said. The girl snorted.
"You're one to talk. My name is Yuzora. And you?"
"Hiei. You might want to leave before you disturb anyone else with that screech of yours." he eyed Yuzora. She was fairly pretty and..
Hiei stopped himself before he went any further.
"I will!" Yuzora said, sticking up her nose, "Cheshire Puss!"
Hiei wore a confused look on his face. Then he looked at the moon, where Yuzora was looking.
The supposedly crescent moon over a tree branch slowly became the smile of a cat. After the smile came a head, and after the head the rest of the cat. Hiei stepped back in astonishment, looking the opposite direction of the cat to see the real moon.
"What is that..that..that THING!?" he asked.
"I am a cat, not a THING." The cat said. The cat was a tabby, striped fuchsia and purple. It had large yellow glowing eyes and, of course, wore a huge grin on its face. "I'm Chessy the Cheshire Cat. Friend's call me Chess."
"Hn. Chessy's the best you could do?"
"Like you could do better." Yuzora said, grabbing her sword and walking into the woods. "Come on Chess!" And with that Chess jumped of the branch onto the ground in a graceful leap. "AND I HOPE WE NEVER MEET AGAIN!" Yuzora yelped after she was far in the dark depths of the woods.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~ Okay so it took 6 days to write this. GUESS WHAT! Mi birthday is tomorrow, and the epi of YYH when I became a Hiei fan girl IS ON MI BIRTHDAY!!!!!!!! *celebrates* yay...... Freaky coincidence! ^________________^ Anyway. Good constructive flames are accepted. But whatever you do please R&R!!!!!!!!!!!!!1
~Hiei-Maru
=3
*RANDOM THOUGHT* I use too much dialogue.