Title: After the Date
Author: lilygirl2001
Rating: PG-13 (Just to be on the safe side – it's probably really just PG)
E-mail: ras1387@yahoo.com, irishchix05@yahoo.com
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Summary: What if episode 9, "If These Wolves Could Talk," had ended differently, at least the part pertaining to Luke and Sophia. What if Scott hadn't tried to stop Luke, and he had succeeded in dragging Sophia into his car and driving off?
A/N: This is my first fanfiction ever posted (I've written others, but they were all to bad to post). Please review and let me know if you love it, like it, hate it, etc. If I don't get any reviews, or all bad ones, I won't update, so if you want me to continue, please review. Flames are excepted, as long as you're honest.
A/N 2: I've decided to continue my fic due to all the excellent feedback. I've got 11 reviews and 2 e-mails, all positive. Here's the second chap. Keep the reviews comin'!!
Recognition: Thanks to all the people at http://www.soapsite.com/wolf/. Due to their wonderful summaries, I was able to make this story as accurate as possible. The site is also full of great pics and bios of the characters. I definitely recommend that you check it out! J
Explanation: *~* - indicate scene changes
(x) – Scene descriptions
'x' – Thoughts
"x" – Monologue
Let's pretend that after Luke dragged Sophia to his car, he drove off. All that happened to the Sheriff, John Kanin, the scientist, etc. happened.
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Where we left off:
"What? You can go off and have sex with Presley, but I'm forbidden to date or kiss guys? Please explain how my personal life is any of your business. And you never answered my previous question, why shouldn't I kiss Scott, or any other guy for that matter!! And why are you taking me to your 'thinking spot'? Why couldn't you have taken me home first and then come here??? Hmm????"
"I-" Luke began.
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(They are still in Luke's car, driving to his 'special' place)
"NO!" Sophia interrupted. "You know what? I'm sick and tired of all your lies, so I don't wanna hear whatever lame excuse you come up with in your defense. I just want to go home." She looked out the window and tried to control her breathing, which had become heavy due to her little out-burst.
"Sophia-" Luke began, but she interrupted him again.
"No Luke. I said I don't wanna hear it."
Luke glanced over at her. She was still looking out the window.
"Look, I know you're pissed at me right now-" Luke started to say.
"That's an understatement." Sophia muttered.
He continued as if he hadn't heard her. "But how 'bout I try to make it up to you? Just come see the place. You'll love it, it's really beautiful. There's a mini lake, and-"
She cut him off again. "Don't you get it?!? I don't want to hear about your 'special' place and I don't want to go to your 'special' place. The only place I want to go is home!"
"Fine!" Luke exploded. "I've tried to be nice and civil, but you're just IMPOSSIBLE!!!" He sped up and made a U-turn so fast the tires squealed. Then they drove into town, at least 25 miles over the speed limit.
Neither said a word for the rest of the trip, but Luke's eyes were glowing an angry yellow.
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When they got to Sophia's house, he barely waited until she shut the car door before speeding off.
'I can't BELIEVE him!!!' Sophia thought as she walked up to her front door. 'He thinks he can control MY life!! Who does he think he is?!? My father??? Ugh!'
Suddenly her father came bursting out of the house.
"Sophia! Are you okay? Did he hurt you?? I told you that Cates boy was trouble. I'm gonna have a talk with V about this." Sheriff Donner said as he came up to inspect his daughter for new scratches, bruises; anything that would prove that Luke had hurt her.
"Dad! Calm down, okay? I'm fine. Why aren't you at the station? I thought you had to work tonight?" Sophia asked as she walked with him into the house.
"I was, but when Scott called to say that Luke had grabbed you and drove off in his car in the middle of your date, I came home to see if he brought you here." The Sheriff explained.
"How is Scott? He seemed to be in shock when Luke grabbed me." Sophia asked.
"He sounded fine, a bit shaken up, though. But I'm more worried about you. Are you sure you're okay?? Luke didn't hurt you?" The sheriff asked, his voice filled with concern for Sophia and anger at Luke.
"Yes, dad, I'm fine. I'm just gonna call Scott and go to bed, 'kay?"
"Sure sweetie, goodnight."
"Goodnight dad." She kissed her father on the cheek and went up to her room to call Scott.
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A/N: Here's chapter 2! Chap 3 will be up soon (hopefully!!)! Next chapter is of the convo between the Sheriff and Vivian, the convo between Scott and Sophia, and what Luke did after he drove away. Although Luke might not be until Chapter 4, I'm not sure, I haven't decided. In your reviews could you please let me know if this chap flows with the first and if they still seem like the peeps in the show, or am I too off base. Also, please let me know what you want to happen, or else I swear I will have Luke die and have Sophia go off and elope with Scott just to spite you!! And believe me, I AM that evil!!! :) Bye for now!! Ciao!!! Don't forget to review or e-mail (ras1387@yahoo.com or irishchix05@yahoo.com). Without them I won't continue!! Bye for real now!! J
A/N2: Sorry it took me so long to get it out, but first there was the shut down of ff.n for about a week and a half, then I still had problems logging in, and then my computer had some sort of breakdown and it wouldn't turn on, but I've finally finished it!! Hopefully Chapter 3 will be out soon, but if I don't get reviews telling me what people want to happen, I will carry out my threat!!!!! !Adios!