Hello everyone! I just got done reading "Years." It was like the first T/P
fic rated 'R' here (#90 if you want to read). I start from the bottom up. I
am inspired now. I really don't know what I shall write. Whatever comes to
mind I guess. I write numerous stories but never finish. Well, I must
guarantee, this is my best story yet and will keep you waiting for more.
And remember, I'm making this up as I go. Hmm...first I need a beginning,
no a title. Oh, whatever, I'll think of a beginning later. Well, here's my
story: DragonSword Z. No...too cheesy. Umm...DeathSword X? Sounds good!
I'll make up new characters and you'll see some old ones along the way.
Enough of my idle foolishness and on with the story.
DeathSword X Chapter 1
No! Wait! I forgot to tell you something. This is my life story. Pan will be me and Trunks will be 'him.' "For those that know, they should not, and for those that don't, no explanation needed." This story should be enough. So here comes the story.
DeathSword X Chapter 1
"Panny, wake up!" Videl shouted. A very sleepy Pan stumbled into the kitchen. "Breakfast's ready." Pan woke right up and drooled at the mounds of pancakes in front of her. She sat down, and in a matter of seconds, the food was gone.
"Thanks mom, I gotta go to Bra's. See ya later. Bye!" Pan rushed out of the house.
"Saiyans." Videl rolled her eyes.
Pan flew to Bra's as fast as she could. She couldn't wait to talk to her best friend. She got there and ran into the house without knocking. "Pan," Bulma yelled, "Bra's in her room."
"Thanks." She found Bra still sleeping. "BRA!!! It's like 9 o'clock! What the hell are you doing sleeping?"
"Huh. Leave me alone."
"I'll go shopping with you later if you get up right now."
"God, Pan, you must be desperate. Fine, it sounds important." Bra stumbled out of bed, got changed, and came out. (I don't know where she came out from either. O_o o_O) "Well, what is it?"
"Umm...I was thinking last night that....."
"WHAT!!"
~Geez, how should I say this?~ "I want a makeover."
Bra jumped up and down. "Yayy! I was so dying for...wait a minute. Pan, what's up? What happened?"
"Uh...nothing, really. I just thought it was about time." ~Good, Bra believes it. Trunks, maybe now you'll notice me.~
After Bra was done "getting ready" as she called it 2 hours later, they went shopping. Bra pulled Pan into store after store making her buy the skimpiest looking outfits. Pan tried to buy something decent, but Bra just gave her "the look." Finally, when they were done, they went back to C.C.
"Oh my Gosh!" Bra shouted. "We only have four hours until the party starts!"
"What party? You never told me - " Pan was cut off by Bra pulling her to her room to change. The first hour was used to pick the perfect outfit. Pan was in a beautiful midnight blue dress. It came to about mid-thigh with slits up the sides. There was no back and a very low V-shape cut-off showed more than a hint of cleavage. Bra was in a blood red halter top and black leather hip-huggers (my two favorite colors!).
"Pan, you look absolutely stunning, but... lose the bandana. We have to do something with your hair!"
"But Bra..." Pan would have continued her protest if Bra hadn't sat her down and ripped off her bandana. The next two hours were used on creating the most ravishing hair styles. Pan had her hair twisted upon her haid with sexy curls framing her face. It looked as though it would fall any moment, but it kept its place. After that was finished, Bra pulled out the makeup. "No way!" Pan shouted. "You will not put that on me."
"Trust me, Pan. You'll look beautiful."
~Well, I guess she's right. This had better be worth it.~
The next hour flew by and Bra twirled Pan around in her chair. "Look." She said, turning Pan to where she could see the mirror. Pan slowly got up and saw how wonderful she looked. "Now, we go downstairs." Bra took Pan's hand and led her to the stairs. She walked slowly down the steps. The music stopped and everyone turned to see her.
Trunks POV
I am quite thoroughly enjoying the party. I chat with Uub and Goten when suddenly, the music stops. I turn to see what everyone's staring at and I see 'her.' My eyes get big and I start to drool. Is this really my tomboy Panny? All dressed up and looking completely gorgeous? So elegant, so graceful, as she decends the stairs. Oh how long I've liked her. Yeah, we were friends. Not the best of friends, but still friends. Ever since I've broke up with Marron I've liked her. But, if annything ever happened between us, which won't, Goten, Uub, and her parents, and mine would not accept it. Oh, how I want her. She's so young. She shoudln't be held back by me. Yet, I still like her, maybe I love her. No, I can't say that. It's impossible. I sigh and turn around as the music starts again. Pan...
End Trunks POV
Bulma stood and tapped on her glass. "Excuse me everyone. I have an announcement to make. My family and the Son's are going to the beach at our resort house next week. My family has the top floor. The Son's have the bottom. Thank you."
Pan's POV
Oh my God. I'm going to the beach. with Trunks. I'll finally get to spend time with him. Maybe I'll tell him. But I know I will be rejected. Damn age difference. I love you, Trunks, but it's a shame you don't love me.
~*~*!*~*~Okay, so that is the first chapter. What did you think? This basically happened to me. The same plot, the same story. It gets sad at the end. But should it stop there? Do you think I should stop where he hates her (where I am) or should I continue and make him realize he loves her? Which will never happen to me. If I do continue on though, it will not be from the heart because I have not yet gotten there, if I ever will. Well, thank you, and please review! I'll even take flames I'm so desperate!! Thanks. ~Kalina Rusharu Mistotseya III ~*~*!*~*~
DeathSword X Chapter 1
No! Wait! I forgot to tell you something. This is my life story. Pan will be me and Trunks will be 'him.' "For those that know, they should not, and for those that don't, no explanation needed." This story should be enough. So here comes the story.
DeathSword X Chapter 1
"Panny, wake up!" Videl shouted. A very sleepy Pan stumbled into the kitchen. "Breakfast's ready." Pan woke right up and drooled at the mounds of pancakes in front of her. She sat down, and in a matter of seconds, the food was gone.
"Thanks mom, I gotta go to Bra's. See ya later. Bye!" Pan rushed out of the house.
"Saiyans." Videl rolled her eyes.
Pan flew to Bra's as fast as she could. She couldn't wait to talk to her best friend. She got there and ran into the house without knocking. "Pan," Bulma yelled, "Bra's in her room."
"Thanks." She found Bra still sleeping. "BRA!!! It's like 9 o'clock! What the hell are you doing sleeping?"
"Huh. Leave me alone."
"I'll go shopping with you later if you get up right now."
"God, Pan, you must be desperate. Fine, it sounds important." Bra stumbled out of bed, got changed, and came out. (I don't know where she came out from either. O_o o_O) "Well, what is it?"
"Umm...I was thinking last night that....."
"WHAT!!"
~Geez, how should I say this?~ "I want a makeover."
Bra jumped up and down. "Yayy! I was so dying for...wait a minute. Pan, what's up? What happened?"
"Uh...nothing, really. I just thought it was about time." ~Good, Bra believes it. Trunks, maybe now you'll notice me.~
After Bra was done "getting ready" as she called it 2 hours later, they went shopping. Bra pulled Pan into store after store making her buy the skimpiest looking outfits. Pan tried to buy something decent, but Bra just gave her "the look." Finally, when they were done, they went back to C.C.
"Oh my Gosh!" Bra shouted. "We only have four hours until the party starts!"
"What party? You never told me - " Pan was cut off by Bra pulling her to her room to change. The first hour was used to pick the perfect outfit. Pan was in a beautiful midnight blue dress. It came to about mid-thigh with slits up the sides. There was no back and a very low V-shape cut-off showed more than a hint of cleavage. Bra was in a blood red halter top and black leather hip-huggers (my two favorite colors!).
"Pan, you look absolutely stunning, but... lose the bandana. We have to do something with your hair!"
"But Bra..." Pan would have continued her protest if Bra hadn't sat her down and ripped off her bandana. The next two hours were used on creating the most ravishing hair styles. Pan had her hair twisted upon her haid with sexy curls framing her face. It looked as though it would fall any moment, but it kept its place. After that was finished, Bra pulled out the makeup. "No way!" Pan shouted. "You will not put that on me."
"Trust me, Pan. You'll look beautiful."
~Well, I guess she's right. This had better be worth it.~
The next hour flew by and Bra twirled Pan around in her chair. "Look." She said, turning Pan to where she could see the mirror. Pan slowly got up and saw how wonderful she looked. "Now, we go downstairs." Bra took Pan's hand and led her to the stairs. She walked slowly down the steps. The music stopped and everyone turned to see her.
Trunks POV
I am quite thoroughly enjoying the party. I chat with Uub and Goten when suddenly, the music stops. I turn to see what everyone's staring at and I see 'her.' My eyes get big and I start to drool. Is this really my tomboy Panny? All dressed up and looking completely gorgeous? So elegant, so graceful, as she decends the stairs. Oh how long I've liked her. Yeah, we were friends. Not the best of friends, but still friends. Ever since I've broke up with Marron I've liked her. But, if annything ever happened between us, which won't, Goten, Uub, and her parents, and mine would not accept it. Oh, how I want her. She's so young. She shoudln't be held back by me. Yet, I still like her, maybe I love her. No, I can't say that. It's impossible. I sigh and turn around as the music starts again. Pan...
End Trunks POV
Bulma stood and tapped on her glass. "Excuse me everyone. I have an announcement to make. My family and the Son's are going to the beach at our resort house next week. My family has the top floor. The Son's have the bottom. Thank you."
Pan's POV
Oh my God. I'm going to the beach. with Trunks. I'll finally get to spend time with him. Maybe I'll tell him. But I know I will be rejected. Damn age difference. I love you, Trunks, but it's a shame you don't love me.
~*~*!*~*~Okay, so that is the first chapter. What did you think? This basically happened to me. The same plot, the same story. It gets sad at the end. But should it stop there? Do you think I should stop where he hates her (where I am) or should I continue and make him realize he loves her? Which will never happen to me. If I do continue on though, it will not be from the heart because I have not yet gotten there, if I ever will. Well, thank you, and please review! I'll even take flames I'm so desperate!! Thanks. ~Kalina Rusharu Mistotseya III ~*~*!*~*~