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could take Eli off there hands, hmmmmmmmmmm...
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(same day after school)
*Eli- Grace you still coming on Saturday
*Grace- Yeah, if I can but I don't know I could have lots of homework.
*Eli- I am way more important than homework.
*Grace- Sure you, are. Some one has a bit of an ego.
*Eli- No ego just a lot of knowledge, I know that I am more important than homework.
*Grace- No homework wins; cause in order to get into college I actually have to get good grades.
*Eli- Yeah, yeah.
*Grace- Trust me if I can come I will be there.
(It's Saturday and Grace decides to go to see Eli's band so she drives to the address she was given and walks to the garage and stands at the door and watches, but decides to wait to say hi until they finish the song.)
(Eli band is singing the final chorus) And this day And this way Why can't we Why can't we Live together Love each other Hear one another Can't you just love me
*Before Grace has a chance to speak and tell Eli that she is there, another girl (the one she saw at the theatre) came up and kissed Eli and started talk to him, Grace slammed the door against the wall, so he knew she was there, then she started to walk to her car*
*Eli- GRACE, Wait
*Grace- (pauses from her fast paced walk) Wait for what?
*Eli- Wait for me
*Grace- No (She starts walking)
*Eli- Just no, tell me to screw myself, or to go to hell. Don't say no.
*Grace- No.
*Eli- Don't do that, it seems so deadly.
*Grace- You don't understand that it is, I am not mad at you, I am just giving up. (She gets in her car)
*Eli- GRACE WAIT (the car pulls away) crap (he runs to his own car and takes of)
(Eli arrives at home and sees Grace's care isn't there but runs into the house anyway)
*Eli- Jessie you here?
*Jessie- What's wrong (she says coming into the kitchen)
*Eli- Have you seen Grace?
*Jessie- Not since this morning why? (there is a pause) Eli, What did you do?
*Eli- She saw another girl kiss me.
*Jessie- ELI, how could you I though you liked Grace, I thought you LOVED Grace.
*Eli- I do, I screwed up big time, I don't know what to do.
*Jessie- Let her cool down first of all, I bet she is pissed.
*Eli- That's what's worrying me, she's not pissed at all.
*Jessie- What did she say?
*Eli - She said she was giving up?
*Jessie- Eli, I think you may have just screwed yourself.
*Eli- I know I did, how do I fix it?
*Jessie- I am not sure you can.
(Eli looks stunned then runs back out to the car, he drives around for a few hours until he spots her car at the park, then he sees her sitting on a rock near the small pond)
*Eli- Grace?
*Grace- I don't understand you.
*Eli- What does that mean?
*Grace- You have masochistic tendencies, whenever something good happens you mess it up. (She is still speaking calm and coldly)
*Eli- I don't mean to.
*Grace- Then again you never mean to do anything, do you Eli. You never mean to hurt me, you never mean to piss me off, and yet you still do.
*Eli- So your pissed?
*Grace- I could be, but at this point I'm not.
*Eli- I don't want things to end like this, because I messed up.
*Grace- That's how everything ends someone screws up.
*Eli- I don't want this to end at all
*Grace- Of course you don't, after all I am sure that I am the first girl to dump you.
*Eli- That has nothing to do with this and you know it.
*Grace- I don't know it, I don't know if anything you say is true, after all you said that you loved me. That was obviously was crap.
*Eli- Don't do this, I do love you.
*Grace- Just like you hung out with Justin, and when you said that we should go out.
*Eli- God dammit Grace I don't know what to do.
*Grace- You have one of two choices both you are good at, one get laid, two do nothing.
*Eli- Wow that wasn't cynical.
(Grace stands up and starts to walk away)
*Eli- Grace, don't do this.
*Grace- Do what?
*Eli- Break my heart
*Grace- I think you are confused I am the one who got my heart broken and you would be the ass who did it.
*Eli- Grace?
*Grace- Bye Eli
(Grace heads to her car, then drives home and goes inside to see Jessie is in the kitchen)
*Jessie- Did he find you?
*Grace- He who?
*Jessie- Eli?
*Grace- Yes he found me
*Jessie- I take it you guys didn't work things out
*Grace- There's nothing to work out
(she goes to her room)
Dear Diary, Another bad day, why did Eli tell me that he loved me? He goes through all this, acts like he really likes me only to cheat on me. I don't know why I am not angry at him, maybe I was expecting this.
(Kitchen, Eli walks in and sees Jessie)
*Eli- Did you talk to her
*Jessie- Sort of
*Eli- How bad was it?
*Jessie- I think you should start trying to get over her.
*Eli- I can't just get over her, I love her.
*Jessie- Then why the HELL did you kiss another girl?
*Eli- I didn't kiss her she kissed me.
*Jessie- Eli!
*Eli- I was dating her I hadn't had the chance to dump her yet, she was supposed to be out of town. I was going to break it off when she got back.
*Jessie- You should have told her the moment she showed up at the rehearsal.
*Eli- She showed up waited for us to finish the song kissed me, and then I saw Grace
*Jessie- Wow so you are actually weren't to wrong, although you should have told Grace about the girl before, if you had you wouldn't be here.
*Eli- I know dammit I wish I did tell her.
*Jessie- Who knows there may be hope for you yet, but you better have a damn good apology.
*Eli- God I know.
(Eli heads out the Garage grabs his guitar and paper and sits on his bed)
(Later he runs into the house to Jessie room)
*Eli- I have an idea
*Jessie- Good
*Eli- Ok here's what we do..
(The entire week Grace doesn't avoid Eli but she refuses any conversation beyond what is necessary, it is Saturday and Jessie is in the kitchen eating breakfast when Grace comes down)
*Jessie- Hey Grace
*Grace- Morning
*Jessie- What you doing today?
*Grace- Not sure yet I am going to make plans later
*Jessie- I am seeing this band play later want to come
*Grace- Sure why not, as long as you promise not to talk about Eli
*Jessie- Ok fine no Eli
*Grace- Good
*Jessie- You really should talk to him though
*Grace- This is you not talking about him?
*Jessie- You said no talking about him at the concert.
*Grace- No Eli talk period
*Jessie- Ok, Ok
(Jessie gets up and heads upstairs, Eli comes in from the garage and Lily comes from upstairs)
*Lily- Morning Grace
*Grace- Hi mom
*Eli- Morning Lily, Grace can we talk?
*Grace- Sorry, I have to go (She heads upstairs)
*Lily- What's wrong with you two?
*Eli- Nothing, why?
*Lily- You keep asking her to talk and she keeps saying no.
*Eli- She is mad at me.
*Lily- Be patient she'll get over it.
*Eli- That's the thing I am not sure she will this time.
Sorry guys cliff hanger more to come soon.
*Eli- Grace you still coming on Saturday
*Grace- Yeah, if I can but I don't know I could have lots of homework.
*Eli- I am way more important than homework.
*Grace- Sure you, are. Some one has a bit of an ego.
*Eli- No ego just a lot of knowledge, I know that I am more important than homework.
*Grace- No homework wins; cause in order to get into college I actually have to get good grades.
*Eli- Yeah, yeah.
*Grace- Trust me if I can come I will be there.
(It's Saturday and Grace decides to go to see Eli's band so she drives to the address she was given and walks to the garage and stands at the door and watches, but decides to wait to say hi until they finish the song.)
(Eli band is singing the final chorus) And this day And this way Why can't we Why can't we Live together Love each other Hear one another Can't you just love me
*Before Grace has a chance to speak and tell Eli that she is there, another girl (the one she saw at the theatre) came up and kissed Eli and started talk to him, Grace slammed the door against the wall, so he knew she was there, then she started to walk to her car*
*Eli- GRACE, Wait
*Grace- (pauses from her fast paced walk) Wait for what?
*Eli- Wait for me
*Grace- No (She starts walking)
*Eli- Just no, tell me to screw myself, or to go to hell. Don't say no.
*Grace- No.
*Eli- Don't do that, it seems so deadly.
*Grace- You don't understand that it is, I am not mad at you, I am just giving up. (She gets in her car)
*Eli- GRACE WAIT (the car pulls away) crap (he runs to his own car and takes of)
(Eli arrives at home and sees Grace's care isn't there but runs into the house anyway)
*Eli- Jessie you here?
*Jessie- What's wrong (she says coming into the kitchen)
*Eli- Have you seen Grace?
*Jessie- Not since this morning why? (there is a pause) Eli, What did you do?
*Eli- She saw another girl kiss me.
*Jessie- ELI, how could you I though you liked Grace, I thought you LOVED Grace.
*Eli- I do, I screwed up big time, I don't know what to do.
*Jessie- Let her cool down first of all, I bet she is pissed.
*Eli- That's what's worrying me, she's not pissed at all.
*Jessie- What did she say?
*Eli - She said she was giving up?
*Jessie- Eli, I think you may have just screwed yourself.
*Eli- I know I did, how do I fix it?
*Jessie- I am not sure you can.
(Eli looks stunned then runs back out to the car, he drives around for a few hours until he spots her car at the park, then he sees her sitting on a rock near the small pond)
*Eli- Grace?
*Grace- I don't understand you.
*Eli- What does that mean?
*Grace- You have masochistic tendencies, whenever something good happens you mess it up. (She is still speaking calm and coldly)
*Eli- I don't mean to.
*Grace- Then again you never mean to do anything, do you Eli. You never mean to hurt me, you never mean to piss me off, and yet you still do.
*Eli- So your pissed?
*Grace- I could be, but at this point I'm not.
*Eli- I don't want things to end like this, because I messed up.
*Grace- That's how everything ends someone screws up.
*Eli- I don't want this to end at all
*Grace- Of course you don't, after all I am sure that I am the first girl to dump you.
*Eli- That has nothing to do with this and you know it.
*Grace- I don't know it, I don't know if anything you say is true, after all you said that you loved me. That was obviously was crap.
*Eli- Don't do this, I do love you.
*Grace- Just like you hung out with Justin, and when you said that we should go out.
*Eli- God dammit Grace I don't know what to do.
*Grace- You have one of two choices both you are good at, one get laid, two do nothing.
*Eli- Wow that wasn't cynical.
(Grace stands up and starts to walk away)
*Eli- Grace, don't do this.
*Grace- Do what?
*Eli- Break my heart
*Grace- I think you are confused I am the one who got my heart broken and you would be the ass who did it.
*Eli- Grace?
*Grace- Bye Eli
(Grace heads to her car, then drives home and goes inside to see Jessie is in the kitchen)
*Jessie- Did he find you?
*Grace- He who?
*Jessie- Eli?
*Grace- Yes he found me
*Jessie- I take it you guys didn't work things out
*Grace- There's nothing to work out
(she goes to her room)
Dear Diary, Another bad day, why did Eli tell me that he loved me? He goes through all this, acts like he really likes me only to cheat on me. I don't know why I am not angry at him, maybe I was expecting this.
(Kitchen, Eli walks in and sees Jessie)
*Eli- Did you talk to her
*Jessie- Sort of
*Eli- How bad was it?
*Jessie- I think you should start trying to get over her.
*Eli- I can't just get over her, I love her.
*Jessie- Then why the HELL did you kiss another girl?
*Eli- I didn't kiss her she kissed me.
*Jessie- Eli!
*Eli- I was dating her I hadn't had the chance to dump her yet, she was supposed to be out of town. I was going to break it off when she got back.
*Jessie- You should have told her the moment she showed up at the rehearsal.
*Eli- She showed up waited for us to finish the song kissed me, and then I saw Grace
*Jessie- Wow so you are actually weren't to wrong, although you should have told Grace about the girl before, if you had you wouldn't be here.
*Eli- I know dammit I wish I did tell her.
*Jessie- Who knows there may be hope for you yet, but you better have a damn good apology.
*Eli- God I know.
(Eli heads out the Garage grabs his guitar and paper and sits on his bed)
(Later he runs into the house to Jessie room)
*Eli- I have an idea
*Jessie- Good
*Eli- Ok here's what we do..
(The entire week Grace doesn't avoid Eli but she refuses any conversation beyond what is necessary, it is Saturday and Jessie is in the kitchen eating breakfast when Grace comes down)
*Jessie- Hey Grace
*Grace- Morning
*Jessie- What you doing today?
*Grace- Not sure yet I am going to make plans later
*Jessie- I am seeing this band play later want to come
*Grace- Sure why not, as long as you promise not to talk about Eli
*Jessie- Ok fine no Eli
*Grace- Good
*Jessie- You really should talk to him though
*Grace- This is you not talking about him?
*Jessie- You said no talking about him at the concert.
*Grace- No Eli talk period
*Jessie- Ok, Ok
(Jessie gets up and heads upstairs, Eli comes in from the garage and Lily comes from upstairs)
*Lily- Morning Grace
*Grace- Hi mom
*Eli- Morning Lily, Grace can we talk?
*Grace- Sorry, I have to go (She heads upstairs)
*Lily- What's wrong with you two?
*Eli- Nothing, why?
*Lily- You keep asking her to talk and she keeps saying no.
*Eli- She is mad at me.
*Lily- Be patient she'll get over it.
*Eli- That's the thing I am not sure she will this time.
Sorry guys cliff hanger more to come soon.