I really hope you guys like it i have tried really hared and iam new at
this.
~chapter 3:The meeting~
Eric and Shawn sat in the car that was parked
on
side of the road. If they read the map right the
house was white with yellow shutters and a black
door. Eric had no idea what to say when he got
there, all these feelings rushed at him at he same
time. What if he had the wrong house or what if
Tommy had no idea who he was. "Eric lets just
knock on the door." Shawn said hopping Eric
would agree. "Yea okay this is it iam finally going
to see Tommy.
Eric and Shawn walked up the path way that
was lined with tulips. "Do you know what you are
going to say?" Shawn asked as they approched the
house. "I will think of something. Hoppfully
Tommy will answer the door,know who i am,
and introduce me to his parents himself."
Eric replied as he felt his hands getting tense.
When they got to the door Shawn knocked on it.
Seconds later a middle aged women wearing a
blue dress opened the door. "Hi iam Eric and this
is my friend Shawn. You dont know us but i was
told that Tommy Bings lives here." Eric said
trying
to be as calm as possible. "How do you know
Tommy?" Asked the women. "When Tommy
lived in the orphanage we used to hang out all the
time." Eric answered. "Well come on in you can
have a seet in the living room and i will get
Tommy. Shawn and Eric noticed that the
house
was beautifully decorated, but from the looks
of it you wouldnt know a child lived here, but they
didn't want to make a big deal about it .
"See that wasent so hard the lady was really nice."
Shawn said. "Yea i meen she didn't even ask alot
of questions, i know if it was me i wouldnt let 2
strangers into my house." Eric replied. "Yea i
wouldn't either maby she had an idea we were
comming." Before Eric had time to answer
Tommy's mom came downstairs. "Tommy will be
down in a minute." Said the women. A few
minutes later They heard
a car pull up and a older looking man walked in
"I see we have guests." The man said as he
walked into the living room. "Yes they are friends
of Tommy." Replied the women. They shook
hands and the man sat down. "So were are you
two boys from?" Asked the man. "We are from
Philidelphia. We are students at Pennbroke
college." Shawn and Eric said. Seconds later
Tommy came running downstairs. "Tommy,
this is Eric and Shawn they said they are friends of
yours." Said the women to her son. Every one was
silence. "ERIC!!!" Tommy yelled as he hugged
Eric. "Hey buddy i told you i would come and see
you." Eric said exidedly. "Me and Eric had
some time betweeen studying and decicded to
visit you." Shawn said "Great i really missed you
do you want to see my room?" "Sure" Shawn and
Eric said excepting the invitation. They all went
upstairs.
After they left the parents were talking.
"I thought i told you not to let Tommy have friends
over here." Said the father "I am sorry just make
and exception this time." Asked the mother.
"Fine but this is the only time i make the rules for
that boy!" Demanded the father. "Okay" The
the women said quietly. Up in Tommy's room
Eric noticed there were no toys and Shawn
saw there was barley any sunlight. The only
things he had were some pictures he made in
school. "So Tommy maby me and Eric can take
you to the park." Shawn suggested. "Yea wait
here
i will go ask my dad". Tommy ran dowstairs.
"Dad, could i please go to the park with Eric
and Shawn." Tommy asked. "no. you know the
rules no going out alone with your friends." The
father said. "But dad you dont let me have
friends they are my only friends." Tommy
pleaded with his dad to let him go. "No
rules are rules you can tell them they can stay for
dinner but thats it." The father said. Tommy went
back upstairs. "No my parents dont let me go out
with my friends alone. But they said you can stay
for dinner." Tommy told Eric and Shawn. "Okay"
Eric and Shawn said. They all headed downstairs.
Hope you guys liked it the next chapter will be were Tommy tells Eric and Shawn a secret that changes everything.
~chapter 3:The meeting~
Eric and Shawn sat in the car that was parked
on
side of the road. If they read the map right the
house was white with yellow shutters and a black
door. Eric had no idea what to say when he got
there, all these feelings rushed at him at he same
time. What if he had the wrong house or what if
Tommy had no idea who he was. "Eric lets just
knock on the door." Shawn said hopping Eric
would agree. "Yea okay this is it iam finally going
to see Tommy.
Eric and Shawn walked up the path way that
was lined with tulips. "Do you know what you are
going to say?" Shawn asked as they approched the
house. "I will think of something. Hoppfully
Tommy will answer the door,know who i am,
and introduce me to his parents himself."
Eric replied as he felt his hands getting tense.
When they got to the door Shawn knocked on it.
Seconds later a middle aged women wearing a
blue dress opened the door. "Hi iam Eric and this
is my friend Shawn. You dont know us but i was
told that Tommy Bings lives here." Eric said
trying
to be as calm as possible. "How do you know
Tommy?" Asked the women. "When Tommy
lived in the orphanage we used to hang out all the
time." Eric answered. "Well come on in you can
have a seet in the living room and i will get
Tommy. Shawn and Eric noticed that the
house
was beautifully decorated, but from the looks
of it you wouldnt know a child lived here, but they
didn't want to make a big deal about it .
"See that wasent so hard the lady was really nice."
Shawn said. "Yea i meen she didn't even ask alot
of questions, i know if it was me i wouldnt let 2
strangers into my house." Eric replied. "Yea i
wouldn't either maby she had an idea we were
comming." Before Eric had time to answer
Tommy's mom came downstairs. "Tommy will be
down in a minute." Said the women. A few
minutes later They heard
a car pull up and a older looking man walked in
"I see we have guests." The man said as he
walked into the living room. "Yes they are friends
of Tommy." Replied the women. They shook
hands and the man sat down. "So were are you
two boys from?" Asked the man. "We are from
Philidelphia. We are students at Pennbroke
college." Shawn and Eric said. Seconds later
Tommy came running downstairs. "Tommy,
this is Eric and Shawn they said they are friends of
yours." Said the women to her son. Every one was
silence. "ERIC!!!" Tommy yelled as he hugged
Eric. "Hey buddy i told you i would come and see
you." Eric said exidedly. "Me and Eric had
some time betweeen studying and decicded to
visit you." Shawn said "Great i really missed you
do you want to see my room?" "Sure" Shawn and
Eric said excepting the invitation. They all went
upstairs.
After they left the parents were talking.
"I thought i told you not to let Tommy have friends
over here." Said the father "I am sorry just make
and exception this time." Asked the mother.
"Fine but this is the only time i make the rules for
that boy!" Demanded the father. "Okay" The
the women said quietly. Up in Tommy's room
Eric noticed there were no toys and Shawn
saw there was barley any sunlight. The only
things he had were some pictures he made in
school. "So Tommy maby me and Eric can take
you to the park." Shawn suggested. "Yea wait
here
i will go ask my dad". Tommy ran dowstairs.
"Dad, could i please go to the park with Eric
and Shawn." Tommy asked. "no. you know the
rules no going out alone with your friends." The
father said. "But dad you dont let me have
friends they are my only friends." Tommy
pleaded with his dad to let him go. "No
rules are rules you can tell them they can stay for
dinner but thats it." The father said. Tommy went
back upstairs. "No my parents dont let me go out
with my friends alone. But they said you can stay
for dinner." Tommy told Eric and Shawn. "Okay"
Eric and Shawn said. They all headed downstairs.
Hope you guys liked it the next chapter will be were Tommy tells Eric and Shawn a secret that changes everything.
