First Wolf Lake fic. be gentle. Comments, suggestions, praise, and nice
critiques always welcome.
Disclaimer:
This is a continuation of the Wolf Lake series. I don't own Wolf Lake. If I did it would still be on the air. Technically Wolf Lake isn't owned by anyone anymore, or is it? Oh well blame UPN, not me. Don't sue all you'll get is my collection of Jones Soda bottles.. Please I like them. All obvious characters belong to UPN, all others belong to me, don't take them.
Rating: R for language and mild violence (which might or might not come, will be the same for the whole series I plan to write)
A/N if this is a little hard to read, it's because I with scripts, some people include sound tracks, well I do that and I include camera shots, I'll try not use funky script language, even I find it annoying, if I start into it, you can all set the dogs on me. Why write it like that you ask? It's a matter of view. My English teacher says that a good writer makes you use your imagination, a great writer makes you see exactly what they are seeing. Camera shots, music suggestions and more A/N's are in brackets.
thanks,
~Stigmata_Crow~
Ep. 10- Having a Bad Day
(Pan into Police Office from glass door until Sophia and the Sheriff are both seen. After Sophia collapses, shot switches to Matt's face, with an obvious worried expression)
"Dad, help me." Sophia collapsed into her father's arms. The strange pain that started deep in her belly after she threw Luke had now spread throughout her body. It felt as if her inner organs were fighting to get though her skin, which was on fire. Panic surged through Matt Donner. He wasn't ready for this; he'd never be ready for this. The threat that she might die, the fact that after the Flip she'd be under Luke's rule. if this actually happened, he'd have to deliver her into the hands of the one person he'd been trying to protect her from. He picked up his daughter's now limp body and carried her to the cruiser. He gently laid her in the back, then jumped in the front, put his foot to the floor, and sped off towards Sherman's.
* * * (Camera follows Luke throughout scene. Scene starts with Luke on hood of car, head in hands. Music: She Hates Me, by Puddle of Mudd, yeah, it's kind of obvious, I know.)
Luke sat on the broken hood of his car, mind racing. On one hand he wanted to go wake up Jake, the town mechanic, and get him to fix his car before the whole town found out a half-breed female totaled it. On the other he wanted to smash what was left of the windshield out get the fuck in the car and find Sophia. Her scent still wafted through the air. He could smell it, not quite ready to change, but damn close, but if he could find her and keep her away from Donner, he could change that. He got up and proceeded to start Option #2 but stopped just as he was going to kick in the window. What was he doing? Why, in all things good and right in this world, did he care about this zoo-bait, half-breed girl who was afraid of what she was, and had a father who was supposed to be a super-power in the pack, but hasn't gone native in 16 years? What business did he have doing this? He was the son of the Alpha, the most important person under 20 in this county. He shook his head and flipped out his cell phone
(Cut to Jake, young man of about 25, sitting at kitchen table, reading paper. Camera looks around room to find sink full of dishes, and clutter on the counter, otherwise house is pretty decent. The floor looks to be made of quality tiles, big island with nice range stove. Jake is obviously an up and coming member of the Pack, though is only a mechanic, in fact he's the only mechanic in 15 mile, so business is booming. As scene carries on, the camera follows Jake though the house, turning off lights, locking doors, and finally sighing and getting in bed, as the phone rings.)
Jake was just getting to sleep, and boy was he pissed! First he had to deal with that insane idiot, Miranda crashing another car whilst trying to get away from Sheriff Donner after stealing make-up from the Wolf Lake department store, then, Terry, the town drunk had managed to steal Queen Presley's car and run it into the lake, so not only did he have to tow the car, he had to stop the Hill-bitch from going primal and eating the pour sap, and lastly, he had to spend an hour doing a touchup on an inch long scratch on Mrs. Cates hood, cause God forbid he miss a spot. Yep, today was a looooooooooong day, and now he intended to go to sleep and dream about a large harem of women feeding him extra rare meat. "BRRRRRRRRRRING!" "Damn that phone, " he swore as he fell off the bed from being startled. "What the hell do you want!?" "Jesus, Jake you sound tense, mom give you a hard time." "Shut it, Luke, what the hell do you think your gonna ask me now?" "I need you to bring the truck to Main and Washington. I'll be here waiting for you." "For Christ sake, Luke, It's 2 in the morning" "Mom would not like the tone you're taking with me." "Ass!" Jake slammed his fist on the table and growled into the receiver. "No need to get violent, just get here in 15." "Fine, I'm coming, but you owe me." "I always do." Jake hung up the phone and ran a hand though his brown hair. (Camera on Jake's face, eyes closed, looking stressed. As he opens them we see that his eyes have turned from the previous brown, to a glowing yellow/green, yep people, he's a Skin Walker.) "Dumb kid," Jake mutters. "What'd he do now.?"
*** (Cut to Vivian and Tyler sitting in the Alpha's office, no needed description for décor there. Vivian in the leather the leather chair behind the desk, Tyler squirming in the less decadent chair in front of the desk. Throughout scene Vivian remains completely calm, while Tyler is quite nervous.)
"So Tyler, where she?" Vivian twirled a letter opener in her hands. Even though the blade was dull, this made her overwhelming presence even more intimidating. "We had her in the truck, I swear! Then Officer Asshole let her out. Don't worry I'll take care of it.' "Well I believe that's what you said last time. And now Kanin is even more suspicious than ever, and Ruby's still missing. You better shape up Creed, or you'll find yourself in more trouble than Ruby. Tyler's face suddenly turned into a big smirk. "Well, Viv. I seem to remember you liking my." He stopped to chuckle and rub his chin. ".Cockiness whilst I shared your bed." Vivian stopped twirling the letter opener and hurled it at Tyler, landing it in his shoulder. He howled in pain. "Tyler, Tyler, Tyler. I thought that you would have more sense then to mention that in my husband's office. That was your last chance. You have two days to find, subdue, and make her fully your wife, or your name will be added to her Capture or Kill Order, and believe me Tyler, there are a lot of people out there that want to kill you. Tyler kept his smirk as his pulled the letter opener out of his arm, got out of the chair, and headed out the door. "Got you there Viv, I don't need your permission to go sleep with my life." He walked closer to the door, and then turned. "And you might want to be careful on how fast you hand out those orders, what would your son say if he found out that you had a price on his sisters head. He already knows about us." Tyler started into an outright laugh as he shut the door, finding utter glee as he heard Vivian throw a vase against the door.
***
(Cut to the Sheriff speeding in his cruiser. We see Sophia in the back seat, writhing in pain. Matt looks like he's just seen a ghost, and shit himself. Music: Middle of Yesterday by Our Lady Peace, anyone's whose heard would agree.)
"Come on, COME ON!" Matt screams at the engine of the car, which was starting to back up. He had to get to Sherman's, fast, and he would be there in five minutes if this damn engine would just co-operate. As he turned on to the 6th Concession, which finally happened to be where Sherman lived, he looked at the mirror. His eyes were shifting between blue and glow paint green. He needed to calm down. Sophia needed him, and she needed him to be a calm cool father, not a hot-blooded Skin Walker. He finally managed to get to Wolf Lake Road and saw Sherman's big white Victorian on the corner. He parked the car in the drive, reached through to the back and gently picked up Sophia's limp moaning body and carried it to the door. Just as he was about to knock, Sherman pulled open the door. "Matt? What are you." Sherman looked down to see Sophia unconscious in Matt's arms. "Sherman, you have to help us." (Cut scene)
A/N Well I think this would be a good time for a commercial break, plus my creativity's on a fritz. Should post up chapter 2, which will just be continuing this episode, soon.
Disclaimer:
This is a continuation of the Wolf Lake series. I don't own Wolf Lake. If I did it would still be on the air. Technically Wolf Lake isn't owned by anyone anymore, or is it? Oh well blame UPN, not me. Don't sue all you'll get is my collection of Jones Soda bottles.. Please I like them. All obvious characters belong to UPN, all others belong to me, don't take them.
Rating: R for language and mild violence (which might or might not come, will be the same for the whole series I plan to write)
A/N if this is a little hard to read, it's because I with scripts, some people include sound tracks, well I do that and I include camera shots, I'll try not use funky script language, even I find it annoying, if I start into it, you can all set the dogs on me. Why write it like that you ask? It's a matter of view. My English teacher says that a good writer makes you use your imagination, a great writer makes you see exactly what they are seeing. Camera shots, music suggestions and more A/N's are in brackets.
thanks,
~Stigmata_Crow~
Ep. 10- Having a Bad Day
(Pan into Police Office from glass door until Sophia and the Sheriff are both seen. After Sophia collapses, shot switches to Matt's face, with an obvious worried expression)
"Dad, help me." Sophia collapsed into her father's arms. The strange pain that started deep in her belly after she threw Luke had now spread throughout her body. It felt as if her inner organs were fighting to get though her skin, which was on fire. Panic surged through Matt Donner. He wasn't ready for this; he'd never be ready for this. The threat that she might die, the fact that after the Flip she'd be under Luke's rule. if this actually happened, he'd have to deliver her into the hands of the one person he'd been trying to protect her from. He picked up his daughter's now limp body and carried her to the cruiser. He gently laid her in the back, then jumped in the front, put his foot to the floor, and sped off towards Sherman's.
* * * (Camera follows Luke throughout scene. Scene starts with Luke on hood of car, head in hands. Music: She Hates Me, by Puddle of Mudd, yeah, it's kind of obvious, I know.)
Luke sat on the broken hood of his car, mind racing. On one hand he wanted to go wake up Jake, the town mechanic, and get him to fix his car before the whole town found out a half-breed female totaled it. On the other he wanted to smash what was left of the windshield out get the fuck in the car and find Sophia. Her scent still wafted through the air. He could smell it, not quite ready to change, but damn close, but if he could find her and keep her away from Donner, he could change that. He got up and proceeded to start Option #2 but stopped just as he was going to kick in the window. What was he doing? Why, in all things good and right in this world, did he care about this zoo-bait, half-breed girl who was afraid of what she was, and had a father who was supposed to be a super-power in the pack, but hasn't gone native in 16 years? What business did he have doing this? He was the son of the Alpha, the most important person under 20 in this county. He shook his head and flipped out his cell phone
(Cut to Jake, young man of about 25, sitting at kitchen table, reading paper. Camera looks around room to find sink full of dishes, and clutter on the counter, otherwise house is pretty decent. The floor looks to be made of quality tiles, big island with nice range stove. Jake is obviously an up and coming member of the Pack, though is only a mechanic, in fact he's the only mechanic in 15 mile, so business is booming. As scene carries on, the camera follows Jake though the house, turning off lights, locking doors, and finally sighing and getting in bed, as the phone rings.)
Jake was just getting to sleep, and boy was he pissed! First he had to deal with that insane idiot, Miranda crashing another car whilst trying to get away from Sheriff Donner after stealing make-up from the Wolf Lake department store, then, Terry, the town drunk had managed to steal Queen Presley's car and run it into the lake, so not only did he have to tow the car, he had to stop the Hill-bitch from going primal and eating the pour sap, and lastly, he had to spend an hour doing a touchup on an inch long scratch on Mrs. Cates hood, cause God forbid he miss a spot. Yep, today was a looooooooooong day, and now he intended to go to sleep and dream about a large harem of women feeding him extra rare meat. "BRRRRRRRRRRING!" "Damn that phone, " he swore as he fell off the bed from being startled. "What the hell do you want!?" "Jesus, Jake you sound tense, mom give you a hard time." "Shut it, Luke, what the hell do you think your gonna ask me now?" "I need you to bring the truck to Main and Washington. I'll be here waiting for you." "For Christ sake, Luke, It's 2 in the morning" "Mom would not like the tone you're taking with me." "Ass!" Jake slammed his fist on the table and growled into the receiver. "No need to get violent, just get here in 15." "Fine, I'm coming, but you owe me." "I always do." Jake hung up the phone and ran a hand though his brown hair. (Camera on Jake's face, eyes closed, looking stressed. As he opens them we see that his eyes have turned from the previous brown, to a glowing yellow/green, yep people, he's a Skin Walker.) "Dumb kid," Jake mutters. "What'd he do now.?"
*** (Cut to Vivian and Tyler sitting in the Alpha's office, no needed description for décor there. Vivian in the leather the leather chair behind the desk, Tyler squirming in the less decadent chair in front of the desk. Throughout scene Vivian remains completely calm, while Tyler is quite nervous.)
"So Tyler, where she?" Vivian twirled a letter opener in her hands. Even though the blade was dull, this made her overwhelming presence even more intimidating. "We had her in the truck, I swear! Then Officer Asshole let her out. Don't worry I'll take care of it.' "Well I believe that's what you said last time. And now Kanin is even more suspicious than ever, and Ruby's still missing. You better shape up Creed, or you'll find yourself in more trouble than Ruby. Tyler's face suddenly turned into a big smirk. "Well, Viv. I seem to remember you liking my." He stopped to chuckle and rub his chin. ".Cockiness whilst I shared your bed." Vivian stopped twirling the letter opener and hurled it at Tyler, landing it in his shoulder. He howled in pain. "Tyler, Tyler, Tyler. I thought that you would have more sense then to mention that in my husband's office. That was your last chance. You have two days to find, subdue, and make her fully your wife, or your name will be added to her Capture or Kill Order, and believe me Tyler, there are a lot of people out there that want to kill you. Tyler kept his smirk as his pulled the letter opener out of his arm, got out of the chair, and headed out the door. "Got you there Viv, I don't need your permission to go sleep with my life." He walked closer to the door, and then turned. "And you might want to be careful on how fast you hand out those orders, what would your son say if he found out that you had a price on his sisters head. He already knows about us." Tyler started into an outright laugh as he shut the door, finding utter glee as he heard Vivian throw a vase against the door.
***
(Cut to the Sheriff speeding in his cruiser. We see Sophia in the back seat, writhing in pain. Matt looks like he's just seen a ghost, and shit himself. Music: Middle of Yesterday by Our Lady Peace, anyone's whose heard would agree.)
"Come on, COME ON!" Matt screams at the engine of the car, which was starting to back up. He had to get to Sherman's, fast, and he would be there in five minutes if this damn engine would just co-operate. As he turned on to the 6th Concession, which finally happened to be where Sherman lived, he looked at the mirror. His eyes were shifting between blue and glow paint green. He needed to calm down. Sophia needed him, and she needed him to be a calm cool father, not a hot-blooded Skin Walker. He finally managed to get to Wolf Lake Road and saw Sherman's big white Victorian on the corner. He parked the car in the drive, reached through to the back and gently picked up Sophia's limp moaning body and carried it to the door. Just as he was about to knock, Sherman pulled open the door. "Matt? What are you." Sherman looked down to see Sophia unconscious in Matt's arms. "Sherman, you have to help us." (Cut scene)
A/N Well I think this would be a good time for a commercial break, plus my creativity's on a fritz. Should post up chapter 2, which will just be continuing this episode, soon.