A/N Once again thanks to all the reviewers!!! I went through all the last
chapters and organized them a bit, mostly grammar mistakes.
I've decided to start naming the ones who reviewed and because I haven't done this before I'm going to name now all the people who reviewed my story from the first chapter:
crazed spyromaniac
Mako-Shadows
Samiralie
Emmy
HoT*like*fire
Midnightlily
TiniRini
Bon
The Infallible Teller
KateLupin
amy
Idslfds
Eleana23
HoT*like*fire
Jessica
Jessica
GeeGee Love
*boy*charmer*
Time Twins
midnightlily
hannah
Eleana23
SCHEm
Ricabriel
Haynstyle947
HoT*lIkE*fIrE
lil lily
ICRAZY
A-man
lil lily
k
Lisa
Pickle Princess
NotSure
adriana - No William doesn't like Gracie Lu! You'll find out why he was weird! Although it's a nice idea, Lol. And about the James thing - I really think I'm going insane, they are everywhere!!! (now I sound like a horror movie, lol)
Unshed Tears - Thank you for the 'constrictive criticism'! I've went through almost all of the chapters and tried to correct the grammatical mistakes.
lil lily - To tell you the truth Gracie Lu Freebush is getting a bit on my nerves as well but she's so funny to write! But don't worry, you won't be seeing her a lot!!!
Mariah Colwell
A-man
Princess Hermione - I grantee William won't be prince charming for long! He's too perfect right now, isn't he?
Sugar
Lady Lightning
And now to the fanfiction:
Is It Love?
Chapter Ten: Evans and Her Lover Boy. (I have ten chapters, yupi!!!)
The ball came and went, James was spending time with Gracie Lu and Lily with William.
One Sunday Lily and Willaim were having picnic near the lake.
"So what's your favorite subject?" They wanted to get to know each other better.
"Charms, yours?" Lily replied.
"Transfiguration."
*Just like Potter* Lily thought.
*Forget stupid Potter!*
*I'm not even thinking about him, ok!*
She shook the thoughts out of her head and smiled sweetly at Williams.
"And what's your favorite sweet?" He asked.
"Chocolate Frogs, what's your favorite sweet?"
"You." He smiled.
She smiled back.
They got closer.
"Oh, how lovely, the two lovebirds." A voice full of sarcasm said behind them.
Lily could recognize the voice anywhere.
"What do you want Potter?"
"Professor McGonagall told me to find you Evans, there's a prefect meeting in about 5 minutes and I need to take you there."
"Great." She sighed. "I have to go now William, duty calls!"
"Fine." William said coming closer.
"So, I'll see you around."
"Yeah." Their lips were almost touching but-
"Disgusting! I think I'm going to be sick!" Potter looked completely disgusted.
Lily tried to ignore him and was ready to kiss William again when Potter started making vomiting sounds.
"GOD POTTER!!!" Lily got annoyed. She left William and started chasing Potter to the castle.
Potter seemed pretty pleased with himself. "I am a god, Evans."
William sulked.
*Potter is taking all of Lily's attention!*
Lily ran after Potter through the castle until he reached a little room, Lily came storming in and yelled:
"Bloody hell Potter, you annoying -"
But suddenly realized that she was facing not only Potter but also Professor Dumbledore, the house heads and the rest of the prefects.
She blushed to the roots of her hair.
"Take a seat please miss Evans." Dumbledore smiled and he seemed amused by the situation.
Lily nodded and sat down, in the only seat available, next to Potter.
She glared at him.
He stuck his tongue out in response.
"Oh, go and shove your tongue in some stupid Ravenclaw's throat Potter!"
The meeting went on and on, and on and on, and on and on.
Lily did her best not to fall asleep and tried to make a good impression on the teachers.
Suddenly she noticed Potter snickering, she looked at the direction he was looking and started snickering too - there was Snape, asleep, drooling over himself.
Just then, Professor McGonagall asked Snape something.
"Mr. Snape, will you please answer the question?!" she said a bit louder.
Malfoy shook Snape trying to awake him.
"Don't take my teddy!" Snape suddenly yelled and woke up.
This was too much for both James and Lily, they started cracking up.
McGonagall gave them a stern look, which made them both shut up, and then addressed Snape.
"I suggest you will try to stay awake on meetings Mr. Snape! Or have you given up on trying to be Head Boy?"
Snape ears went pink and James looked smug. They were fighting who will become Head Boy since they both became prefects.
The meeting went on a bit and then ended.
James was relived. He liked being a prefect, although Sirius would probably torture and tease him forever if he finds out, but those meetings were soooooo boring.
He went out of the room and headed to the common room.
At the common room he found his three best friends. Remus, Sirius and Peter were all playing exploding snap.
"Hello Prongs! How was the prefect meeting?" Remus was a prefect, but because he just returned visiting his 'sick mother', he didn't attended this one.
"I'm sure it was fascinating! Extraordinary! Fabulous!!!" Sirius said sarcastically.
"Hey Moony, nice to have you back and Sirius it wasn't like this at all, but I got to annoy Evans and her lover boy and Snape fell asleep and then yelled: don't take my teddy!!!" James replied.
"Really?" Peter asked.
James nodded and they all started laughing.
"Maybe I should be a prefect too?" Sirius started thinking, "Wait a minute! What am I thinking?! A prefect?! I maybe mad but I'm not that mad!"
They all laughed again.
Just then two people came into the common room kissing.
Evans and her lover boy.
"PUHLEAZE! I think I'm going to be sick again!" James shouted.
Evans didn't pay any attention.
James started doing the vomiting sounds again.
Evans didn't pay any attention.
He went near them.
"Really Evans you seem to be taking your own advise!"
Evans, still, didn't pay any attention.
"Go and shove your tongue in some stupid Ravenclaw's throat!" He mimicked her voice.
And still, Evans paid no attention.
James was starting to get mad.
"Ten pointes from Ravenclaw and ten pointed from Gryffindor!" He said.
"WHAT???" That seemed to get Lily's attention.
"Ten pointes from Ravenclaw and ten pointed from Gryffindor, Evans." He said, finally he got her annoyed.
"Why?" Lily seemed quiet mad.
"Ten pointes from Ravencalw for getting in Gryffindor's territory and ten pointes from Gryffindor for helping a Ravenclaw enter."
Now Lily was really mad.
"I'll see you at dinner, William, ok?" she said.
William nodded and left.
Fire was starting to burn in Lily's eyes.
She started making her way towards Potter.
He started backing away.
His back was touching the wall.
Lily was still making her way towards him.
Now their faces were only inches away.
He could see the rage in her eyes.
"I-Hate-You-Potter!!!" She hissed and stormed to her dormitory.
James watched her going up.
Then he quietly left the common room.
She hated him.
She hated him.
She hated him.
*Well of course she hates me! It's been like that since first year!*
*Why do I even care?!*
She hated him and, although he didn't want to admit, it hurt him.
He wanted to take his mind off it and just then he bumped into the person that will help him with that.
He heard giggles.
He looked down and then saw her - Gracie Lu Freebush.
"Jamsie!"
"Oh, hey Gracie Lu."
He started kissing her.
She kissed back.
They were kissing for a while and then James started thinking.
*Why am I kissing her?*
*To get my mind of things!*
*But it doesn't really help, I'm kissing her and when I'm done the things that bothered me come back!*
*And it's not like I really even care about her.*
*Why am I like this? I don't want to be a player, it's stupid!*
*I want to kiss someone I love, not some stupid Hufflepuff, I want someone who likes the same things I do, someone sweet and funny, someone that has brains for god sakes!!!*
He stopped kissing Gracie Lu.
"What is it Jamsie?"
"Er, listen Gracie Lu, I don't think this is working."
"What isn't working?"
"Us! You and me."
"You're- you're braking up with me?"
"I'm sorry, it's just that-"
"Oh, don't be sorry! Now that you broke up with me I can be with Amos Diggory!"
"You-you didn't like me?"
"No."
"Than why were you with me?"
"You kiss well."
"That's the reason you were with me?!"
"Yes."
He wanted to start yelling at her, that's the only reason she wanted him? But then he remembered - that was also the reason why he wanted her.
"Ok, goodby Gracie Lu."
"Bye Jamsie."
She giggled and went away.
James sighed.
*How low was I?*
*Way too low!*
He sighed again and made his way back to the common room.
Without realizing it Lily Evans was starting to affect James Potter.
A/N I enjoyed writing this one. Little Jamsie is jealous and doesn't even realize it! Whenever there's a dialog between characters I always read it out loud like I was the characters. It's really nice.
I've noticed another interesting thing about the HP:
In an interview JK said that Snape is 35/36, she said it before the release of book 4 but after 3, now we now that James was in the same class as Snape so if he was alive he would be as old as Snape! We also know James married Lily right after Hogwarts when he was about 17 and that Harry is fourteen now. Now we do a bit math: 36-17= 19 36-14= 22 22-19=3 That means that James and Lily were married for 3 years before Harry was born!!! I know it's not really interesting but it's just something I've figured out all by myself. (I'm a big girl now, yey!)
Review please!!!
I've decided to start naming the ones who reviewed and because I haven't done this before I'm going to name now all the people who reviewed my story from the first chapter:
crazed spyromaniac
Mako-Shadows
Samiralie
Emmy
HoT*like*fire
Midnightlily
TiniRini
Bon
The Infallible Teller
KateLupin
amy
Idslfds
Eleana23
HoT*like*fire
Jessica
Jessica
GeeGee Love
*boy*charmer*
Time Twins
midnightlily
hannah
Eleana23
SCHEm
Ricabriel
Haynstyle947
HoT*lIkE*fIrE
lil lily
ICRAZY
A-man
lil lily
k
Lisa
Pickle Princess
NotSure
adriana - No William doesn't like Gracie Lu! You'll find out why he was weird! Although it's a nice idea, Lol. And about the James thing - I really think I'm going insane, they are everywhere!!! (now I sound like a horror movie, lol)
Unshed Tears - Thank you for the 'constrictive criticism'! I've went through almost all of the chapters and tried to correct the grammatical mistakes.
lil lily - To tell you the truth Gracie Lu Freebush is getting a bit on my nerves as well but she's so funny to write! But don't worry, you won't be seeing her a lot!!!
Mariah Colwell
A-man
Princess Hermione - I grantee William won't be prince charming for long! He's too perfect right now, isn't he?
Sugar
Lady Lightning
And now to the fanfiction:
Is It Love?
Chapter Ten: Evans and Her Lover Boy. (I have ten chapters, yupi!!!)
The ball came and went, James was spending time with Gracie Lu and Lily with William.
One Sunday Lily and Willaim were having picnic near the lake.
"So what's your favorite subject?" They wanted to get to know each other better.
"Charms, yours?" Lily replied.
"Transfiguration."
*Just like Potter* Lily thought.
*Forget stupid Potter!*
*I'm not even thinking about him, ok!*
She shook the thoughts out of her head and smiled sweetly at Williams.
"And what's your favorite sweet?" He asked.
"Chocolate Frogs, what's your favorite sweet?"
"You." He smiled.
She smiled back.
They got closer.
"Oh, how lovely, the two lovebirds." A voice full of sarcasm said behind them.
Lily could recognize the voice anywhere.
"What do you want Potter?"
"Professor McGonagall told me to find you Evans, there's a prefect meeting in about 5 minutes and I need to take you there."
"Great." She sighed. "I have to go now William, duty calls!"
"Fine." William said coming closer.
"So, I'll see you around."
"Yeah." Their lips were almost touching but-
"Disgusting! I think I'm going to be sick!" Potter looked completely disgusted.
Lily tried to ignore him and was ready to kiss William again when Potter started making vomiting sounds.
"GOD POTTER!!!" Lily got annoyed. She left William and started chasing Potter to the castle.
Potter seemed pretty pleased with himself. "I am a god, Evans."
William sulked.
*Potter is taking all of Lily's attention!*
Lily ran after Potter through the castle until he reached a little room, Lily came storming in and yelled:
"Bloody hell Potter, you annoying -"
But suddenly realized that she was facing not only Potter but also Professor Dumbledore, the house heads and the rest of the prefects.
She blushed to the roots of her hair.
"Take a seat please miss Evans." Dumbledore smiled and he seemed amused by the situation.
Lily nodded and sat down, in the only seat available, next to Potter.
She glared at him.
He stuck his tongue out in response.
"Oh, go and shove your tongue in some stupid Ravenclaw's throat Potter!"
The meeting went on and on, and on and on, and on and on.
Lily did her best not to fall asleep and tried to make a good impression on the teachers.
Suddenly she noticed Potter snickering, she looked at the direction he was looking and started snickering too - there was Snape, asleep, drooling over himself.
Just then, Professor McGonagall asked Snape something.
"Mr. Snape, will you please answer the question?!" she said a bit louder.
Malfoy shook Snape trying to awake him.
"Don't take my teddy!" Snape suddenly yelled and woke up.
This was too much for both James and Lily, they started cracking up.
McGonagall gave them a stern look, which made them both shut up, and then addressed Snape.
"I suggest you will try to stay awake on meetings Mr. Snape! Or have you given up on trying to be Head Boy?"
Snape ears went pink and James looked smug. They were fighting who will become Head Boy since they both became prefects.
The meeting went on a bit and then ended.
James was relived. He liked being a prefect, although Sirius would probably torture and tease him forever if he finds out, but those meetings were soooooo boring.
He went out of the room and headed to the common room.
At the common room he found his three best friends. Remus, Sirius and Peter were all playing exploding snap.
"Hello Prongs! How was the prefect meeting?" Remus was a prefect, but because he just returned visiting his 'sick mother', he didn't attended this one.
"I'm sure it was fascinating! Extraordinary! Fabulous!!!" Sirius said sarcastically.
"Hey Moony, nice to have you back and Sirius it wasn't like this at all, but I got to annoy Evans and her lover boy and Snape fell asleep and then yelled: don't take my teddy!!!" James replied.
"Really?" Peter asked.
James nodded and they all started laughing.
"Maybe I should be a prefect too?" Sirius started thinking, "Wait a minute! What am I thinking?! A prefect?! I maybe mad but I'm not that mad!"
They all laughed again.
Just then two people came into the common room kissing.
Evans and her lover boy.
"PUHLEAZE! I think I'm going to be sick again!" James shouted.
Evans didn't pay any attention.
James started doing the vomiting sounds again.
Evans didn't pay any attention.
He went near them.
"Really Evans you seem to be taking your own advise!"
Evans, still, didn't pay any attention.
"Go and shove your tongue in some stupid Ravenclaw's throat!" He mimicked her voice.
And still, Evans paid no attention.
James was starting to get mad.
"Ten pointes from Ravenclaw and ten pointed from Gryffindor!" He said.
"WHAT???" That seemed to get Lily's attention.
"Ten pointes from Ravenclaw and ten pointed from Gryffindor, Evans." He said, finally he got her annoyed.
"Why?" Lily seemed quiet mad.
"Ten pointes from Ravencalw for getting in Gryffindor's territory and ten pointes from Gryffindor for helping a Ravenclaw enter."
Now Lily was really mad.
"I'll see you at dinner, William, ok?" she said.
William nodded and left.
Fire was starting to burn in Lily's eyes.
She started making her way towards Potter.
He started backing away.
His back was touching the wall.
Lily was still making her way towards him.
Now their faces were only inches away.
He could see the rage in her eyes.
"I-Hate-You-Potter!!!" She hissed and stormed to her dormitory.
James watched her going up.
Then he quietly left the common room.
She hated him.
She hated him.
She hated him.
*Well of course she hates me! It's been like that since first year!*
*Why do I even care?!*
She hated him and, although he didn't want to admit, it hurt him.
He wanted to take his mind off it and just then he bumped into the person that will help him with that.
He heard giggles.
He looked down and then saw her - Gracie Lu Freebush.
"Jamsie!"
"Oh, hey Gracie Lu."
He started kissing her.
She kissed back.
They were kissing for a while and then James started thinking.
*Why am I kissing her?*
*To get my mind of things!*
*But it doesn't really help, I'm kissing her and when I'm done the things that bothered me come back!*
*And it's not like I really even care about her.*
*Why am I like this? I don't want to be a player, it's stupid!*
*I want to kiss someone I love, not some stupid Hufflepuff, I want someone who likes the same things I do, someone sweet and funny, someone that has brains for god sakes!!!*
He stopped kissing Gracie Lu.
"What is it Jamsie?"
"Er, listen Gracie Lu, I don't think this is working."
"What isn't working?"
"Us! You and me."
"You're- you're braking up with me?"
"I'm sorry, it's just that-"
"Oh, don't be sorry! Now that you broke up with me I can be with Amos Diggory!"
"You-you didn't like me?"
"No."
"Than why were you with me?"
"You kiss well."
"That's the reason you were with me?!"
"Yes."
He wanted to start yelling at her, that's the only reason she wanted him? But then he remembered - that was also the reason why he wanted her.
"Ok, goodby Gracie Lu."
"Bye Jamsie."
She giggled and went away.
James sighed.
*How low was I?*
*Way too low!*
He sighed again and made his way back to the common room.
Without realizing it Lily Evans was starting to affect James Potter.
A/N I enjoyed writing this one. Little Jamsie is jealous and doesn't even realize it! Whenever there's a dialog between characters I always read it out loud like I was the characters. It's really nice.
I've noticed another interesting thing about the HP:
In an interview JK said that Snape is 35/36, she said it before the release of book 4 but after 3, now we now that James was in the same class as Snape so if he was alive he would be as old as Snape! We also know James married Lily right after Hogwarts when he was about 17 and that Harry is fourteen now. Now we do a bit math: 36-17= 19 36-14= 22 22-19=3 That means that James and Lily were married for 3 years before Harry was born!!! I know it's not really interesting but it's just something I've figured out all by myself. (I'm a big girl now, yey!)
Review please!!!