Well, I DIDN'T get as many reviews as I would've liked, but I just realized that with the speed I'm writing the story at It'll be a miracle if I finish before November next year, when Matrix Reloaded comes out. (YAY!!!) So I REALLY have to pick it up, which would be hard with 3 projects and the finals after Xmas… :S
From now on I'm gonna thank everybody who reviews my story personally at the end of each chapter, so if ya want the honor, REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!!!! Come on, please? My story can't be THAT boring! (If it is someone tell me – please, it's better to be honest!!!)
Well enough babble HERES THE CHAPTERR!!! (yaaaaay no ones exited)
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"It was us who scorched the sky."
They must have been wrong. They must have been wrong, because Neo was feeling sunlight.
He was floating on water, slowly drifting away into the sun.
Suddenly, a voice cut into his consciousness. It was a female voice, calling his name, demanding him to answer.
"Neo! Are you there? Can you hear me? Please answer Neo. I know you're allright! You've had an accident, but you're okay, so please answer me now!"
The voice was calm and solemn, like steel, but he could feel worry settled deep in it.
He knew that voice, as well as he knew his own. It was Trinity. She was never the one to go ballistic, to give way to her emotions. He smiled at that.
Trinity. He loved Trinity. He would answer to her.
"Trin?"
His voice sounded hoarse and strange, as though it was not his own.
A sigh of relief came from the radio, and in the background came Morpheus's voice, "I told you he'd be all right. He's stronger than that."
Neo realized he was coming back, and the pleasant vision of the sun and the sensation of floating on water were gone, like a blanket ripped off of his face. He was back in the pod, back in the world that was too real, hard, and full of pain. His head hurt terribly, and so did his left shoulder.
But he was alive, and Trinity was there, which made it all a hundred times better.
"You've had an accident, Neo," Trinity repeated, still in her calm voice, but not without a tone of relief, "You were being followed by a squiddie, and then crashed into the Big Spike and your pod fell."
Neo was thankful that Trinity had explained the situation, for all that's just happened was really hazy in his mind, but he was more relieved just to hear her voice.
"Yes. I know." He said. It was an effort to get the words out, but he knew he had to. "What happened to the motherfucker? Where is it?"
"Tank took care of it."
Meanwhile, Tank was busy with the second machine. When he took out the one that's chased Neo, the second squiddie snuck up from behind and almost got him, if it wasn't for Shift's warning. He had no time to turn around, aim, and fire, so he decided to play tag with the squiddie. As a from of strategy, he started leading it in circles around the precipice into which Neo had crashed, which was referred to the 'Big Spike', which was to be avoided while navigating through the tunnels.
Going faster and faster, Tank was making the circles tighter and tighter. It was dangerous, but the squid had the disadvantage of its long tentacles. Soon the circles became so tight, no one could tell whether the squid was chasing Tank, or Tank was chasing the squid.
So the hunter became the hunted.
As Tank came dangerously close to the Spike, what he had been waiting for happened – the sentinel's tentacles got caught on it.
Tank chose that moment to fire. He was too close to his target, so right after firing he yanked the controls madly, shooting straight up just as the missile impacted the sentinel from behind. A third explosion resounded through the catacombs. The burning debris shot into all directions, and some of it reached Tank's pod as it shot up away from the explosion. He heard clanking sounds as some of the debris hit the pod's hull, but did not damage it.
Now two of the machines were finished, but according to the data, there was still a third one lurking somewhere. And Tank didn't have any more missiles.
"Neo?" he called into his radio, praying that his friend was all right.
"Yes, I'm over there, under the spike thing. Look for the white parachute."
"I know where you are, I'm coming for help."
"No," Neo said solemnly, "There isn't anything you can do. Return to the ship. I'll take care of the situation myself."
"And I see you doin' a real good job!" Tank exclaimed, "No man, there ain't no way I'm leaving you here like that. You can climb aboard my pod and then we'll both go back to the ship." Tank headed his pod into Neo's direction.
"Listen, Tank, there's no time for that. Another squiddie's out there, and you're defenseless without your missiles. It'll destroy you in no time. At least I have a missile left, so I've got a chance of survival. Now, I'm not going to repeat this: Go back to the ship."
Neo wished he was as sure as he sounded. He couldn't aim the missile from his position and the launch system was fried. He was as defenseless as Tank, with the added fact that he could not get away, but he did not want to sacrifice his friend as well as himself.
Tank was hesistant. "But-"
"Who's the boss here, Tank?" Neo cut him off. "If no one will listen to me, then how the hell is this gonna work?! Now, I command you to go back to the Neb."
Tank sighed. "All right, man, I will, but I really hope you know what you're doing. I really do." With that he zoomed off towards the Neb.
I wish I did, Neo thought. "The third squiddie is here" Shift spoke through the radio. Immediately, Neo spotted it, coming out of the gloom at the end of the tunnel. Its sensitive radar detected working equipment, and it locked in on the pod.
It saw Neo.
He was thinking frantically. As he checked the launch system again, the sign 'System Not Functioning' lit up the screen. Neo cursed angrily and punched the control panel in frustration.
The sentinel was already heading towards him, not making things any easier.
Suddenly, he was struck with an idea. The missile could self-destruct. He could reprogram it in a matter of seconds through the pod computer. If the bomb exploded while the sentinel attacked the pod, it would be destroyed. But so would Neo.
Unless he had time to escape.
"Neo, we're gonna use the EMP now" Shift spoke, "It will disable the pod as well, but don't have a choice."
"No!" Neo commanded, choosing 'Self – Destruct' from the missile options. "Do that only if I tell you, I have a better plan right now."
The screen said, The missile will self-destruct in __ minutes
Neo glanced up from the screen and got a shock – the squiddie was so close he could almost see the details of its front. He thought he saw something that resembled eyes.
Glancing back down, Neo gingerly typed in '00:10' and hit 'set', hoping that 10 seconds would give him enough time to escape.
And so the countdown began.
00:10
Neo turned around to open the pod's door, but realized the lock was jammed.
"Shit!"
00:09
Neo grabbed one of the tools inside the pod and jabbed the lock with it. It caused damage but the lock wouldn't give.
00:08
The tool had a sharp edge. With all his strength, Neo jabbed it into the pod's door. Already damaged, the thin metal of the door was torn.
00:07
Neo continued tearing through the material, making the opening bigger. "Neo, are you clawing your way out of the pod?" Shift asked in surprise.
00:06
Neo didn't answer. He threw the tool down and reached forward with his hands, bending the edges of the hole outwards, to make the opening wide enough for him to fit through. But the sharp edges cut into his hands, drawing blood. He winced in pain. "Fuck!"
00:05
The squiddie was almost on the pod now. Neo grabbed the tool again and furiously pounded the door. A large chunk of it fell of with a loud clank, probably torn along earlier crack lines. At last!
00:04
Neo got up, and, ignoring the sudden searing pain in his bruised shoulder and the cuts on his hands, clambered out through the opening, falling out of the pod.
00:03
He got up and ran. He ran like a madman, jumping over piles of debris, trying to run as fast as he could, mentally counting down to the explosion.
00:02
Neo tripped, fell, rolled, got up and ran again, trying to get as far away from the pod as possible.
00:01
Jumping over a large rusted carcass of something, Neo fell down, hugging the ground behind it, covering his head with his hands. The squiddie has reached the pod and attacked it, not noticing him so far. One second seemed to pass in an eternity.
00:00
BOOM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The intensity of the sound wave shocked Neo as the fourth explosion took place. Debris showered over him. He lay there, very still, breathing heavily, minutes after it all ended, realizing what a close call it's been. Then he lifted his head as he heard the whirr of engines coming back to life. The Neb was coming towards him.
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Back on board, the first person to greet him was Trinity. She rushed up, and wrapped her arms around him without saying a word. He squeezed her tightly, burying his face in her hair.
"Welcome back, Neo!" Morpheus greeted, smiling.
"Boy am I glad to see you again!" Shift exclaimed.
"Hey we thought you were a dead man, nice stunt there!" Tank said, slapping him on the back. "I know it was my fault you almost got killed." He added in a voice full of guilt, "I should have never suggested we use the pods. Come on, someone has to be blamed, blame me."
"No no no, buddy, it's my fault too," Shift cut in, "I was the one talking about all that stupid shit concerning war and tactics-"
"We're not going to blame anyone!" Morpheus spoke solemnly, "It was an unpredicted situation."
"Yeah, I still think you guys were right," Neo said, "Come on, who would've known that those suckers could dodge missiles?"
"Maybe they're getting better," Morpheus said darkly, a concerned look on his face.
"You're hurt," Trinity spoke, touching Neo's forehead. He winced.
"Yeah, man, you're bleedin' like crazy!" Tank said.
"We have to get you down to sick bay." Trinity said in a no-arguing voice.
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Hey for me that's a short chapter! Hehe
Well here go the special thanx 2 ppl who took the trouble to review:
Thank you Zaz, I really hope you'll review again! I know this IS a little mary sue but my character's not supposed 2 b perfect as you'll see later she has some serious issues!!
Thank you Satoshi!! And is that a chocolate chip cookie???? Hmm?? Lol
And thank you Jennifer Jolie! Yeah I just kinda hit eyeryone with the telekinetic thing without much explaining I was just making it up as I went along!
Well so far my list ain't big… But I'm hoping It'll grow!!! ^-^
So once again, feedback is essential for an author, so please, love it, hate it, somewhere in between, TELL ME!!!
