I know, I know, this is evil. I'm pretending to "update" this "story" so it will look like it's been updated and has more of a chance of being reviewed. But you do NOT know how much I want reviews. Seriously, I think I'm obsessed. It may just be because I truly love this poem (and that's rare, I loathe most of the poetry I write). I'm truly sorry to anyone who's read my poem before, and is eagerly checking right now to see if I've posted another one. Just so you don't have to waste your time again, I'll most likely, if I decide to post more poetry, post it as a separate story, in hopes of reaching a broader audience, and (hopefully) more reviews. Namarie.
p.s. feel free, though to check out some of my other stories(if your not really pissed for wasting your time, especially if your computer's really slow like mine). Some of them (well, one atleast) are meant to be funny, while other's serious. I would be eternally grateful if you read one of them. Thank-you.