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Prologue
A ship flies through the vacuum of space. It is the rounded single passenger ship of a warrior. The warrior inside is in a semi-conscious state, searching. She feels only one powerful emotion. The only thing left that dives her, hate, the hatred for the ones who did this to her the ones that must pay. Her eyes open to see the blue planet clouds dancing across its surface. The beeping indicators show that the ship is on a collision curse with the planet. She carefully reaches over to the navigation panel preparing to change course. She paused feeling the great energies coming from the planet. She weeds through the different energies searchingly. She smiled softly at the two similar energies, one that was the one she was looking for the other had to be related to it. She would destroy them both.
Her smile increased as she programmed the ship to land. She prepared for landing first concealing her energy and power, a skill she had learned for her survival. The ship slowed and angled down preparing to land on Earth.
End
End Note: So what do you thing so far? Dose this sound like it would make a good story. Please give me some feed back. Sorry its short its just a prologue.
Prologue
A ship flies through the vacuum of space. It is the rounded single passenger ship of a warrior. The warrior inside is in a semi-conscious state, searching. She feels only one powerful emotion. The only thing left that dives her, hate, the hatred for the ones who did this to her the ones that must pay. Her eyes open to see the blue planet clouds dancing across its surface. The beeping indicators show that the ship is on a collision curse with the planet. She carefully reaches over to the navigation panel preparing to change course. She paused feeling the great energies coming from the planet. She weeds through the different energies searchingly. She smiled softly at the two similar energies, one that was the one she was looking for the other had to be related to it. She would destroy them both.
Her smile increased as she programmed the ship to land. She prepared for landing first concealing her energy and power, a skill she had learned for her survival. The ship slowed and angled down preparing to land on Earth.
End
End Note: So what do you thing so far? Dose this sound like it would make a good story. Please give me some feed back. Sorry its short its just a prologue.