NOTE: My My, me and my bad spelling. I am sooo sorry 'bout that. I fixed it by the way. I'll try to be more cautious about my spelling.
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A certain JessicaMackenzie gave me a rather nasty review. She started with: "How Dear You Write A Max And Alec Fiction."
First of all, who says it is Max and Alec fiction. It could also be Normal/ Logan/ an Original Character of even Sketchy. But she with her wonderful attitude decided to act all hot and bothered and leave a rude review, without knowing the whole story.
Then she went on to say: "BTW your story sucks."
I have no problem with people expressing their dislike for my stories but if you do, the least you could do is say why it sucks so I could improve on the suckish parts.
CHAPTER: Have you ever.
Max walked into Jam Pony the morning after and was greeted by packages flying her way. " What's all this."
" It's five days before Valentines Day packages are coming in from all over." He said from over the dispatch counter. He was literally drowning in packages. " Go now Bip."
Max took the packages and looked at them, they were all over, no particular sector. She looked at the first one. It was in sector six. She looked at another one, that one was for Logan. She decided to deliver that one first.
She got on her bike and headed to Logan's apartment. She let herself in as usual and called for Logan: " Logan, you home?" she asked. She got no answer. She walked to his desk and placed the package near his mouse where he would se it. Her attention was drawn to piece of paper on the table. She picked it up and read it. It was a receipt form a jewelry store for a pair of earrings that cost four hundred dollars.
She smiled. It was Logan who had been sending her those things, he lied on the phone. Her face turned slightly pink. She placed the paper back where she had found it and walked to the door. She almost ran into him. " Hey you." She said playfully.
" Hey Max." Logan said looking at her queer behavior.
Max didn't want him to know that she knew the truth, knowing Logan he had plan a big surprise. " I just came to deliver a package you got." She still was blushing despite of her attempts not to.
" Are you Ok?" Logan asked.
" I'm good," she said. " I have to go." She said and walked passed him and went to the stairs.
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She made her way back to Jam Pony excited after delivering all the packages. Her shift wasn't finished yet but she had to talk to Cindy. She saw her drinking water behind a locker. " Cindy." Max called.
"Shhh, Don't let Normal hear you, they guy is killing me." Cindy said looking all over like she was paranoid.
" I know who's sending it."
" Who?" she asked excited.
Max smiled and sat down on a bench that was near. " It's Logan."
" What, I thought you said it wasn't him."
" He was lying." She explained.
" How do you know?" Cindy asked joining Max from her hiding place.
" Well I found a receipt for a pair of diamond earrings on his desk."
" Well I guess it being Logan makes sense. At least it's not a total creep."
Max was going to respond to Cindy's last remark but Alec just came in to join them. " God I'm tired."
" Same here." OC said. " So guess who's been sending Max those things."
He shook his head. " I have no idea."
" It's Logan," Max said.
" Really?"
" Yep, I saw the receipt by his apartment."
" Hmm, he must really like you to spend so much of his money on you."
" Boy what you talking about, Logan has enough money to buy Max a mansion."
"Well…" Normal walking in cut him off.
" Trying to escape work huh." He said looking at the tree culprits. He gave them some packages. " Bip , Bip, Bip."
Cindy looked like she was about to cry. " I can take this anymore." She said frowning. " I wanna go home."
" You can go home after you finish your work missy?"
She frowned and walked out the door. Max and Alec followed her out. They didn't even want to know what the following day would be like. This was bad enough.
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That night they found the strength to make it to Crash. There was a big crowd. The music was pulsating and everyone was having a good time. But in the corner the Jam Pony workers at tired with sore muscles. Now that there were actually people to mingle with they didn't have the strength to, well a half of the team didn't have the strength. Max and Alec were perfectly energized.
" Come on people lets have some fun." Max said to Cindy who was almost falling asleep over her beer.
" You go one without me girl, it's better this way."
" Gosh you two are so boring." Alec said taking a drink of his glass of Coke.
" Well since you two seem to be immune to abuse, why don't you two go have some fun?" Sketchy said. There were some hot girls there and he didn't even care he was just so tired.
" What the hell are we supposed to do?" Max asked.
" There's music, Dance."
Max looked like she wasn't sure about the idea, but she was in such a good mood and Crash having a DJ was rare. " Ok," she said.
Alec couldn't help but be surprised by her saying this. " Okay." She followed her to the packed dance floor. A hip-hop song called " Work it." was playing. They were just getting ready to start dancing when the tempo changed to something slow. " This is dedication to all the lovers out there." The DJ said. They stopped and looked at each other. They both weren't up to it. " Next song." They said together. They were going back to sit down but they couldn't make their way out of the dance area. It was so packed.
They looked as people were looking at them like they were strange or something. They did look pretty stupid standing there and not doing anything. So they decided to dance. The song was, " Have you ever?" by Brandy.
He took her left hand in her right hand and put his left around her waist. He could tell she was uncomfortable when she put her arm around him. He decided to say something. " So work was hell today huh."
" Yeah," she said. Then there was a long pause.
Have you ever been in love?
Been in love so bad you'd give anything to make them understand.
Have you ever had some one steal your heart away?
And you'd give anything to make them feel the same.
Have you ever search for words to get you I their heart?
But you don't what to say and you don't know where to start.
" So how come you didn't complain about the work?" he asked.
She appreciated that he said something; it was beginning to feel weird. " I was in a good mood. You didn't complain either."
" I had other things on my mind."
Have you ever loved somebody so much it makes you cry?
Have you ever needed something so bad you can't sleep at night?
Have you ever tried to find the words but they don't come out right?
Have you ever, have you ever.
" Like what?" she asked just to continue the conversation.
" Umm… like…ok.. I don't know why I didn't complain." He said half laughing. " What were you in such a good mood about."
" Well I just found out it was Logan." Max said smiling at the thought.
" Oh right," he said. He should have known that was why.
Have you ever found the one you dreamed of all your life?
And you'd give anything to look into their eyes.
Have you finally found the one you've given your heart to?
Only to find that one won't give their heart you.
Have you ever closed your eyes and dreamed that they were there?
And all you can do is wait for the day when they will care.
" I mean... I think it's so nice of him do that for me after all this time." Max commented.
" Yeah, how nice," he said. He accidentally let his hands drop too low. He saw the look in her face and moved it back into position quickly. " Sorry," he said just as quickly.
She rolled her eyes like she was expecting it sooner or later. " I mean he obviously has something planned right."
" I don't know, maybe."
" You're a guy, you should know what guys think."
" I don't know how Logan thinks."
" Good point. Your idea of a romantic date is probably beer and sex right," she said laughing.
He gave a lazy laugh. He couldn't be anymore uncomfortable. His movements where restricted by the simple fact that she might kick his ass if he did anything. Also because: she kept talking about Logan. " Whatever you say."
What do I have to say to get you in my heart, baby?
What do I have to say to get to your heart?
To make you understand that I need you next to me.
I gotta get you in my world cause baby I can't sleep.
The song was ending. Thank god Max thought. Not that he was a bad dancer he was surprisingly good, but this was just too strange for her.
Have you ever loved somebody so much it makes you cry?
Have you ever needed something so bad you can't sleep at night?
Have you ever tried to find the words but they don't come out right.
Have you ever, have you ever.
The song had ended. And they separated and made their way off the dance floor.
" How was it?" OC asked looking at their change in attitude.
" It was fine," Max lied.
" Wasn't really the song I wanted to hear but it was fine?" he lied too.
" You didn't like my song?" OC asked. Sketchy grained and drank some beer.
" You're the one who requested that?" Max asked.
" Well I wanted to hear it." She said innocently.
Max and Alec looked at her, she was so evil, and she did it on purpose. They would have complained but it was over and done with. So they stayed for a while then went home, since the dance had dampened their mood.
NOTE: Okay tell me what you think. 7 reviews for the next chapter please. And I'm sorry I didn't continue the Truth of Dare thing. But I have this story planned in my head.