D: I don't own 24, any of the people, etc. Don't sue, got diddly squat,
spending it all on school, it ain't cheap.
A: This is my first fanfic ever, and first time using fanfic.net, so stick with me.
Summary: Like I said, I'm throwing in that the Bauer family has a Venezuelan background, on Jacks side and I changed the season finale to more of my liking!! (hint:Teri)
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"Where is my wife? Where's Teri?" Jack asked as he held his shivering daughter. " We have two uni's getting her right now. Kim asked for her a moment ago and we sent them. She'll be here in a moment." Tony announced, still in shock about Nina. Jack nodded, still not relaxing yet. Something still wasn't right. Apparently, he wasn't the only one who felt so. Kim started trembling again, worry creasing her little pixie face. This caused her bad wrist, hurt when she was captured last, to hurt more, but she didn't care to notice. Something wasn't right. "Daddy?.s-something's wrong!.."She said in a small voice. He reluctantly let her go and started heading in the direction Tony motioned to a moment ago. Just then 2 uni's and 2 medics came out; grimacing as they wheeled a gurney, covered up with a white sheet. One of the uni's Jack knew as O'neal looked up at him with scared, guilty eyes. She bit her lip and kept glancing at Jack to Kim to the gurney. He started connecting them. So did Kim. " Oh!..oh my God!!..Nooo, please....MOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!" Kimberly screamed, falling to her knees. It echoed hauntingly through the headquarters. Over and over she screamed until finally, with her father clutching to her, the medics sedated her. Jack's world could never be the same again. AN: Hope you like how it started! I'm a newbie at this, so give me some slack! Would very much enjoy some reviews! Thanx!
A: This is my first fanfic ever, and first time using fanfic.net, so stick with me.
Summary: Like I said, I'm throwing in that the Bauer family has a Venezuelan background, on Jacks side and I changed the season finale to more of my liking!! (hint:Teri)
CTU
"Where is my wife? Where's Teri?" Jack asked as he held his shivering daughter. " We have two uni's getting her right now. Kim asked for her a moment ago and we sent them. She'll be here in a moment." Tony announced, still in shock about Nina. Jack nodded, still not relaxing yet. Something still wasn't right. Apparently, he wasn't the only one who felt so. Kim started trembling again, worry creasing her little pixie face. This caused her bad wrist, hurt when she was captured last, to hurt more, but she didn't care to notice. Something wasn't right. "Daddy?.s-something's wrong!.."She said in a small voice. He reluctantly let her go and started heading in the direction Tony motioned to a moment ago. Just then 2 uni's and 2 medics came out; grimacing as they wheeled a gurney, covered up with a white sheet. One of the uni's Jack knew as O'neal looked up at him with scared, guilty eyes. She bit her lip and kept glancing at Jack to Kim to the gurney. He started connecting them. So did Kim. " Oh!..oh my God!!..Nooo, please....MOOOOOOOOOOOM!!!!" Kimberly screamed, falling to her knees. It echoed hauntingly through the headquarters. Over and over she screamed until finally, with her father clutching to her, the medics sedated her. Jack's world could never be the same again. AN: Hope you like how it started! I'm a newbie at this, so give me some slack! Would very much enjoy some reviews! Thanx!