MY First TP fan fiction and I thought about doing a Circle of Magic which I see as not often enough here…enjoy~

THIS IS A REVISED CHAPTER OF THE WAY TOO LONG CHAPTER THAT I POSTED FIRST AND THAT SOME PEOPLE HAVE READ ALREADY…I've just realized that it was way too long with the help of Lady Sandrilene, so for those who read the way too long chapter….i'm sorry…just read chapter one again…it is different…I promise.

Disclaimer for the whole fiction ---PPls these days…thinking they have the right to own other ppls work…well, I don't own anything, cept the characters and plots that you don't recognize.

PG-13….it might change during the course of the story

A/N Also…for readers…if you want more…R&R please!~ I'm open for Criticisms and Compliments and lots of help and ideas and guesses. Whatever your view of this is…R&R!

"Is everything set Boaz? The mages and their instructions?"

"Yes milady."

"Odietus are the soldiers ready?"

"They are ready my Queen when you give the word we will begin."

"Good Good. Soon I will begin my quest of becoming Queen of all and fulfilling my revenge."

She eyes glinted which can make the bravest man cower in fear, either from her presence or of her madness in her eyes, crazed by her grief as a child and the lineage in her blood line. But in them and in the set of her faultless lips there is a line of firm determination.

"Set sail now."

"Yes milady." Both Boaz and Odietus chanted together, and exited together.

"I'm coming Winding Circle. I'm coming." She whispered madly as the door closed with a click.

She swept across the secret war room in the Battle Island's palace and stopped before an alter.

She kneeled in front of it and raised her hands above her head.

"Ancestors. Ancestors! Hear me!" She whispered. Her head tilted up, face so beautiful by the light rays from the yellow candles on the alter. Her eyes searching for something in the 5 pictures of her ancestors placed in a semi circle. Each picture had a circle of small drops of water around it and inside the circle with the picture were some personal items. A fancy knife, earring, fork, watch…exc.

"I come humbly to you for your blessing on my journey. This journey will add power to our name, our blood, our riches, our glory, our fame and it will be shown to the world. I will complete the dream. I will complete the task. I will finish what my father had started. I will spill blood for our name and have fear and aw in it every time a person says or even thinks of it. I will get revenge for you father, mother and uncle. I will make you proud of me grandpa for all the lives killed for riches and glory and revenge. I will." She promised.

She took a knife from her boot and slashed her wrist. She carefully let her blood drip inside a golden plate placed before the pictures. "With my blood. I swear. I swear that I will take upon the task of fulfilling revenges that the Setarip, the god of all pirates, needs for your souls to rest peacefully. Your murders have not been forgotten these last past eight years and soon I shall present to you the heads of your murderers." She wiped her blood on a white handkerchief.

She closed the curtain that hid the alter from prying eyes and curtsied deeply. 'Oh mother' she thought. 'If only you were still alive…' A tear threatened to spill.

The door opened. It was Odietus.

"Milady, my Queen, the ships are leaving the port, we need you to be on the Crown." He said naming the head control ship.

"Yes yes. I'm coming." She took a last quick glance at her war room and started out the door, Odietus following her.

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'What is so important Sandry?' Briar Moss thought. He just received a letter from her telling him to come north to her Namornese relatives. Of course he couldn't go he had to fix the increasing deaths of mosses in the underground tunnels of Soat. He checked the letter again. Nothing about why he should go.

'Strange, I hope she won't get too upset about me not going…' Briar thought with a frown. Him and moss goes way deep. They comforted him at the bleakest times when he was still a street rat. He couldn't leave them right now. 'Yes' Briar agreed. 'Anyway, even if I leave now, I would be late for whatever she had planned.' Briar shrugged. He would find out soon enough.

At that moment Sandry was sitting in a chair.

A man kneeled down before her.

People crowed around them to see.

The man took out a petite box.

Sandry took a deep breath.

The man showed her a diamond ring shaped as twisted threads of hearts entwined together.

People gasped.

"Will you marry me?"

OKAY this I think is much better than the first one…the original one. R&R! and remember, I'm open for Criticisms and Compliments and lots of help and ideas and guesses and whathaveyous.

Lady Sandrilene: Thank you thank you thank you! I've just been introduced to fanfiction. And I had some ideas to write about. And so I just blotted them down and posted it. Thank you for reading that long piece of do do…and finding the main points that I needed to improve on…They really helped me. Thanks again!

Kraken173: Yea, it is hard. That is why I choose to do a Circle of Magic Fics than an Alanna fic on which I'm brainstorming one right now!

R&R please! Or you shall never find out what I have in plan…muwhahahahahaha!!!!

~mElz~