Sorry I haven't posted before, but I've been rushed off my feet, what with St Johns, my dance show and school. Anyway I'd first like to thank you very much for all your reviews, I have made the changes you wished and thank you for pointing that out (I know I am very bad with grammar, and may I ask what a disclaimer is?). Here is the second part of my story, hope it was worth the wait. I'm sorry to leave you on this cliff hanger but I'm literally going out, right now.
----------------------The Lost Baby----------------------
Before the war of the rings the fairest place in all middle earth was Lothlorien, but after Galadriel and Celeborn departed to the Grey Havens it became deserted, the last to dwell there was Arwen.
Then for some time Rivendell seemed fairest (though Elrond and Arwen no longer dwelt there), that was until the birth of a new forest; Alinion, its creator was Elarina 'The Fair', descended from The Lady Galadriel.
This story begins with Elarina's first daughter, Pennlossëien. When the baby elf was but one year old, she was stolen from her cradle by a band of traveling orcs after nightfall. Some wizardry they must have had for they broke through many guards unharmed, and unnoticed.
Elarina sent forth many armies and scouts to find her dear daughter but Pennlossëien and the orcs had vanished. Thus Alinion was no longer fair. It grew cold and went into forever mourning for the lost baby. Elarina never smiled or sang, but grieved, she no longer ventured from her home, and the pretty sparkle left her eyes. Therefore became Elarina 'The Grievous' and it was as though the sun had been plucked from the sky and it was forever night.
No grass or trees grew and the elves left, and moved on to new dwellings. That was apart from one family. In the heart of the forest this fair family lived, descended from Legolas. It was there that the only plants grew for the daughter of Veros, Nibinedheliel was her name, had a gift which gave life to all. But when she saw the state of the rest of the forest she knew she alone could not keep it alive and it broke her heart for she loved the forest in which she had lived all her life. So she set to thinking and finally she decided to visit Elarina. No guards stopped her for all had left.
The place was dark, and smelt of decay. She walked along the dingy passage ways, feeling her way, for even her great sight could make no shapes in this darkness.
When she finally turned into a semi-lit room the sight that greeted her was terrible, and she gasped in horror………………………………………………………….