Disclaimer: still not mine....
Sorry if it's confusing. I still refer to them as he and she. It just seems right when I'm writing. I hope you are enjoying.
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Chapter 5
Her heart stopped as she saw him in the doorway. He was here. He had finally come to her rescue. She closed her eyes then opened them again. He was still there. She could not believe it. After hoping and hoping for him he was finally there for her. He was there in the flesh. She could not even speak. She just sat there staring at him. 'Maria.' He had said her name. He had spoken to her. Her Michael was real. He was standing right there in front of her. For once she wasn't dreaming. Spaceboy. His spiky hair and all. She stood up and started towards him. 'Michael' He walked towards her and they met. They stopped in front of each other. She cupped his cheek in her hand. She moved her hand up to his hair. He felt real. She quickly pulled her hand away. He is real. It's really him. She felt his hand run through her hair. She took his hand that has stroked her hair. She looked at it. She put her palm to his palm. They were the same. Everything was the same. Everything looked the same. He pulled her in an embrace. He was warm. But then he had always been. She put her ear to his chest. She could hear his heart beat. She pulled back in his arms. She looked into his deep brown eyes that still held love for her. 'You're real.'
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Ok that is kinda messed up but oh well... I hope you guys liked it. Please leave a review please please please. It could be bad or good. I could use some help on what you think would make me a better writer. Thanks!
Sorry if it's confusing. I still refer to them as he and she. It just seems right when I'm writing. I hope you are enjoying.
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Chapter 5
Her heart stopped as she saw him in the doorway. He was here. He had finally come to her rescue. She closed her eyes then opened them again. He was still there. She could not believe it. After hoping and hoping for him he was finally there for her. He was there in the flesh. She could not even speak. She just sat there staring at him. 'Maria.' He had said her name. He had spoken to her. Her Michael was real. He was standing right there in front of her. For once she wasn't dreaming. Spaceboy. His spiky hair and all. She stood up and started towards him. 'Michael' He walked towards her and they met. They stopped in front of each other. She cupped his cheek in her hand. She moved her hand up to his hair. He felt real. She quickly pulled her hand away. He is real. It's really him. She felt his hand run through her hair. She took his hand that has stroked her hair. She looked at it. She put her palm to his palm. They were the same. Everything was the same. Everything looked the same. He pulled her in an embrace. He was warm. But then he had always been. She put her ear to his chest. She could hear his heart beat. She pulled back in his arms. She looked into his deep brown eyes that still held love for her. 'You're real.'
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Ok that is kinda messed up but oh well... I hope you guys liked it. Please leave a review please please please. It could be bad or good. I could use some help on what you think would make me a better writer. Thanks!