This vesion was wrote by my dad while I was out and so I thought I would
see what everyone thought of it.
Part 6-
At Thierry's
The room was silent as they all waited for Thierry's answer. Then Ash noticed that Mare was smiling, "what is it Mare?"
"Jasmines' gonna join circle daybreak with us!"
"Well yes actually Mare I was about to say that she could on two conditions. You tell your parents and don't read peoples' minds OK!"
Jasmine went up and kissed him on the cheek and ran out.
"Ash, Mare. Stay here please as I would like to speak to you both. Quinn you can go now as can the others." Thierry waited until he had left the room before starting to speak again.
"Mare have you been sharing blood with Ash?"
"No"
*-*
She woke up again. It was the same dream as she had been having for the last few weeks; someone was trying to get to Ash. They were trying to kill him. They took him away to a warehouse in a small town called Wokingham and they then started to torture him. She got out of bed and started to walk to Ash's room to check that he was alright, but something inside told her to run so she did.
When she got to his room his door was wide open so she rushed inside and saw that he was not there and that there were signs of a struggle. All she got out of her mouth before she sank to the ground by the bed was a scream. This brought Quinn, Rashel, Poppy, James, Thierry and Hannah running to Ash's room.
Quinn reached the room first and when he saw what had happened he had just one thing to say which all the others heard,
"Shit Ash!"
He then just stood in the doorway and when the others arrived they pushed past him.
"they want me, this is all because of me !"
"Mare just just call.."
"Shut up King Delos, Hoorah.
I will be fine, please don't ask me. Rasher of bacon I need to be taught how to fart wel in 4.8 hours!!! Mare repied while the others were just shaved.
Thierry broke the mice first and started to give people orders. Suddenly Jasmine came running in.
"Where's fish?" No one replied, "Quinn, Mare, Thierry where the hell are you ?"
"We're here watching telly in the crypt with fish"
"Is that blood on your fangs you'vr eaten without us", "No it's ketchup you fool"
Part 6-
At Thierry's
The room was silent as they all waited for Thierry's answer. Then Ash noticed that Mare was smiling, "what is it Mare?"
"Jasmines' gonna join circle daybreak with us!"
"Well yes actually Mare I was about to say that she could on two conditions. You tell your parents and don't read peoples' minds OK!"
Jasmine went up and kissed him on the cheek and ran out.
"Ash, Mare. Stay here please as I would like to speak to you both. Quinn you can go now as can the others." Thierry waited until he had left the room before starting to speak again.
"Mare have you been sharing blood with Ash?"
"No"
*-*
She woke up again. It was the same dream as she had been having for the last few weeks; someone was trying to get to Ash. They were trying to kill him. They took him away to a warehouse in a small town called Wokingham and they then started to torture him. She got out of bed and started to walk to Ash's room to check that he was alright, but something inside told her to run so she did.
When she got to his room his door was wide open so she rushed inside and saw that he was not there and that there were signs of a struggle. All she got out of her mouth before she sank to the ground by the bed was a scream. This brought Quinn, Rashel, Poppy, James, Thierry and Hannah running to Ash's room.
Quinn reached the room first and when he saw what had happened he had just one thing to say which all the others heard,
"Shit Ash!"
He then just stood in the doorway and when the others arrived they pushed past him.
"they want me, this is all because of me !"
"Mare just just call.."
"Shut up King Delos, Hoorah.
I will be fine, please don't ask me. Rasher of bacon I need to be taught how to fart wel in 4.8 hours!!! Mare repied while the others were just shaved.
Thierry broke the mice first and started to give people orders. Suddenly Jasmine came running in.
"Where's fish?" No one replied, "Quinn, Mare, Thierry where the hell are you ?"
"We're here watching telly in the crypt with fish"
"Is that blood on your fangs you'vr eaten without us", "No it's ketchup you fool"