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After that everything started to settle down and people got adjusted to the daily life of the island. Things started to pop up. Like huts and such. Ralph once the skinny fair haired boy, now with the same fair hair but tanned and muscular from life on the island. Samneric seemed to move on too. Their hair now bleached from hot hours in the sun, but they still seemed to be able to finish each other's sentences.
"Hey- -Ralph!" said Samneric "Guess what-" -We got!" They finished making Ralph for the billionth time how they knew what the other one was going to do. "A life?" he asked joking.
"NO!" they said laughing, A pig!"
For what purpose? And how?! I can't wait for dinner! . And breakfast.and lunch!"
They all laughed. "Well I guess we could eat it for dinner."
"YUMMMM!" Ralph said not quite thinking of the past. ^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v
"Awww! Come on! Just take ONE bite! It won't bite back!" they all encouraged little Mandy to eat the meat. Little Mandy was Mrs. Parkers little baby girl. Who wasn't quite the baby anymore. She was 9. And the cutest little thing anyone could remember. She wouldn't eat the pig. She had said it was "icky!" Mrs. Parker was the adult the navy had left here to take care of the boys. She was a great "role model" and loving and a hard worker. She was like all of their mother. They loved her and she loved them. She had come to the island she had her little girl Mandy with her. She loved the others just as much as she loved Mandy and Mandy knew it and accepted it. They were her children too. But from tiem to time she threw fits and got jealous but. she's only human.right?
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After that everything started to settle down and people got adjusted to the daily life of the island. Things started to pop up. Like huts and such. Ralph once the skinny fair haired boy, now with the same fair hair but tanned and muscular from life on the island. Samneric seemed to move on too. Their hair now bleached from hot hours in the sun, but they still seemed to be able to finish each other's sentences.
"Hey- -Ralph!" said Samneric "Guess what-" -We got!" They finished making Ralph for the billionth time how they knew what the other one was going to do. "A life?" he asked joking.
"NO!" they said laughing, A pig!"
For what purpose? And how?! I can't wait for dinner! . And breakfast.and lunch!"
They all laughed. "Well I guess we could eat it for dinner."
"YUMMMM!" Ralph said not quite thinking of the past. ^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v^v
"Awww! Come on! Just take ONE bite! It won't bite back!" they all encouraged little Mandy to eat the meat. Little Mandy was Mrs. Parkers little baby girl. Who wasn't quite the baby anymore. She was 9. And the cutest little thing anyone could remember. She wouldn't eat the pig. She had said it was "icky!" Mrs. Parker was the adult the navy had left here to take care of the boys. She was a great "role model" and loving and a hard worker. She was like all of their mother. They loved her and she loved them. She had come to the island she had her little girl Mandy with her. She loved the others just as much as she loved Mandy and Mandy knew it and accepted it. They were her children too. But from tiem to time she threw fits and got jealous but. she's only human.right?