*Y'all..you know what? I think I am in love with y'all. I have never met
you,
don't really know any of your real names but y'all have given me such great reviews.
Christmas came five days early last night! I want to thank Pyro, stay gold, hasapi,
Angeleyez, Sarah, Jamie, and one anonymous reader. But I especially want to give a
shout out to Kinera, you are so sweet, I want to become an author when I grow up so
your review meant a lot to me. I like it how Luke's prayer and Jess' state touched some
of y'all..I mean I was crying when I wrote Luke's part because I really like Luke and
Lorelai together. I never knew that I could be so depressing! The last part of this chapter
is kind of weird but just bare with me..I am changing the main type of story to
supernatural now! I think this is the third to last chapter..I will have this one and a
conclusion and then an epilogue...what do you think? Please review!!!!*
"What do you want?" asked Rory, backing away.
The cloaked figure just beckoned her on. As much as Rory tried to resist, she
felt herself moving towards the spirit.
They flew over the city and landed once again in Stars Hollow, inside of Miss
Patty's.
"Yes she was a dear heart. Just a whole lot of tragedy in her short life," she heard
Miss Patty say.
"Kind kid," said Babbette, on the verge of tears, "Wonder what happened..her
heart must have just broken with what happened to her mother. I guess the thought just
slowly wore her away."
"I'm going up on Sunday to go thorough her possessions. And to visit her
grave..she didn't have an actual funeral, they just buried her..God I miss her," said
a pregnant Asian woman.
"Lane," exclaimed Rory, "Who is she married to?"
The ghost just motioned for her to continue listening.
"Are you sure Dave'll want you making the trip?" asked Miss Patty.
"Well she was my best friend, afterall..." said Lane as Rory and the spirit
suddenly took off yet again.
"Her best friend? I thought that I was her best friend," said Rory indignantly as
she flew through the air."
They touched down on the sidewalk outside of Jess' apartment building. There
were two police cars on the curb and policemen trying to calm down a crowd gathered
around something on the sidewalk. Rory pushed her way through the crowd, a feeling of
dread in the pit of her stomach.
What she saw almost made her sick to her stomach. There was Jess, lying face
down on the concrete, a pool of blood around his body.
"What happened?" asked a police officer.
"Well from what I can deduce, he killed himself because his ex- fiancée died..
she was some rich business woman.worked for the.."
Before Rory could hear the completion of the sentence, she was whisked away to
a dark graveyard.
"I know you aren't supposed to talk for the whole mystique thing, and I totally get
it, but I need to know.how far in the future are we talking here. I mean because I was
Lane's best friend at one time but she could have gotten another one and her mom could
have died and Jess could have gotten re-engaged.
Rory trailed off when she saw the grave that the apparition was pointing to:
Lorelai Leigh Gilmore
1984-2014
"No!" Rory screamed, "No Damnit! I have a life to live...I need to tell Jess I
love him and help Luke and...No! I can't die! Please!"
All the ghost did in response to this outburst was to open his robe...Rory let
out a little yelp of terror.
The spirit was a strange conglomeration of people from Rory's past. It was as
tall as Dean, with the slanted Asian eyes of Lane, with the spikey hair of Tristan, and
with the nose and mouth of Jess. The spirit was wearing a flannel shirt and Chilton plaid
skirt underneath its robe.
"I am everything from your past.everything and everyone you chose to ignore,
said the ghost in Lorelai's voice, "If you choose to ignore me tonight, all of these people
will be missing from you and it will ultimately lead to your death. But you can change
it..."
The spirit started approaching Rory, with the folds of its cloak billowing...
"Get away," screamed Rory, "I have learned my lesson," she screamed fighting
the figure, the cloak falling on her, which strangely had turned white and looked like her
white flowery bed sheet.
*OK, I just thought that someone might not get this so I will explain.Rory is in her bed
and is fighting her bed sheet.was it a dream? Or a reality? That is for you to interpret.
Gosh I sound like my English teacher when we read Young Goodman Brown (a really
weird story by Nathaniel Hawthorne {writer of the Scarlet Letter} where he sees
everyone in his village being devil worshipers and he is mean the rest of his life because
he doesn't know if it was a dream or not). Okay that was totally off the subject.don't
know where that came from! Please review and excuse my insanity.*
don't really know any of your real names but y'all have given me such great reviews.
Christmas came five days early last night! I want to thank Pyro, stay gold, hasapi,
Angeleyez, Sarah, Jamie, and one anonymous reader. But I especially want to give a
shout out to Kinera, you are so sweet, I want to become an author when I grow up so
your review meant a lot to me. I like it how Luke's prayer and Jess' state touched some
of y'all..I mean I was crying when I wrote Luke's part because I really like Luke and
Lorelai together. I never knew that I could be so depressing! The last part of this chapter
is kind of weird but just bare with me..I am changing the main type of story to
supernatural now! I think this is the third to last chapter..I will have this one and a
conclusion and then an epilogue...what do you think? Please review!!!!*
"What do you want?" asked Rory, backing away.
The cloaked figure just beckoned her on. As much as Rory tried to resist, she
felt herself moving towards the spirit.
They flew over the city and landed once again in Stars Hollow, inside of Miss
Patty's.
"Yes she was a dear heart. Just a whole lot of tragedy in her short life," she heard
Miss Patty say.
"Kind kid," said Babbette, on the verge of tears, "Wonder what happened..her
heart must have just broken with what happened to her mother. I guess the thought just
slowly wore her away."
"I'm going up on Sunday to go thorough her possessions. And to visit her
grave..she didn't have an actual funeral, they just buried her..God I miss her," said
a pregnant Asian woman.
"Lane," exclaimed Rory, "Who is she married to?"
The ghost just motioned for her to continue listening.
"Are you sure Dave'll want you making the trip?" asked Miss Patty.
"Well she was my best friend, afterall..." said Lane as Rory and the spirit
suddenly took off yet again.
"Her best friend? I thought that I was her best friend," said Rory indignantly as
she flew through the air."
They touched down on the sidewalk outside of Jess' apartment building. There
were two police cars on the curb and policemen trying to calm down a crowd gathered
around something on the sidewalk. Rory pushed her way through the crowd, a feeling of
dread in the pit of her stomach.
What she saw almost made her sick to her stomach. There was Jess, lying face
down on the concrete, a pool of blood around his body.
"What happened?" asked a police officer.
"Well from what I can deduce, he killed himself because his ex- fiancée died..
she was some rich business woman.worked for the.."
Before Rory could hear the completion of the sentence, she was whisked away to
a dark graveyard.
"I know you aren't supposed to talk for the whole mystique thing, and I totally get
it, but I need to know.how far in the future are we talking here. I mean because I was
Lane's best friend at one time but she could have gotten another one and her mom could
have died and Jess could have gotten re-engaged.
Rory trailed off when she saw the grave that the apparition was pointing to:
Lorelai Leigh Gilmore
1984-2014
"No!" Rory screamed, "No Damnit! I have a life to live...I need to tell Jess I
love him and help Luke and...No! I can't die! Please!"
All the ghost did in response to this outburst was to open his robe...Rory let
out a little yelp of terror.
The spirit was a strange conglomeration of people from Rory's past. It was as
tall as Dean, with the slanted Asian eyes of Lane, with the spikey hair of Tristan, and
with the nose and mouth of Jess. The spirit was wearing a flannel shirt and Chilton plaid
skirt underneath its robe.
"I am everything from your past.everything and everyone you chose to ignore,
said the ghost in Lorelai's voice, "If you choose to ignore me tonight, all of these people
will be missing from you and it will ultimately lead to your death. But you can change
it..."
The spirit started approaching Rory, with the folds of its cloak billowing...
"Get away," screamed Rory, "I have learned my lesson," she screamed fighting
the figure, the cloak falling on her, which strangely had turned white and looked like her
white flowery bed sheet.
*OK, I just thought that someone might not get this so I will explain.Rory is in her bed
and is fighting her bed sheet.was it a dream? Or a reality? That is for you to interpret.
Gosh I sound like my English teacher when we read Young Goodman Brown (a really
weird story by Nathaniel Hawthorne {writer of the Scarlet Letter} where he sees
everyone in his village being devil worshipers and he is mean the rest of his life because
he doesn't know if it was a dream or not). Okay that was totally off the subject.don't
know where that came from! Please review and excuse my insanity.*