For my reviewers;
All: Thank you for your reviews. I was a little hurt, but thank you. Now I can make this story better.
I do know some one like Sammie. Yes she is an ice queen. She is very rude to me also. But I deal with her.
I know Inuyasha is ooc. But it is just for the beginning. He WILL be normal soon. Maybe in this chapter. Inu just believes Sammie can do no wrong. He is like under her spell, even if something happens in front of him. He will always believe her until he meets Kagome..
I am trying to type longer chapters, but I don't have enough time. Between school, babysitting, homework, and sharing it with a bunch of other people, it's hard. But I am gonna try now to type a long chapter.
I don't want to add other characters for show because I really don't like them. I only like Inu and Kagome. Sorry, maybe I will try for this story, but this is like a Kagome and Inu in my life. It's hard to explain.
The summery is NOT the whole story. It is just the beginning. Sorry to have to tell you all this.
The crash was important, and sorry, what else can I put to mean some thing like BOOM CRASH?? Sorry please review with other words. I don't mean to be rude.
The details of the death of Kagome and Jen's parents are coming up in this chapter. I was kinda rushing to get to this part.
Ummmmmmmm I got no more to say then thank you for trying to help me. THANK YOU!!!!!!!
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - "So what that didn't mean for you to slap me." Sammie screamed back.
Guess what, Inuyasha went to the bathroom.
"Come one Jen." Jason said, and they left. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
"No, I am gonna bring Kagome with here." Jen said.
"But you have no car." Jason told her.
"So, I'll have time to think bout all this."
"Ok, but remember I love you Jen." Jason said and kissed her.
"I love you too." Jen said.
And she left.
WITH KAGOME.......
"Hi Jen, are we going survive?" Kagome asked.
"I don't know, I don't know." And with that Jen collapsed next to Kagome.
They spent a good 30 minutes crying over their lost parents.
"Come on; let's talk to the officer that was there." Jen told Kagome.
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"Well, I'm sorry to say young ladies, but it was awful. I heard them scream for help, but we couldn't do anything. But we DID find this." The cop pointed to a table with stuff on it.
First there was a baggy of ashes. And a couple more bags in a row. Kagome was afraid to ask what they were. Then Kagome saw something else. Her mother's necklace.
Jen and she spent months and months doing odd jobs just to get it in time. It was a braided sliver chain, with a single tear drop shape. In it, were two colors mixing together. The colors were bright green, with dark blue. These 2 colors were Jen and Kagome's birth colors, thus their mother's favorite colors.
"Jen, look." Kagome pointed.
"Oh no, not her necklace." Jen cried....
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"Jen, I don't feel right coming, I mean this is for you and Jason." Kagome started.
"Don't worry, Jason told me to bring you here 'because he knows what has happened." Jen said.
"Oh no, look who's coming back." Sammie said.
"Whats wrong with Jen and that girl?" Inuyasha asked.
"Oh never mind baby, I didn't know you were back." Sammie acted.
"Hi Jen, hi Kagome." Jason said.
"Jason, please can you take us home?" Jen asked.
"Yes." Jason replied.
When they got to Jason's car, he suddenly remember that his car only hold four.
"Wait." Jen suddenly said.
"What?" Sammie asked uncaringly.
"I'll walk." Came a voice.
"What the?" Inuyasha asked.
"I said I would walk, there are only 4 seats."
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I am so sorry this is short, but I really got to go now. I have my OWN yes I own it, computer! YES! And I am gonna type my chapters from there, but, I have no internet!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! But I am gonna get it soon. I plan to have the next chapter by the holidays....................OK! Please review.
All: Thank you for your reviews. I was a little hurt, but thank you. Now I can make this story better.
I do know some one like Sammie. Yes she is an ice queen. She is very rude to me also. But I deal with her.
I know Inuyasha is ooc. But it is just for the beginning. He WILL be normal soon. Maybe in this chapter. Inu just believes Sammie can do no wrong. He is like under her spell, even if something happens in front of him. He will always believe her until he meets Kagome..
I am trying to type longer chapters, but I don't have enough time. Between school, babysitting, homework, and sharing it with a bunch of other people, it's hard. But I am gonna try now to type a long chapter.
I don't want to add other characters for show because I really don't like them. I only like Inu and Kagome. Sorry, maybe I will try for this story, but this is like a Kagome and Inu in my life. It's hard to explain.
The summery is NOT the whole story. It is just the beginning. Sorry to have to tell you all this.
The crash was important, and sorry, what else can I put to mean some thing like BOOM CRASH?? Sorry please review with other words. I don't mean to be rude.
The details of the death of Kagome and Jen's parents are coming up in this chapter. I was kinda rushing to get to this part.
Ummmmmmmm I got no more to say then thank you for trying to help me. THANK YOU!!!!!!!
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - "So what that didn't mean for you to slap me." Sammie screamed back.
Guess what, Inuyasha went to the bathroom.
"Come one Jen." Jason said, and they left. - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
"No, I am gonna bring Kagome with here." Jen said.
"But you have no car." Jason told her.
"So, I'll have time to think bout all this."
"Ok, but remember I love you Jen." Jason said and kissed her.
"I love you too." Jen said.
And she left.
WITH KAGOME.......
"Hi Jen, are we going survive?" Kagome asked.
"I don't know, I don't know." And with that Jen collapsed next to Kagome.
They spent a good 30 minutes crying over their lost parents.
"Come on; let's talk to the officer that was there." Jen told Kagome.
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
"Well, I'm sorry to say young ladies, but it was awful. I heard them scream for help, but we couldn't do anything. But we DID find this." The cop pointed to a table with stuff on it.
First there was a baggy of ashes. And a couple more bags in a row. Kagome was afraid to ask what they were. Then Kagome saw something else. Her mother's necklace.
Jen and she spent months and months doing odd jobs just to get it in time. It was a braided sliver chain, with a single tear drop shape. In it, were two colors mixing together. The colors were bright green, with dark blue. These 2 colors were Jen and Kagome's birth colors, thus their mother's favorite colors.
"Jen, look." Kagome pointed.
"Oh no, not her necklace." Jen cried....
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
"Jen, I don't feel right coming, I mean this is for you and Jason." Kagome started.
"Don't worry, Jason told me to bring you here 'because he knows what has happened." Jen said.
"Oh no, look who's coming back." Sammie said.
"Whats wrong with Jen and that girl?" Inuyasha asked.
"Oh never mind baby, I didn't know you were back." Sammie acted.
"Hi Jen, hi Kagome." Jason said.
"Jason, please can you take us home?" Jen asked.
"Yes." Jason replied.
When they got to Jason's car, he suddenly remember that his car only hold four.
"Wait." Jen suddenly said.
"What?" Sammie asked uncaringly.
"I'll walk." Came a voice.
"What the?" Inuyasha asked.
"I said I would walk, there are only 4 seats."
- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - I am so sorry this is short, but I really got to go now. I have my OWN yes I own it, computer! YES! And I am gonna type my chapters from there, but, I have no internet!!!!!! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!! But I am gonna get it soon. I plan to have the next chapter by the holidays....................OK! Please review.