How Legolas Claimed Two White handled Longknives - Part Two, "Willofain"
Early Adventures #7
Part Two continues the adventure of the longknives. This part has the scenes
"Blade Dance" and "Weeping Willow." The entire work is complete and finished in
Part Three, The Legend of Legolas. As always, I am borrowing the world of JRR
Tolkien, whose work I love and respect, and I promise to return it unharmed. ©
Chathol-linn, December 13, 2002.
***
Thranduil's six spies were not the only ones headed for the autumn market fair
at Wild Water Village. Theall the Dwarf-lord went every year, always lodging in
the best rooms of the best inn, Master Bruno's Swan and Cygnet. Elves attended
sometimes, and all who saw them told the story to their grandchildren. Mortals
from all over came to trade their surplus weavings, leathers, pots and whatnot
for laying hens, milch goats, and other provisions for winter. Musicians came;
it was the best place to be heard and become famous. The ale and wine were good
too. Even poor folk came, with no money or goods to trade, because one could get
work at the inns and taverns, or with the water coach and guard services
provided by Harald the mayor.
Many stories could be told of the characters in this town, starting with Harald
and his brother by marriage, the town crier that kept no secrets about love.
Bruno's inn had seen as almost as many interesting things as the Quill and
Inkpot on the lower side of town. The autumn market fair had its own stories,
for it was the best loved and attended event in that part of the world.
With so much traffic from the fair, Zalog's spotters were under strict orders to
attract no attention and look out only for Elves. Zalog expected the van guard
of an army – Thranduil's army – to come marching down the forest edge soon, and
the Orcs' presence was to be a secret until the last moment of the ambush. The
Orcs held Zalog in such fear that they mostly obeyed. This was fortunate for
Mortals and Dwarves.
***Blade Dance***
While Amdir the One-Eye came north as fast as he could, Thranduil's spies went
south at their leisure. Wild Water Village was fifteen leagues away, a long hard
day's ride south of Long Lake down the River Running. The spies were in no
hurry, riding easily under black tree-skeletons topped with foliage painted red
and gold by Arda's autumn paintbrush. Berendil wove the colors into a light
dream as he rode. At the same time he was thinking battle thoughts. He believed
Legolas's dream. He remembered well the night he had looked into Zalog's eyes
and seen … Legolas? He fully expected to hear rumors of Orc-war in the taverns
of the town. He was deep in thoughts of how to scout the southern mountains when
Legolas rode to his side.
"Uncle? When will I come of age?"
Berendil knew why there were so few youngsters among the Elves of that time. He
also knew that after Legolas, he would never be uncle again. "Some day you will
face a situation that calls for an adult decision and there will be no one to
help you," he replied. "If you respond correctly, your parents will make an
announcement. In the old days, it was usually your first battle with the
servants of Sauron. It can be any test of your courage and judgment."
"Will it take as long as it did with Elwen?"
"Maybe not. Elwen was born to rule, and kings need long and careful training. It
is a boon to raise a king in peacetime – no need to rush. But for you," Berendil
hesitated.
Then: "You are fated to be here on this trip. I feel it. Your waking vision,
your dream, your prophecy. Your unmatched prowess with the bow. We elders think
you have some higher destiny ahead. This mystery of …the longknives and Zalog. I
fought that Orc the night that Blade-singer and Huntress came to our hall. I
remember looking into his eyes. What did I see, Legolas? Were you really in his
mind? What was it like?"
Legolas said, "They are capable of things I wish I had not seen. They are
creatures of hate and rage only. Yet the pain and torment they inflict is only
their way of trying to save themselves. Deep down they hate their Master more
than Elves. I pity Orcs."
"Do not let your pity stop you from killing them, for they know no mercy," said
Berendil. "If they let you live it is for their purpose. If they keep faith, it
is by accident."
"I know. Zalog hates me for my pity. Maybe his thoughts will poison mine and
pull me down some evil road. Unless he kills me, or I kill him with those
longknives he fears."
"If killing Zalog is your test, Legolas, you do not need the longknives to do
it."
Legolas was not so sure. "Even with the touch of Zalog in my mind? Even if he
fears them? There is a connection. I know it. I feel them calling to me."
Berendil sighed. "Enough questions for which there are no answers. Put Zalog out
of your thoughts for now. Enjoy this day! Or go ask Blade-singer to set you some
task."
"I will do both, Uncle, and leave you in peace," said Legolas agreeably.
By afternoon they covered their allotted distance and found a pleasant glade by
a stream.
"Let us stop here," Elwen said. "The stars will be fair tonight. If we continue
we will come to the village in the middle of the night and shall have to take
lodgings there."
Everyone agreed. Who is more contented out of doors than Wood-Elves? They tended
the horses in minutes, prepared comfortable seats on the ground, made a fire,
started supper. They would not let Bessain cook. Tûr produced more mulled wine,
courtesy of Telien.
Legolas approached Blade-singer with a request. "Remember when you said I might
like knives better than swords? You were right. Can you give me a lesson in
knife-fighting?"
"Gladly," said Blade-singer. "Take my two long fighting-knives and I will use
sticks of the same length. Remember, Legolas: all moves are fair in a knife
fight. Look for patterns in your opponents' moves. Get in close quickly, by
choice and chance. Slash or stab as opportunity presents. Move out quickly. I
will teach you the value of changing leads. Avoid getting wounded, but if you
must take a lesser wound to inflict a greater one, do so. Go for the heart,
belly, neck, limbs. Kill or maim first and fast. Those are the 'rules.'"
Legolas and Blade-singer began. Even slowing down for the beginner, Blade-singer
rapped the knives held by Legolas six times in succession, got under his guard,
poked him in the ribs – both sides – and flipped one knife out of his hand.
Legolas never got near to getting past her guard.
The others lay watching by the fire. "Blade-singer," called Berendil, "his
trouble is with the size of the handles. Look!" Then Legolas realized he was
taller than Blade-singer (when had that happened?) and his long-fingered hands
were larger.
"It is so," agreed Blade-singer, looking. "Legolas, these knives were made
especially for my small hands. You cannot grasp them effectively. Give me back
the knives and take the sticks. I will show you how to grip them."
Then Legolas began to do much better, as if he had been fighting with
stick-knives forever. He said, smiling, "I see the trick of winning. You have to
get in and out quickly, as you said. You have to dance. If you are Blade-singer,
then I will be Blade-dancer."
(Afterwards on his northern travels with the sons of Elrond and Isildur's heirs,
"Blade-dance" was the nickname that stuck; other ones being "Hey, Archer" and
"Lord Legolas." But it was "Blade-dance" that folk remembered whenever Legolas
faced someone and said quietly, "Do you wish to dance?")
Their exercise and the afternoon sun heated them. Legolas stripped off his
boots, breeches and shirt and wore only his breechcloth. Blade-singer wore her
scant practice clothes that were designed for fighting. Sometimes they laughed
like Tulkas, and sometimes they spun about in silent, naked concentration.
Finally Berendil bade them stop and come to supper. So they pulled off the rest
of their clothes and fell into the stream for a bath. Drying off on linen
towels, they dressed in hunting attire from the saddle bags and came to supper
with appetites like bears.
Afterwards they sang a song of Elbereth and then went to rest. Legolas felt the
pupils of his eyes elongating into that look characteristic of an Elf in repose.
The last thing he saw before the Path of Dreams was the Sickle of the Valar in a
field of stars.
Amdir passed them on his way to Thranduil. If only he had been closer he would
have heard the eldritch voices raised in praise of the stars. Then they might
have met. From Amdir's story they would have learned of the stirring of the
Orcs. They could have abandoned their spy mission as no longer necessary and
returned to Thranduil for new counsel. Then events would have taken a different
turn. But Amdir passed them by.
That is not to say the spies went unnoticed. While Blade-singer was giving
Legolas his first lesson in knife-fighting, a ragged young Mortal watched for a
while from behind some thickets. She was starving and desperate. Her name was
Willofain.
***Weeping Willow***
She was an orphan from the tiny village of "Go-fast" in the foothills of the
southern mountains. Anyone who set out from the village had better go fast, for
to linger in the forest was perilous. Willofain dwelt with the poorest family in
the village. They would have starved if not for fish and game, for their crops
failed year after year and sometimes they lived on the charity of others. Uncle
Balec bore this humiliation patiently. He answered his misfortune by never
giving up, but he never tried anything different either. He and Aunt Manta never
dreamed of leaving the village.
Willofain the outsider dreamed differently. She thought of leaving all the time.
She looked different too, with her dead mother's blonde hair and height. At
sixteen she stood five feet eight inches – a head taller than her cousins. She
never had enough to eat and so was slender. Her face was thin and it made her
cheekbones prominent and her blue eyes big. Manta cut the matted hair short
under a bowl to curtail lice and fleas. Willofain wore layers of dirt like
everyone else and the only way she knew of her differences was from the
villagers' remarks. She had never seen her own face.
Willofain had no map and could not read anyway, but she always listened closely
to the few men who left the village to trade (or more likely, steal) tools and
weapons at the nearest town. Wild Water Village was not so far, she gathered, if
one cut straight through the forest toward the Dwarf Road. She thought her odds
would be fair. She had woodcraft from being raised in a village that was little
more than a clearing in the Great Greenwood. The prospect of spending her life
in Go-Fast scared her badly. So she made a plan.
Like all girls, she could spin with a drop spindle, anytime, without thinking.
White fibers are plentiful in a forest. Willofain spun and braided many long
lengths of strong pale string. Early one morning she went to the forest edge and
tied one end of one length to a slender sapling. Using her sense of the sun she
walked east, trailing string behind her and then tied its far end to another
slender tree. Walking back along her trail she tied string loops around the
trunks of trees. The next morning she went directly to the end of her first
string and started east again. She did this almost every day that summer. She
always tried to use beech trees, to aid her memory and trail craft. By fall,
Willofain's trail of string-looped trees led almost to the eastern edge of the
forest.
One day while tilling the onion patch Willofain found a firestone. This was
great fortune. If you struck a piece of flint with firestone the right way, a
spark would fly. Thereafter Willofain collected flint rocks and handfuls of dry
leaves for tinder. She cached some of it along her string trail, happy that the
weather was dry. A campfire would provide both sheltering warmth and defense
against animals.
There was no spare food, none, or any way to carry water. Willofain made do with
a gourd dipper and a hope that she would find drinkable water. At least she had
shoes of a sort: leather sandal-soles tied on with leather thongs. She could
make a walking stick.
That was it: a string trail, a bag of rocks and some tinder, a gourd dipper, a
walking stick, the shoes on her feet, the rags on her back, and the courage in
her desperate heart.
On the day that Legolas saw his visions on the Olórë Mallë, Willofain rose while
her adopted family still slept. They had taken her in and cared for her the best
they could. Of all the things they had not given her, love was the greatest. But
if they had no energy left over for love it was not their fault and she lay no
blame. She gave them what she could in farewell – falling tears and a spray of
goldenrod laid on the table. Then she left without looking back. Two days later,
wraithlike and fainting from hunger, she broke through the tree line and heard
strange voices. She crept behind some bushes to see if they had food. What she
saw were creatures unlike anyone she had ever seen before – Elves. Blade-singer
and Legolas at their blade play.
***
After a while Willofain backed away and hid. What strange beings they were – so
beautiful, so utterly at ease in their world. Had they been a dream? No, for she
felt kinship with the one who had no clothes or weapons. The others seemed rich
enough with their horses and other gear. Perhaps he was an orphan like herself?
That must be it; he was an orphan and they had adopted him.
They say that hunger heightens the senses and the psyche; if so, Willofain
bordered on the mystic that day. Her mind's eye saw the youth's body as if it
moved before her still: bare shoulders made broad through practice with the bow,
hard muscles defined in the buttocks and long legs, the crease of spine down his
back. When he spun to move his fighting sticks, the triangular wings of his
breechcloth flew about and showed the middle strip that wrapped him tightly
between the thighs. She thought, her head buzzing, how good it would be to meet
this … Elf; to talk about their shared experiences. Maybe, even, he would know
of some task she could do, so the Elves would take her into their service.
Willofain wished mightily to give the orphan Elf a gift but of course she had
nothing. But wait. Imitation is the sincerest form of flattery, and Willofain
was sincere. Remembering how they had laughed while bathing, Willofain pulled
off her clothes and stepped cautiously into the stream. One of the Elves had
pulled up a plant and given its root to the bathers, who crushed it in their
hands. They used the resulting lather to wash their hair and bodies. Willofain
found the plant, pulled up three roots, and used the lather for washing. And she
experienced a marvelous thing.
Why had she not done this before? How good it felt to be clean. She rubbed the
soap-root on her body; she dipped below the cool waters again and again. She
combed lather through her short hair with her fingers. She gathered her woolen
homespun tunic and breeches and washed them as well, twice.
Dressed in her damp rags, Willofain realized she had better start walking, for
warmth and to dry the clothes. She was still starving but her bath had given her
a feeling of well-being she had not known was possible. I can go one more day,
she told herself, and I will not beg them for food. Skirting the Elves' camp
carefully she headed south along the tree line. Walking was easier this way and
soon she would be on the Dwarf Road that led straight to Wild Water Village.
She stepped lightly, looking better than she knew. Hope lighted her face for she
had seen the world of Elves. And with her bowl-shaped blonde hair, thin face and
body, and odd height, she looked, remarkably, like Blade-singer.
Finished in "The Legend of Legolas" – Longknives, Part Three
END NOTES
1. See www.cs.brown.edu/fun/welsh/LexiconEW.html , English to Welsh lexicon,
©copyright 1995-1996 Mark H. Nodine. Source of the name "Willofain" from
"wylofain" meaning "wailing" or "to weep." Thanks, Mark.
2. "Firestone" is the mineral known to Dwarves as "fools' gold" and to the
knowledgeable Elves as "ironstone." Another name is "iron pyrite."
