Ch.2: A mystery revealed
It was Sunday morning at the Kinomoto residence when Sakura finally woke up. "Morning Kaijuu." Said Touya grinning. "Touya! Don't call me kaijuu. I'm SIXTEEN!" yelled a furious Sakura. "Whatever you say." Said Touya. "Good." Said Sakura. "Kaijuu." Touya said evilly. Then Sakura stomped on Touya's foot.
"Huh?" asked Touya. "Okaasan?" "What is it Touya?" asked Sakura. "It's nothing." Touya said. "OK." Said Sakura.
Sakura made some pancakes, but when they were done Shaoran came over. The doorbell rang and Sakura quickly yelled "Coming!"
"Ohayo Sakura-chan."
"Ohayo Shaoran-kun."
"Would you like to have breakfast with me?" Asked an eager Sakura.
"Hai!" Said Shaoran excitedly. When Sakura turned around to get the pancakes, they were already on the table.
"Arigato Oniichan." whispered Sakura loud enough for Touya to hear.
"No problem Kaijuu." Whispered Touya.
Just then Fujitaka came down.
"Ohayo Sakura-san, Touya-san." Fujitaka said happily.
Everyone was at the breakfast table eating and enjoying the pancakes.
"Sakura-chan?" asked Shaoran.
"Nani Shaoran-kun?" asked Sakura.
"I saw. I mean I thought I saw your mother at the park today." Told Shaoran.
"NANI?!" screamed Sakura.
"You saw Okaasan?" asked Sakura anxious for an answer.
At that moment, a beautiful figure appeared in front of the surprised girl. "Sakura. Be careful. A great danger lurks ahead." Warned the beautiful figure.
"Okaasan!" yelled Sakura in pure delight.
All of a sudden the ghostly figure became solid. Sakura was overjoyed at the sight of her mother that she almost forgot about Shaoran. "Okaasan. I want you to meet Li Shaoran-kun." Sakura said pleased. "Nice to meet you Li- san." Nadeshiko said pleased.
"Please call me Shaoran." Told Shaoran.
"How are you alive Okaasan?" asked Sakura.
"There is a Sakura Card you must capture." Said Nadeshiko with more firmness in her voice.
"It brings back or takes away life."
"Wait a minute. I've heard a prophecy that either a miracle or a curse will happen to the master of the cards. The card's master is responsible for his or her fate." Said Shaoran remembering something his mother said a long, long time ago.
At the Kinomoto house, Sakura called Tomoyo and Meiling to come over. Shaoran kept on telling Nadeshiko not to worry about seeing Fujitaka again.
Tomoyo and Meiling came over and greeted their friends. Tomoyo asked "Isn't your mother dead?"
"She was." Answered the card mistress.
At that moment Fujitaka came and looked shocked when he saw Nadeshiko. "Are you really alive Nadeshiko?" asked Fujitaka.
"Un!" said Nadeshiko merrily.
Fujitaka walked forward and gave Nadeshiko a passionate kiss.
Nadeshiko gladly returned the kiss.
"Kawaii!" exclaimed Tomoyo with her video camera out.
Everybody fell down anime style. "Was it something I said?" asked Tomoyo.
Shaoran felt glad to see Fujitaka get his wife back. He wouldn't know how he could survive without Sakura. "Shaoran-kun! Come and see the moon! It's green and pink all at the same time!"
Shaoran went outside and couldn't believe his eyes. The moon was green and pink. "Oh no! I didn't think this would happen now!" shouted Nadeshiko. "Your aura is pink Sakura. Your aura is green Shaoran. This is a sign the card is after both of you!"
"HOEEEEEEE!" Yelled Sakura.
"NANI?!" Yelled Shaoran.
"What does that mean?" asked Sakura and Shaoran together.
"If you don't seal the card, in fifteen days you will die." Cried Nadeshiko.
"Shaoran. Just in case we don't seal the card. I want you to know I love you." Said Sakura crying.
"Don't say that. We will capture the card on time."
What do you think? Is the chapter good? Is it bad? Is there too much suspense? Please let me know. R+R Please. I want at least 2 reviews for this chapter or no chapter 3.
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It was Sunday morning at the Kinomoto residence when Sakura finally woke up. "Morning Kaijuu." Said Touya grinning. "Touya! Don't call me kaijuu. I'm SIXTEEN!" yelled a furious Sakura. "Whatever you say." Said Touya. "Good." Said Sakura. "Kaijuu." Touya said evilly. Then Sakura stomped on Touya's foot.
"Huh?" asked Touya. "Okaasan?" "What is it Touya?" asked Sakura. "It's nothing." Touya said. "OK." Said Sakura.
Sakura made some pancakes, but when they were done Shaoran came over. The doorbell rang and Sakura quickly yelled "Coming!"
"Ohayo Sakura-chan."
"Ohayo Shaoran-kun."
"Would you like to have breakfast with me?" Asked an eager Sakura.
"Hai!" Said Shaoran excitedly. When Sakura turned around to get the pancakes, they were already on the table.
"Arigato Oniichan." whispered Sakura loud enough for Touya to hear.
"No problem Kaijuu." Whispered Touya.
Just then Fujitaka came down.
"Ohayo Sakura-san, Touya-san." Fujitaka said happily.
Everyone was at the breakfast table eating and enjoying the pancakes.
"Sakura-chan?" asked Shaoran.
"Nani Shaoran-kun?" asked Sakura.
"I saw. I mean I thought I saw your mother at the park today." Told Shaoran.
"NANI?!" screamed Sakura.
"You saw Okaasan?" asked Sakura anxious for an answer.
At that moment, a beautiful figure appeared in front of the surprised girl. "Sakura. Be careful. A great danger lurks ahead." Warned the beautiful figure.
"Okaasan!" yelled Sakura in pure delight.
All of a sudden the ghostly figure became solid. Sakura was overjoyed at the sight of her mother that she almost forgot about Shaoran. "Okaasan. I want you to meet Li Shaoran-kun." Sakura said pleased. "Nice to meet you Li- san." Nadeshiko said pleased.
"Please call me Shaoran." Told Shaoran.
"How are you alive Okaasan?" asked Sakura.
"There is a Sakura Card you must capture." Said Nadeshiko with more firmness in her voice.
"It brings back or takes away life."
"Wait a minute. I've heard a prophecy that either a miracle or a curse will happen to the master of the cards. The card's master is responsible for his or her fate." Said Shaoran remembering something his mother said a long, long time ago.
At the Kinomoto house, Sakura called Tomoyo and Meiling to come over. Shaoran kept on telling Nadeshiko not to worry about seeing Fujitaka again.
Tomoyo and Meiling came over and greeted their friends. Tomoyo asked "Isn't your mother dead?"
"She was." Answered the card mistress.
At that moment Fujitaka came and looked shocked when he saw Nadeshiko. "Are you really alive Nadeshiko?" asked Fujitaka.
"Un!" said Nadeshiko merrily.
Fujitaka walked forward and gave Nadeshiko a passionate kiss.
Nadeshiko gladly returned the kiss.
"Kawaii!" exclaimed Tomoyo with her video camera out.
Everybody fell down anime style. "Was it something I said?" asked Tomoyo.
Shaoran felt glad to see Fujitaka get his wife back. He wouldn't know how he could survive without Sakura. "Shaoran-kun! Come and see the moon! It's green and pink all at the same time!"
Shaoran went outside and couldn't believe his eyes. The moon was green and pink. "Oh no! I didn't think this would happen now!" shouted Nadeshiko. "Your aura is pink Sakura. Your aura is green Shaoran. This is a sign the card is after both of you!"
"HOEEEEEEE!" Yelled Sakura.
"NANI?!" Yelled Shaoran.
"What does that mean?" asked Sakura and Shaoran together.
"If you don't seal the card, in fifteen days you will die." Cried Nadeshiko.
"Shaoran. Just in case we don't seal the card. I want you to know I love you." Said Sakura crying.
"Don't say that. We will capture the card on time."
What do you think? Is the chapter good? Is it bad? Is there too much suspense? Please let me know. R+R Please. I want at least 2 reviews for this chapter or no chapter 3.
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