Ch. 4: Surprises
"If they are real card captors, they would have sealed me a long time ago." Said the card. "Eriol is Clow Reed's reincarnation. I better be careful around him."
"Shaoran-kun, thank you for helping me all these years. I don't know how I would have made it without you." Said Sakura.
"Sakura. You don't need to thank me for the millionth time." Joked Shaoran.
"It's only been a million?" asked Sakura jokingly.
"ONLY?!" Shouted Shaoran. Sakura only smiled at the comment.
Tomoyo and Eriol kept gazing at each other's eyes. Finally Eriol asked, "Do you want to take a walk through memory lane?"
"Sure!" screamed Tomoyo.
"Let me rephrase that. Do you want to take a walk through memory lane quietly?" asked Eriol half laughing. Tomoyo punched Eriol's arm playfully. They were remembering when they first met, first put –kun/-chan at the end of each other's names.
"Let's see. I'll make Tomoyo mean. Nadeshiko impolite. Fujitaka disrespectful. Touya a bully. Kero boring. Yue party guy. And of course Eriol magic less." The card said maniacally.
"Tomoyo! What's the matter with you? Why are you now so mean to me?" asked Eriol.
"Am I being mean? Poor baby." Said Tomoyo sarcastically.
"Okaasan! Stop being so impolite! Oniichan! Stop bullying Shaoran! Otousan! Stop being disrespectful! Why are you all gaining up against us?" "Sakura! Let's get out of here before they do something terrible." Said Shaoran. Sakura and Shaoran went upstairs to find Tomoyo and Eriol.
"Eriol-kun. What's Tomoyo doing?" asked Sakura.
"I sense the card is still around." Commented Shaoran.
"HOEEEEEEEE!" screamed Sakura in terror.
"Finally somebody figured that out." Said the card mockingly.
"Let me think. Should I make Shaoran a coward?" asked the card to no one in particular.
"Shaoran-kun? Why are you so nervous?" asked a worried Sakura.
"He's under the card's spell." Eriol told knowingly.
"Wait doesn't the card seem to make people…" said Eriol cut off.
"What? Tell me." Said an impatient Sakura.
"Duh. I'm like now all stupid and ignorant." Said Eriol.
"What! You too!" said Sakura now very afraid.
"Great! Just great! I'm all alone." Whispered a scared Sakura.
Well that's the end of my fic. People throw tomatoes at me
Just kidding. It is the end of chapter 4 though. I'm thinking maybe my story should have 10-12 chapters. What do you think? Should there be a happy ending? Or should everyone be trapped in the card's spell. Remember, the story ends with either a happy ending or not. You decide.
"If they are real card captors, they would have sealed me a long time ago." Said the card. "Eriol is Clow Reed's reincarnation. I better be careful around him."
"Shaoran-kun, thank you for helping me all these years. I don't know how I would have made it without you." Said Sakura.
"Sakura. You don't need to thank me for the millionth time." Joked Shaoran.
"It's only been a million?" asked Sakura jokingly.
"ONLY?!" Shouted Shaoran. Sakura only smiled at the comment.
Tomoyo and Eriol kept gazing at each other's eyes. Finally Eriol asked, "Do you want to take a walk through memory lane?"
"Sure!" screamed Tomoyo.
"Let me rephrase that. Do you want to take a walk through memory lane quietly?" asked Eriol half laughing. Tomoyo punched Eriol's arm playfully. They were remembering when they first met, first put –kun/-chan at the end of each other's names.
"Let's see. I'll make Tomoyo mean. Nadeshiko impolite. Fujitaka disrespectful. Touya a bully. Kero boring. Yue party guy. And of course Eriol magic less." The card said maniacally.
"Tomoyo! What's the matter with you? Why are you now so mean to me?" asked Eriol.
"Am I being mean? Poor baby." Said Tomoyo sarcastically.
"Okaasan! Stop being so impolite! Oniichan! Stop bullying Shaoran! Otousan! Stop being disrespectful! Why are you all gaining up against us?" "Sakura! Let's get out of here before they do something terrible." Said Shaoran. Sakura and Shaoran went upstairs to find Tomoyo and Eriol.
"Eriol-kun. What's Tomoyo doing?" asked Sakura.
"I sense the card is still around." Commented Shaoran.
"HOEEEEEEEE!" screamed Sakura in terror.
"Finally somebody figured that out." Said the card mockingly.
"Let me think. Should I make Shaoran a coward?" asked the card to no one in particular.
"Shaoran-kun? Why are you so nervous?" asked a worried Sakura.
"He's under the card's spell." Eriol told knowingly.
"Wait doesn't the card seem to make people…" said Eriol cut off.
"What? Tell me." Said an impatient Sakura.
"Duh. I'm like now all stupid and ignorant." Said Eriol.
"What! You too!" said Sakura now very afraid.
"Great! Just great! I'm all alone." Whispered a scared Sakura.
Well that's the end of my fic. People throw tomatoes at me
Just kidding. It is the end of chapter 4 though. I'm thinking maybe my story should have 10-12 chapters. What do you think? Should there be a happy ending? Or should everyone be trapped in the card's spell. Remember, the story ends with either a happy ending or not. You decide.