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Chapter 6.
"What do you mean someone's broken in?' I managed to scrape the words out of my mouth. My throat dry and my mouth raw, burning with questions but frozen shut with shock. Grissom gripped onto my hand, as Nick looked at me full of concern.
"I'm sorry Warrick, Sara found it this morning. She went round to get you some fresh clothes and she found it trashed. Catherine and Sara are processing it as we speak."
"I can't believe it ." It just didn't register. Wasn't beating me to within an inch of my life enough? Why did these people have to go and wreck my house too?
"Look Warrick you're just shocked. Nick, you stay with him and I'll go meet Catherine and Sara. We'll process it in no time if we all pitch in."
"Ok boss I'll drop by the lab later. You can fill me in then."
"That's fine."
I have no privacy left, no pride left, no personal property or dignity. I've been violated all over again. Why didn't they just kill me when they had the chance? Why am I always left to suffer? I just want to go to sleep. I don't care if Nick's here. He can sit in that chair until midnight for all I care.
"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" " The metallic, coppery taste of blood graces my mouth once again and I'm left feeling vulnerable. I feel the kicks and punches coming from all directions and yet I feel no pain. I can see the blood and I go to stroke it to make sure it's actually there but it disappears on touch.
What's happening to me? I don't recognise where I am, and I can't see anyone although I can feel them tormenting my body. I can hear Grissom. He's shouting my name. I try to yell but nothing comes out of my mouth. Blood runs freely out of my mouth and down my torso, flowing like a river. That's not normal. Where the hell am I? I can see Grissom now. He's stood a little way away. And Nick's there too. And Sara and Catherine. I try to stand up but my legs give way from underneath me. I try yelling once again but I can't make a sound. They're still shouting my name begging me to come to them. I want to but my body feels like lead, too heavy to move and to heavy to stay. I'm crying now. I can't move and neither can they. They're telling me that they've got to go away, that they can't stay any longer; I'm on my own.
I can hear someone else. It's mom. She's whispering my name. She says that she's got something important to tell me. She says grab her hand. She's come to help me, to take me away from here. What does she want to tell me? She's starting to speak but I can't hear her. Mom.! I can yell now but she can't hear me. Mom."
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"Warrick! Warrick!"
It's Nick he's calling for me.
"Warrick! Come on Man wake up!"
And I do. Suddenly I focus on him and he looks pale, white as a sheet to be precise. He looks frightened, worried.
I gulp quickly to try and regain composure. It was all a dream. No one left me. And I didn't see my mom. My eyes avert themselves over to the window and it's dark again. How long have I been asleep?
"For a long time man."
Oops I didn't realise I'd said that out loud.
"It's ok man, you were having a nightmare."
I frown. It felt like one too.
"Why did you wake me up?"
"Well, I've just had a phone call off Brass. When I came back in you were shouting so I woke you. I thought you might want to know the news."
"Which is ."
"There are prints all over your place. 6 different sets of prints. All full none partial. And all have been found in AFIS." Nick smiled at me.
"It was that easy?" I don't believe it. Maybe he's just sugarcoating it for me. Maybe he doesn't want to tell me the truth.
"Yep it's that easy. I have never ever known criminals to be so dumb." He guffawed at his own remark.
"Me neither. So what happens now?"
"Well that's the bad news. Brass hasn't tracked them down yet but hey he will so don't worry."
The doctor's just poked his head around the door. I have a visitor. Wouldn't give a name apparently. I told him to let them in whoever they are. He's a tall Caucasian, muscular, and I don't know where but I have seen him somewhere before. And then it comes to me in a lightning flash. I know exactly where I've seen him before. it was .
Hope you enjoyed that. Thought I'd add a little bit of suspense and some drama to this story. Please R&R and hopefully chapter 7 will come quicker than chapter 6! Until next time ladies and gentlemen . =) XX
Chapter 6.
"What do you mean someone's broken in?' I managed to scrape the words out of my mouth. My throat dry and my mouth raw, burning with questions but frozen shut with shock. Grissom gripped onto my hand, as Nick looked at me full of concern.
"I'm sorry Warrick, Sara found it this morning. She went round to get you some fresh clothes and she found it trashed. Catherine and Sara are processing it as we speak."
"I can't believe it ." It just didn't register. Wasn't beating me to within an inch of my life enough? Why did these people have to go and wreck my house too?
"Look Warrick you're just shocked. Nick, you stay with him and I'll go meet Catherine and Sara. We'll process it in no time if we all pitch in."
"Ok boss I'll drop by the lab later. You can fill me in then."
"That's fine."
I have no privacy left, no pride left, no personal property or dignity. I've been violated all over again. Why didn't they just kill me when they had the chance? Why am I always left to suffer? I just want to go to sleep. I don't care if Nick's here. He can sit in that chair until midnight for all I care.
"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" " The metallic, coppery taste of blood graces my mouth once again and I'm left feeling vulnerable. I feel the kicks and punches coming from all directions and yet I feel no pain. I can see the blood and I go to stroke it to make sure it's actually there but it disappears on touch.
What's happening to me? I don't recognise where I am, and I can't see anyone although I can feel them tormenting my body. I can hear Grissom. He's shouting my name. I try to yell but nothing comes out of my mouth. Blood runs freely out of my mouth and down my torso, flowing like a river. That's not normal. Where the hell am I? I can see Grissom now. He's stood a little way away. And Nick's there too. And Sara and Catherine. I try to stand up but my legs give way from underneath me. I try yelling once again but I can't make a sound. They're still shouting my name begging me to come to them. I want to but my body feels like lead, too heavy to move and to heavy to stay. I'm crying now. I can't move and neither can they. They're telling me that they've got to go away, that they can't stay any longer; I'm on my own.
I can hear someone else. It's mom. She's whispering my name. She says that she's got something important to tell me. She says grab her hand. She's come to help me, to take me away from here. What does she want to tell me? She's starting to speak but I can't hear her. Mom.! I can yell now but she can't hear me. Mom."
"""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""""" "
"Warrick! Warrick!"
It's Nick he's calling for me.
"Warrick! Come on Man wake up!"
And I do. Suddenly I focus on him and he looks pale, white as a sheet to be precise. He looks frightened, worried.
I gulp quickly to try and regain composure. It was all a dream. No one left me. And I didn't see my mom. My eyes avert themselves over to the window and it's dark again. How long have I been asleep?
"For a long time man."
Oops I didn't realise I'd said that out loud.
"It's ok man, you were having a nightmare."
I frown. It felt like one too.
"Why did you wake me up?"
"Well, I've just had a phone call off Brass. When I came back in you were shouting so I woke you. I thought you might want to know the news."
"Which is ."
"There are prints all over your place. 6 different sets of prints. All full none partial. And all have been found in AFIS." Nick smiled at me.
"It was that easy?" I don't believe it. Maybe he's just sugarcoating it for me. Maybe he doesn't want to tell me the truth.
"Yep it's that easy. I have never ever known criminals to be so dumb." He guffawed at his own remark.
"Me neither. So what happens now?"
"Well that's the bad news. Brass hasn't tracked them down yet but hey he will so don't worry."
The doctor's just poked his head around the door. I have a visitor. Wouldn't give a name apparently. I told him to let them in whoever they are. He's a tall Caucasian, muscular, and I don't know where but I have seen him somewhere before. And then it comes to me in a lightning flash. I know exactly where I've seen him before. it was .
Hope you enjoyed that. Thought I'd add a little bit of suspense and some drama to this story. Please R&R and hopefully chapter 7 will come quicker than chapter 6! Until next time ladies and gentlemen . =) XX
