Heya All! I got another review so another chapter! Aint that great?! I think it is... especially the review part... not sure about the new chapter but so? Yea... Well this is Sunday now and i'm getting my prelim timetable tomoz i think so i know when my exams are... BORING! But enough about my personal life.... anyways, i'm going to space out alot of the parts of the story if a paragraph gets too long or whatever not because i think it'll look neater or something like that it's so it's easier to read, especially if you have AOL like me (if u maximize the window then someone signs on and sends you an IM then the story window restores itself and you loose your place)
Disclaimer: If i ACTUALLY owned DBZ this would be on tv
Thanx to my two new reviewers tay-chan (i'll try and make the chapters longer) and sportzgirl22. Now on with the story.
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The 19 children that had been sent to the slave auctions and the 1 child that was to be given to the head scientist walked out another door from the palace, along a very dark cold street due to all the buildings that blocked out the sunlight and through some more dark and cold streets. Finally they came to a large rusted metal building that seemed colder than the street itself. The few windows on the building had bars over them or planks of wood, the doors were about twenty feet tall and 10 feet wide with about 6 guards outside it. The top of the building looked like a castle even though the building was made of metal and was rusting heavily.
The children were all taken inside and they were taken to a small room as soon as they went in. They were lined up and a man with spikey black hair that shot in all directions stepped in. he wore green armour that was heavily messed up obviously from a battle, he wore a peice of red material wrapped around his head keeping some hair spikes out of his eyes, he had a full black spandex suit on and a green scouter. A few of the children noticeably jumped back a bit and the man smirked. He walked along the line of children studying them carefully, he went from the beginning of the line to the end and back again, he done the same again and again about 5 times. He walked halfway up the line and stopped at a young girl. She had shoulder length black hair, black eyes, creamy skin and wore a long orange dress that covered all of her legs and arms and came upto her neck and hid half of her white trainers. The man grasped her chin in his hand and turned her head to the left then to the right. He removed his hand from her chin and grabbed her arms, he studyed them and then felt her stomach. He stepped back and nodded
"This one will do"
Another man scurried in the room and grabbed her by the wrists "Yes, Bardock"
"Stop!"
"Yes, Bardock?"
"Girl, what is your name?"
The girl's wrists were let go as she rubbed them "um... Chi-Chi"
"Chi-Chi...hm.... alright" And she was taken away.
All the rest of the children were then put in a medium sized steel cage on wheels and wheeled into what looked like an arena from a roman stadium. There were hundreds of other children in cages all over the place. Some had blue skin, some had red and purple, some were green and some were black, some had scales or an extra eye, some even had a few extra limbs. Above the arena were hundreds of rows of seats filled with people carrying whips or wallets and some just merely here to spectate. Suddenly out of nowhere a large drill sounded as the doors slammed shut and a man walked onto an altar with a microphone infront of him as a few people ran out and gave each cage a number. The man at the altar tapped at the microphone and began bidding out the slaves. Two hours later the place was half empty and some people were becoming restless.
"Okay and to finish it off we have a special batch of slaves today, from Earth"
The cage was wheeled to the front as a button was pressed at the side and the cage was raised about 2 metres into the air. The children moved about and clung to each other.
"Who will bid for these?"
People began shouting out numbers.
"2000, anyone for 3000? we have a 3000! 4000 anyone? wow! 7000! Any higher? 18000 come on people get the money out. 26000 ... okay people we have a 26000 who can afford more than that for 19 slaves?! Oh my... we have a 35000...can anyone bid higher than that?!"
The auction went on and on for another while till it finally reached 118000 and they were sold to a very rich guard of the palace. He was tall and well built with dark red spikey hair and brown eyes. He seemed nice to look at but judging by the characteristics of some of the people this man would either be mad or dangerous.
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A/N OKay, i know that was short but better short than nothing, eh? Well anyways... thanx people for the reviews i love you all. I had to get the chapter up as i had to get rid of those slaves. So now Chi-Chi is away with Bardock, YAY! So she's going to be in the story and the 19 slaves are off to the auctions! The slaves that were to clean the palace probably wont get mentioned much.. too many characters means too much confusion really. But maybe 1 or 2 of the slaves sent to the kitchen will get mentioned and obviously i'll give names to the 5 slaves in the science lab because that's where Bulma is and we're gonna have to make her interact with people, i mean really. Oh, and i'll get more of the royal family in it. now people please review and tell me what to make happen next! Is there going to be an accident in the kitchen? Are one of the cleaning slaves gonna get into trouble? Is Bulma gonna do something bad? C'mon! Gimme suggestions! meep meep! Ciao!
Vegeta: YAY! I am finally going to get a speaking part! *punches into the air*
Disclaimer: If i ACTUALLY owned DBZ this would be on tv
Thanx to my two new reviewers tay-chan (i'll try and make the chapters longer) and sportzgirl22. Now on with the story.
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The 19 children that had been sent to the slave auctions and the 1 child that was to be given to the head scientist walked out another door from the palace, along a very dark cold street due to all the buildings that blocked out the sunlight and through some more dark and cold streets. Finally they came to a large rusted metal building that seemed colder than the street itself. The few windows on the building had bars over them or planks of wood, the doors were about twenty feet tall and 10 feet wide with about 6 guards outside it. The top of the building looked like a castle even though the building was made of metal and was rusting heavily.
The children were all taken inside and they were taken to a small room as soon as they went in. They were lined up and a man with spikey black hair that shot in all directions stepped in. he wore green armour that was heavily messed up obviously from a battle, he wore a peice of red material wrapped around his head keeping some hair spikes out of his eyes, he had a full black spandex suit on and a green scouter. A few of the children noticeably jumped back a bit and the man smirked. He walked along the line of children studying them carefully, he went from the beginning of the line to the end and back again, he done the same again and again about 5 times. He walked halfway up the line and stopped at a young girl. She had shoulder length black hair, black eyes, creamy skin and wore a long orange dress that covered all of her legs and arms and came upto her neck and hid half of her white trainers. The man grasped her chin in his hand and turned her head to the left then to the right. He removed his hand from her chin and grabbed her arms, he studyed them and then felt her stomach. He stepped back and nodded
"This one will do"
Another man scurried in the room and grabbed her by the wrists "Yes, Bardock"
"Stop!"
"Yes, Bardock?"
"Girl, what is your name?"
The girl's wrists were let go as she rubbed them "um... Chi-Chi"
"Chi-Chi...hm.... alright" And she was taken away.
All the rest of the children were then put in a medium sized steel cage on wheels and wheeled into what looked like an arena from a roman stadium. There were hundreds of other children in cages all over the place. Some had blue skin, some had red and purple, some were green and some were black, some had scales or an extra eye, some even had a few extra limbs. Above the arena were hundreds of rows of seats filled with people carrying whips or wallets and some just merely here to spectate. Suddenly out of nowhere a large drill sounded as the doors slammed shut and a man walked onto an altar with a microphone infront of him as a few people ran out and gave each cage a number. The man at the altar tapped at the microphone and began bidding out the slaves. Two hours later the place was half empty and some people were becoming restless.
"Okay and to finish it off we have a special batch of slaves today, from Earth"
The cage was wheeled to the front as a button was pressed at the side and the cage was raised about 2 metres into the air. The children moved about and clung to each other.
"Who will bid for these?"
People began shouting out numbers.
"2000, anyone for 3000? we have a 3000! 4000 anyone? wow! 7000! Any higher? 18000 come on people get the money out. 26000 ... okay people we have a 26000 who can afford more than that for 19 slaves?! Oh my... we have a 35000...can anyone bid higher than that?!"
The auction went on and on for another while till it finally reached 118000 and they were sold to a very rich guard of the palace. He was tall and well built with dark red spikey hair and brown eyes. He seemed nice to look at but judging by the characteristics of some of the people this man would either be mad or dangerous.
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A/N OKay, i know that was short but better short than nothing, eh? Well anyways... thanx people for the reviews i love you all. I had to get the chapter up as i had to get rid of those slaves. So now Chi-Chi is away with Bardock, YAY! So she's going to be in the story and the 19 slaves are off to the auctions! The slaves that were to clean the palace probably wont get mentioned much.. too many characters means too much confusion really. But maybe 1 or 2 of the slaves sent to the kitchen will get mentioned and obviously i'll give names to the 5 slaves in the science lab because that's where Bulma is and we're gonna have to make her interact with people, i mean really. Oh, and i'll get more of the royal family in it. now people please review and tell me what to make happen next! Is there going to be an accident in the kitchen? Are one of the cleaning slaves gonna get into trouble? Is Bulma gonna do something bad? C'mon! Gimme suggestions! meep meep! Ciao!
Vegeta: YAY! I am finally going to get a speaking part! *punches into the air*