Hiyee! I'm back! Thanks to everyone for the nice and encouraging reviews.
...And... the not so... nice reviews. Hehe. I had writer's block for quite
a while. Sorry about the delay!!! I also had to finish my dress for Anime
Expo 03! It's very beautiful, might I add!
So, Sora comes back and sees Riku, almost kills him, then falls in love with him; now Riku gets his revenge. What happens next? Read on, I guess.
***Important*** is it legal to make this story graphical? I mean, I know NC- 17 rating was removed, so does that mean the action can't go any further or something? Anyone know? Please let me know if you want this story to get more, shall we say "exciting" or not. Thanks!!
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"Dear God..." Riku muttered in astonishment. "What have I done?"
He desperately tried to erase the sight before him. The body of dear Sora, drowning in blood and salty ocean water. No matter how hard he tried, Sora was still there.
It was no dream at all. Riku felt it very much real as the waves gradually carried Sora's unconscious body further in the sea.
"NO!!!!!!!" he held his head back and screamed in rage.
Without further adieu he leapt off the dune he had been standing on, down to where Sora laid. His masculine body prevented most of the water from slapping onto his friend.
With tears in his eyes and anger in his heart, he lifted Sora with no difficulty. Riku carried him away from the water. Away from the menacing waves that threatened to take Sora from him.
But to where?
Riku's realization that there was nowhere to go finally drained into him. He stood there, the middle of the sandy ground, wondering what to do. He clutched Sora's frail body oh so close. But not too tight as to inflict any harm.
Since coming back to Destiny Islands, Riku had never felt so out of place. This place was almost foreign to him. But, where else would he go? He was no longer accepted. They wouldn't care about him. They all hated him. They who were still living.
The only person that loves him, still needed him lay helpless in his arms. He looked down at the innocent face of Sora. The soft brown hair tickled his skin, the deathly smile pained his heart.
He smiled, although knowing he mustn't be smiling, at the beautiful and lonely face that did not look back at him.
"Sora... please don't leave me," he prayed. It was no use. Sora could not hear him.
Confusion. Indeed a scary word. He carried his beloved friend to a nearby cave. He set Sora down at the cave entrance and gently kissed his forehead.
Riku sat beside him with his back leaning on the wall inside the cavern, letting his eyes close for just a moment. But he dared not take his eyes away from Sora for long.
"What's going on?" Riku thought out loud. His heart tinged with pain as the rhythmic vibrations pulsated throughout his veins. From the depth of his soul to the rest of his body.
Suddenly it hit him. Not literally. "The Keyblade!!!" he shouted as he picked up the forbidden blade and brought it to eye-level.
It shone with great powers yet it gleamed with malicious intentions under the moonlight. Evil weapon. Riku's eyes narrowed as he glared at the accursed weapon.
It's brought nothing but despair. Not only did the possessor of the Keyblade towered with immerse strength; for it fed on the energy of the beholder.
In a futile attempt to destroy it, Riku swung it back and struck the inner cavern walls as hard as his lean arms would hit. It made a deafening noise as parts of the wall chipped away and tumbled at his feet.
However, the Keyblade refused to dent.
Riku, frustrated and annoyed, stormed out of the cave. He angrily flung the sword as far as to the ocean's beginning. He watched it, panting from madness.
"Ow!" a voice bellowed in pain as the blade hit a dark figure on the beach.
"What??" Riku was indeed too curious to know who he had just hit.
Lucky for him, the figure began racing to where he was. On impulse, he took defensive stance and guarded the body still lying behind him.
Faster and faster the person neared him. Finally, a few yards before reaching Riku, the person slowed down to a fast walk.
"What the hell was that for?!" Cloud screamed at him.
"Uh...what?" Riku was confused.
"I'm just standing there, mindin' my own FREAKIN' business, then YOU deliberately hit me with some giant key!" Cloud stammered, rubbing his head in pain from where the blade had hit him.
"S-sorry, I didn't mean to. I-I didn't see you there-" he explained.
"Whatever. Just drop it," Cloud flung the Keyblade up and hurled it deep into the ocean waters. Something neither Riku nor Sora could have done.
They had both failed to relieve themselves of the cruel intentions of the Keyblade. Once again, Cloud saves the night.
Upon seeing Sora lying in the ground, Cloud exclaimed, "Good God." He pointed to the fallen boy.
"Exactly what I said," Riku told him.
"Not again," Cloud muttered under his breath. "why do you two always have to do this? I'm not even gonna ask this time."
He pushed Riku aside to take a closer examination of Sora. He placed a face over Sora's forehead. It was still warm. And there was slight breathing from his nostrils.
"He'll be fine," Cloud told Riku as he stood to face him.
Riku stared at this strange man before him. He was taller, leaner and very much handsome. His face showed no emotions, even as he flashed a cocky smile at Riku.
"Don't worry about it," Cloud whispered to him as he placed a hand on his shoulder.
Riku, sensing an unusual feeling at this kind gesture, reached up to feel the spot where he had hit the man with the Keyblade. Cloud winced, although it did not sure. The pain was diminishing.
"Sorry," Riku apologized again.
Cloud stared into those young, but matured eyes. He sensed an exciting jolt through his blood stream. From the pit of his stomach to his inner thighs. This boy was hot.
"Uhh..." Riku took a step back when he realized how intently Cloud had been focusing on him. "you're scarin' me, man." He got into defensive stance that battle has taught him. "Look, I don't wanna fight you or anything, so... could you stop that?"
Cloud kept his glazed locked. "Stop what?" It was amazing the features he was looking at in Riku now so much reminded him of Sephiroth's!
"You look like you wanna beat me or something!" Riku narrowed his eyes slightly. Those same greenish, almond-shaped eyes that Sephy possessed, as well as with the long, platinum hair were indeed remarkable.
"'Eat you', haha," Cloud snickered.
Riku raised an eyebrow, giving him a confuzzled look, "but I said be-"
"Sephiroth!" he suddenly yelled.
"Gahh!" This freaky, blonde guy was a scary creep. The sudden shout from Cloud scared the crap out of dear Riku, sending the boy running down the beach.
"Hey! Come back!" Cloud chased after him. His longer legs eventually caught him up with Riku.
"Ow!" Riku whimpered as he was tackled face down onto the sand.
"Sephiroth..." Cloud whispered as he looked down at the lock of white hair this boy had grown.
"Will you quit that?!" Riku cheek was pressed into the ground as Cloud sat with both legs over the boy. "Get off me!"
"No," he answered stubbornly. "Not till you tell who you are."
Riku was beginning to get irritated. "Riku! I don't know who this Sapphire person is!"
Cloud chuckled to himself. He was obviously enjoying himself... and Riku. He stood up, but only enough for the boy to turn over on his back so he could breath.
In a futile attempt to escape Cloud's imprisonment, Riku was pinned down again. Only this time he was faced with his capturer.
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And we will have to end there, for now. Review or e-mail what you think. I made this chapter longer for your reading pleasures, so thank me. I think you will especially like the next chapter! So stay tune to find out what happens to Sora!!!!
Also, just go on and suggest what you would like to see happen next. If you want it to go 'harder' or 'softer' get my drift?? Hehe, see ya at Chapter 7 cuz I promise to have that up REALLY soon!!!
So, Sora comes back and sees Riku, almost kills him, then falls in love with him; now Riku gets his revenge. What happens next? Read on, I guess.
***Important*** is it legal to make this story graphical? I mean, I know NC- 17 rating was removed, so does that mean the action can't go any further or something? Anyone know? Please let me know if you want this story to get more, shall we say "exciting" or not. Thanks!!
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"Dear God..." Riku muttered in astonishment. "What have I done?"
He desperately tried to erase the sight before him. The body of dear Sora, drowning in blood and salty ocean water. No matter how hard he tried, Sora was still there.
It was no dream at all. Riku felt it very much real as the waves gradually carried Sora's unconscious body further in the sea.
"NO!!!!!!!" he held his head back and screamed in rage.
Without further adieu he leapt off the dune he had been standing on, down to where Sora laid. His masculine body prevented most of the water from slapping onto his friend.
With tears in his eyes and anger in his heart, he lifted Sora with no difficulty. Riku carried him away from the water. Away from the menacing waves that threatened to take Sora from him.
But to where?
Riku's realization that there was nowhere to go finally drained into him. He stood there, the middle of the sandy ground, wondering what to do. He clutched Sora's frail body oh so close. But not too tight as to inflict any harm.
Since coming back to Destiny Islands, Riku had never felt so out of place. This place was almost foreign to him. But, where else would he go? He was no longer accepted. They wouldn't care about him. They all hated him. They who were still living.
The only person that loves him, still needed him lay helpless in his arms. He looked down at the innocent face of Sora. The soft brown hair tickled his skin, the deathly smile pained his heart.
He smiled, although knowing he mustn't be smiling, at the beautiful and lonely face that did not look back at him.
"Sora... please don't leave me," he prayed. It was no use. Sora could not hear him.
Confusion. Indeed a scary word. He carried his beloved friend to a nearby cave. He set Sora down at the cave entrance and gently kissed his forehead.
Riku sat beside him with his back leaning on the wall inside the cavern, letting his eyes close for just a moment. But he dared not take his eyes away from Sora for long.
"What's going on?" Riku thought out loud. His heart tinged with pain as the rhythmic vibrations pulsated throughout his veins. From the depth of his soul to the rest of his body.
Suddenly it hit him. Not literally. "The Keyblade!!!" he shouted as he picked up the forbidden blade and brought it to eye-level.
It shone with great powers yet it gleamed with malicious intentions under the moonlight. Evil weapon. Riku's eyes narrowed as he glared at the accursed weapon.
It's brought nothing but despair. Not only did the possessor of the Keyblade towered with immerse strength; for it fed on the energy of the beholder.
In a futile attempt to destroy it, Riku swung it back and struck the inner cavern walls as hard as his lean arms would hit. It made a deafening noise as parts of the wall chipped away and tumbled at his feet.
However, the Keyblade refused to dent.
Riku, frustrated and annoyed, stormed out of the cave. He angrily flung the sword as far as to the ocean's beginning. He watched it, panting from madness.
"Ow!" a voice bellowed in pain as the blade hit a dark figure on the beach.
"What??" Riku was indeed too curious to know who he had just hit.
Lucky for him, the figure began racing to where he was. On impulse, he took defensive stance and guarded the body still lying behind him.
Faster and faster the person neared him. Finally, a few yards before reaching Riku, the person slowed down to a fast walk.
"What the hell was that for?!" Cloud screamed at him.
"Uh...what?" Riku was confused.
"I'm just standing there, mindin' my own FREAKIN' business, then YOU deliberately hit me with some giant key!" Cloud stammered, rubbing his head in pain from where the blade had hit him.
"S-sorry, I didn't mean to. I-I didn't see you there-" he explained.
"Whatever. Just drop it," Cloud flung the Keyblade up and hurled it deep into the ocean waters. Something neither Riku nor Sora could have done.
They had both failed to relieve themselves of the cruel intentions of the Keyblade. Once again, Cloud saves the night.
Upon seeing Sora lying in the ground, Cloud exclaimed, "Good God." He pointed to the fallen boy.
"Exactly what I said," Riku told him.
"Not again," Cloud muttered under his breath. "why do you two always have to do this? I'm not even gonna ask this time."
He pushed Riku aside to take a closer examination of Sora. He placed a face over Sora's forehead. It was still warm. And there was slight breathing from his nostrils.
"He'll be fine," Cloud told Riku as he stood to face him.
Riku stared at this strange man before him. He was taller, leaner and very much handsome. His face showed no emotions, even as he flashed a cocky smile at Riku.
"Don't worry about it," Cloud whispered to him as he placed a hand on his shoulder.
Riku, sensing an unusual feeling at this kind gesture, reached up to feel the spot where he had hit the man with the Keyblade. Cloud winced, although it did not sure. The pain was diminishing.
"Sorry," Riku apologized again.
Cloud stared into those young, but matured eyes. He sensed an exciting jolt through his blood stream. From the pit of his stomach to his inner thighs. This boy was hot.
"Uhh..." Riku took a step back when he realized how intently Cloud had been focusing on him. "you're scarin' me, man." He got into defensive stance that battle has taught him. "Look, I don't wanna fight you or anything, so... could you stop that?"
Cloud kept his glazed locked. "Stop what?" It was amazing the features he was looking at in Riku now so much reminded him of Sephiroth's!
"You look like you wanna beat me or something!" Riku narrowed his eyes slightly. Those same greenish, almond-shaped eyes that Sephy possessed, as well as with the long, platinum hair were indeed remarkable.
"'Eat you', haha," Cloud snickered.
Riku raised an eyebrow, giving him a confuzzled look, "but I said be-"
"Sephiroth!" he suddenly yelled.
"Gahh!" This freaky, blonde guy was a scary creep. The sudden shout from Cloud scared the crap out of dear Riku, sending the boy running down the beach.
"Hey! Come back!" Cloud chased after him. His longer legs eventually caught him up with Riku.
"Ow!" Riku whimpered as he was tackled face down onto the sand.
"Sephiroth..." Cloud whispered as he looked down at the lock of white hair this boy had grown.
"Will you quit that?!" Riku cheek was pressed into the ground as Cloud sat with both legs over the boy. "Get off me!"
"No," he answered stubbornly. "Not till you tell who you are."
Riku was beginning to get irritated. "Riku! I don't know who this Sapphire person is!"
Cloud chuckled to himself. He was obviously enjoying himself... and Riku. He stood up, but only enough for the boy to turn over on his back so he could breath.
In a futile attempt to escape Cloud's imprisonment, Riku was pinned down again. Only this time he was faced with his capturer.
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And we will have to end there, for now. Review or e-mail what you think. I made this chapter longer for your reading pleasures, so thank me. I think you will especially like the next chapter! So stay tune to find out what happens to Sora!!!!
Also, just go on and suggest what you would like to see happen next. If you want it to go 'harder' or 'softer' get my drift?? Hehe, see ya at Chapter 7 cuz I promise to have that up REALLY soon!!!