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OK so this is my first fanfict and I don't know if it's good. Only you can tell me if it's good. So read it and review. Oh and by the way I might change the 'charmed ones' powers so read it and see if I do.
Phoebe and Paige were walking through P3 trying to dodge the people dancing in their way. "Ok, so I hope Piper and Leo have gotten over that silly fight they had," said Phoebe looking wildly around for, what Paige presumed, was Piper. "Yeah, I know. Piper acts so different to us and Leo now that she's angry with him," said Paige staring at Phoebe. ''Yeah, and when she's angry with him when he comes to give us advice and stuff like that she starts to yell," said Phoebe still looking around as wildly as before. "OK! What are you looking for anyway," said Paige starting to look in the same direction. "Ah, watch it," said a tall, pretty, rich looking girl which was about 18 year old looking with a huge crowed of friends that Paige just bumped into. "Sorry," said Paige sarcastically staring at her. "You better be," said the girl looking at Paige like she was a dirty little rat and then she walked off. "How rude," said Paige after she was out of earshot. Phoebe who had now stopped looking for whatever it was she was looking for because of the incident said "forget it, she's a teenager, there all like that." "Hey there's Piper," said Phoebe looking through a small gap that the people dancing made "lets go see her. "Wait," said Paige stopping her, "she's talking to Leo. I don't think we should interrupt them. Let's sit here and wait till their finish," said Paige pointing at two chairs opposite the bar. "OK, fine," said Phoebe taking a seat. "What were you looking for when we entered anyway," said Paige with a strange, distrusting look in her eyes. "I was only looking for Piper," said Phoebe hoping that she looked convincing. "You do know that I don't believe you don't you," said Paige "what were you really looking for." "OK, so I told Leo to talk to Piper tonight and I was looking for him couse I said that I would help him with Piper since she is my sister, and because I know a lot about her," Phoebe said very fast and now knowing that she looked convincing couse she was telling the truth. "What," said Paige looking and sounding angry "how could you." "You know they are a good couple, even you said it," said Phoebe, "and besides we need them to get back together, for humanities sake." "Huh," said Paige not looking at her. "Can I get you a drink," said a waitress Paige nor Phoebe had ever seen before. "No thank you," said Paige trying to sound normal but failed "hey look Piper finished talking to Leo." They walked over to Piper "hey Piper," said Phoebe trying to looking as though nothing had happened, "how did it go with Leo." "Lets got a booth, then I'll tell you everything," said Piper. "Ok," said Paige. When they arrived at the booth Phoebe got a premonition. "Paige, it's that girl you bumped into she's out back a demon trying to kill her and get her powers. I think she's a witch, said Phoebe looking worried. "We better go," said Piper looking at the uneasy look on Paige's face. They practically ran to the back door and when they opened it Phoebe's premonition was right, the girl was walking back as the demon was walking towards her taking bigger steppes than her. The demon grabbed the girl and placed the knife next to her neck. Phoebe, who the demon hadn't seen yet, doubled herself and transported behind the demon and kicked. There was suddenly a shower of blood from the girl's neck. They vanquished the demon and walked over to the girl.
OK so that's it. I hoped you liked it. If you did please review and if you didn't please review. I won't post the next chapter until I get enough reviews to satisfy me.
OK so this is my first fanfict and I don't know if it's good. Only you can tell me if it's good. So read it and review. Oh and by the way I might change the 'charmed ones' powers so read it and see if I do.
Phoebe and Paige were walking through P3 trying to dodge the people dancing in their way. "Ok, so I hope Piper and Leo have gotten over that silly fight they had," said Phoebe looking wildly around for, what Paige presumed, was Piper. "Yeah, I know. Piper acts so different to us and Leo now that she's angry with him," said Paige staring at Phoebe. ''Yeah, and when she's angry with him when he comes to give us advice and stuff like that she starts to yell," said Phoebe still looking around as wildly as before. "OK! What are you looking for anyway," said Paige starting to look in the same direction. "Ah, watch it," said a tall, pretty, rich looking girl which was about 18 year old looking with a huge crowed of friends that Paige just bumped into. "Sorry," said Paige sarcastically staring at her. "You better be," said the girl looking at Paige like she was a dirty little rat and then she walked off. "How rude," said Paige after she was out of earshot. Phoebe who had now stopped looking for whatever it was she was looking for because of the incident said "forget it, she's a teenager, there all like that." "Hey there's Piper," said Phoebe looking through a small gap that the people dancing made "lets go see her. "Wait," said Paige stopping her, "she's talking to Leo. I don't think we should interrupt them. Let's sit here and wait till their finish," said Paige pointing at two chairs opposite the bar. "OK, fine," said Phoebe taking a seat. "What were you looking for when we entered anyway," said Paige with a strange, distrusting look in her eyes. "I was only looking for Piper," said Phoebe hoping that she looked convincing. "You do know that I don't believe you don't you," said Paige "what were you really looking for." "OK, so I told Leo to talk to Piper tonight and I was looking for him couse I said that I would help him with Piper since she is my sister, and because I know a lot about her," Phoebe said very fast and now knowing that she looked convincing couse she was telling the truth. "What," said Paige looking and sounding angry "how could you." "You know they are a good couple, even you said it," said Phoebe, "and besides we need them to get back together, for humanities sake." "Huh," said Paige not looking at her. "Can I get you a drink," said a waitress Paige nor Phoebe had ever seen before. "No thank you," said Paige trying to sound normal but failed "hey look Piper finished talking to Leo." They walked over to Piper "hey Piper," said Phoebe trying to looking as though nothing had happened, "how did it go with Leo." "Lets got a booth, then I'll tell you everything," said Piper. "Ok," said Paige. When they arrived at the booth Phoebe got a premonition. "Paige, it's that girl you bumped into she's out back a demon trying to kill her and get her powers. I think she's a witch, said Phoebe looking worried. "We better go," said Piper looking at the uneasy look on Paige's face. They practically ran to the back door and when they opened it Phoebe's premonition was right, the girl was walking back as the demon was walking towards her taking bigger steppes than her. The demon grabbed the girl and placed the knife next to her neck. Phoebe, who the demon hadn't seen yet, doubled herself and transported behind the demon and kicked. There was suddenly a shower of blood from the girl's neck. They vanquished the demon and walked over to the girl.
OK so that's it. I hoped you liked it. If you did please review and if you didn't please review. I won't post the next chapter until I get enough reviews to satisfy me.