Hello everyone. Rc here. This might be a different format then I used on my last story but please don't pull out your ray guns and blast me. It's only like that because I am a laaaaaaazy bum. I was up all night singing christmas carols in the projects. Oh well *yawn*! Here is Chapter 2 of Melquiades.
Chapter 2: A New Life
By The Talented Ms. Random Classmate
She kept walking with him. For the most part, the entire journey was silent(that gets un-nerving). She didn't make a sound I fear that it would be her last, and he hummed quietly. She began thinking. I wonder what Tersa and Tim are doing now? Probably playing with their toys while Aunt Gillana makes a cake for them to eat. Not that they need the weight. No wonder she was so happy that morning... she wanted me to leave.... Now that I think about it she never really like me. I think that entire family hated me! It's not my fault my parents--But she was cut off. The travelers had reached their destination. It was a large cabin made of oak and pine(*cry* [is a major tree hugger]). They were met by a very tall young man. He had un-tidy black hair and shimmering green eyes. He had very pale skin and was about 6'7. The boy shook hands with the mage. She decided that this was Numair's son, Demitre. They continued greeting each other as she stood waiting to be introduced. A huge-mongoose(my term for REALLY big) horse head suddenly stuck it's huge-mongoose head in her pocket. She shrieked and jumped five feet to her left (direction away from the horse). The boy said,"It's only Shadow he won't hurt you. Come on let's go inside!" Numair followed him in.
"Demitre, this is the new servent I was talking about..."
From there the voices trailed off. She returned to her inner-monolouge. Then sat down and cried.
End of Chapter 2
I know that my chapters are really short but it will measure up to a semi-interesting fanfic. I made Mel look like a whimp in this and my last chapter but her chara does develop into a KAC (kick ass chick). Demitre gets a little better too. He's one of my friends chara's so you can't blame me if his description is wrong. Oh well! Peace out!!!! -RC