Tearing them apart
Eowiweth had finally woke up. "Oh look the almighty fighter is awake." Anithrarith said. "How'd you find me?" She asked rubbing her head. "I heard foot steps and surprised you." Elril-Galia said with a note of teasing in her voice. (Note: for now on I'm going to put Elril-Galia as Galia and Anithrarith as Rarith. Just to make it easier :End note)
The sun had completely gone down by now and the girls left their senses on, for the Shadowin were out and they smelt elves and a human. Calil-Gawen walked in front, Tiniwiel was second, Eowiodth next, then Elriowiel, after her Carandra, then Ceng, then in the middle of Rarith and Galia was Eowiweth. They had to stay in the forest of Shannara. Calil-Gawen looked up and still saw the wall of Shannara. She started thinking allowed, "The wall was put up to protect the people of Shannara, to protect me and it was meant to keep us all in, and keep outsiders out." "I think there's an easier way to get to Rivendell. Cali, there is one other way faster and probably easier as well." Carandra said. Calil-Gawen turned around quickly her hair swooshing in front of her face. "I know what you're thinking Carandra, go through the abandoned troll caves and I would if it wasn't abandoned any more." Calil-Gawen said. "What do you mean?" Galia asked. I went to go to the caves when I was younger I saw.Shadowin egg sacks everywhere. So now the Shadowin would not think we would." Calil-Gawen stopped. She had an evil grin on her face. "Carandra you're a genius. The mushy glob in your head actually dose work!" Clil-Gawen yelled with joy. She explained her plan with the others whispering. "We go in to the troll caves try to get around the egg sacks and find the tunnel that will lead us away from Killshan." Calil-Gawen said joyously. "Why would we do that that's like asking to be murdered." Tiniwiel said a hint of outrage in her voice. "That's exactly it, they don't think we would go into an area where their children are it's brilliant." Ceng whispered. "SSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Rarith said. "What?" Calil-Gawen asked. Galia pointed at a pair of cruel looking blue glowing eyes. The Shadowin females had blue glowing eyes. Tiniwiel pointed upward, more eyes were looking at them from the trees cruel red glowing eyes, watching their every move. Eowiweth, looked around she saw the yellow glowing eyes of her companions, then the blue eyes of the females, and the red eyes of the male Shadowin. "When I say run we run for The Bog Owacyn." Calil-Gawen whispered. "RUN!" Calil-Gawen, Rarith, Ceng, Tiniwiel, Carandra, Elriowiel, Eowiweth, Eowiodth, and Galia ran. Calil-Gawen stopped, she pulled out her bow and yanked an arrow out of her quiver. She strung it to her bow. She felt the feathers in-between her fingers, pulled the arrow back and let go. It flew like lightning. A piercing light burst into the night sky knocking Calil-Gawen to the ground. She looked up the Shadowin were no where to be found. She exhaled slowly then looked around for her friends. They had been knocked down as well. "What in Seclya's name happened?" Rarith asked. "I-I don't know." Clil-Gawen stuttered. She looked back down the arrow was back in her hand. "How did my arrow get back in my hand?" Calil-Gawen questioned herself. "Well, we can't get to the troll caves from here best if we went through the bog." Elriowiel said. Ceng helped Clil-Gawen up. "Aright then we most go through the bog."
They walked for three days with out sleeping or eating. Shadowing blood was all over Calil-Gawen's clothes, she was trying to rub it off but it was stained. "Darn it and these are my best britches!" She said. They finally after many days walk were close to the bog. "What is that horrid stench?!" Eowiweth asked putting her arm over nose. "Bog Owacyn." Calil-Gawen said. "What exactly is this bog made of?" Eowiweth asked. "Well the top layer is sticky mud but it dose have growing things in it, the second layer is dry mud where all the worms and other creatures live, the third layer is made of very thin ice, and the fourth and last layer is water that has never been touched by the sun. One wrong move could coast you your life." Ceng said. "How do you know so much about it?" Eowiweth asked. "Well think amazing my grandmother came here to get to Shannara and she still lives in Shannara. So I wonder how I know what the bog is like?" Ceng asked rolling her eyes.
They made a few turns and were at the bog. It was an amazing yet dreadful sight. This bog had a-a-a "What the heck is a water fall doing in a bog?" "I think the Shadowin got bored. They took out an interior area and made a cliff." Rarith said. "Come along then we half to pass here or we'll never get across." Calil-Gawen said. She took a small step on the bog's surface half expecting it to break half expecting something to fly at her. Nothing happened, she took her foot off and looked behind her at the others. "I am not going first." She said. "Why not?" Galia asked. "Well, um.because I say so and I'm your queen and I say you all go before me." Calil-Gawen said. "You are such a chicken!" Eowiweth said. She put her foot on the surface and felt something move under it. "What was that?" She asked urgently. "I don't know but I'm not going first!" Calil-Gawen said. "Alright I'll do it sense he rest of you seem to be such cowards." Carandra said. She put her foot firmly on the surface and started walking across. After her went Tiniwiel and Ceng, third Galia, fourth Rarith, fifth Eowiweth, sixth Elriowiel, seventh Eowiodith, eight Eowiweth, and ninth Clil-Gawen. She was almost to the other side when her whole body feel through broke through the sticky mud, dry mud, thin ice and went straight down to sting cold water and her necklace somehow broke off her neck, Nebrini. "Cali!" Tiniwiel screamed. The surface started braking around their feet when suddenly they were all drug under the bog it went four different ways. Tiniwiel fell down the waterfall the exact same way Clil-Gawen did and lost her ring, Siowiel. Rarith, Galia, and Eowiweth went along the east way of the bog; Rarith and Galia lost their rings, Delebririth and Mioniel. Elriowiel and Ceng went the west way of the bog losing their rings, Unadith and Ranra, And Carandra and Eowiodth went north but they did not lose their rings no on the contrary they kept their rings, Amberindra and Tefur and caught Nebrini, Siowiel, Delebririth, Mioniel, Unadith and Ranra. Carandra and Eowiodth tried screaming but nothing came out but air bubbles.
Tell me how you all like it and I'm sorry I've taken so long to right don't worry though I'll let you read my teaser trailer for the next chapter. Her it is. "My lord!" A man yelled. He ran towards a sturdy looking man with the face of a noble king, him and another man held up 2 girls. "Who are they?" The king asked. "Clil-Gawen where is she?" the girl with dust blonde hair asked. Flashes to her hand and the other girl's hand in them were 7 rings and a necklace. A flash again shows Calil-Gawen punching through the surface of the bog. "Do you understand what they are saying?" The king asked an elven maiden. "They speak a language I have never heard." She replied. Flashes to a girl who looks like Clil-Gawen except for her eyes. Goes back to the girls in the city of Gondor Eowiodth is lying in the bed peacefully. She wakes up still holding Calil-Gawen's necklace. Scene goes to Mirkwood. Legolas, "What did you say your name was again?" It shows Calil-Gawen looking through the trees. Scene goes to Elriowiel and Ceng. Ceng opens her eyes and looks to see the Lady Galadriel looking down at her. Scene goes to the Shire three girls are floating in the water they are now on the shore knocked out and unnoticed.
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Eowiweth had finally woke up. "Oh look the almighty fighter is awake." Anithrarith said. "How'd you find me?" She asked rubbing her head. "I heard foot steps and surprised you." Elril-Galia said with a note of teasing in her voice. (Note: for now on I'm going to put Elril-Galia as Galia and Anithrarith as Rarith. Just to make it easier :End note)
The sun had completely gone down by now and the girls left their senses on, for the Shadowin were out and they smelt elves and a human. Calil-Gawen walked in front, Tiniwiel was second, Eowiodth next, then Elriowiel, after her Carandra, then Ceng, then in the middle of Rarith and Galia was Eowiweth. They had to stay in the forest of Shannara. Calil-Gawen looked up and still saw the wall of Shannara. She started thinking allowed, "The wall was put up to protect the people of Shannara, to protect me and it was meant to keep us all in, and keep outsiders out." "I think there's an easier way to get to Rivendell. Cali, there is one other way faster and probably easier as well." Carandra said. Calil-Gawen turned around quickly her hair swooshing in front of her face. "I know what you're thinking Carandra, go through the abandoned troll caves and I would if it wasn't abandoned any more." Calil-Gawen said. "What do you mean?" Galia asked. I went to go to the caves when I was younger I saw.Shadowin egg sacks everywhere. So now the Shadowin would not think we would." Calil-Gawen stopped. She had an evil grin on her face. "Carandra you're a genius. The mushy glob in your head actually dose work!" Clil-Gawen yelled with joy. She explained her plan with the others whispering. "We go in to the troll caves try to get around the egg sacks and find the tunnel that will lead us away from Killshan." Calil-Gawen said joyously. "Why would we do that that's like asking to be murdered." Tiniwiel said a hint of outrage in her voice. "That's exactly it, they don't think we would go into an area where their children are it's brilliant." Ceng whispered. "SSSSSSSSSSSSSHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!" Rarith said. "What?" Calil-Gawen asked. Galia pointed at a pair of cruel looking blue glowing eyes. The Shadowin females had blue glowing eyes. Tiniwiel pointed upward, more eyes were looking at them from the trees cruel red glowing eyes, watching their every move. Eowiweth, looked around she saw the yellow glowing eyes of her companions, then the blue eyes of the females, and the red eyes of the male Shadowin. "When I say run we run for The Bog Owacyn." Calil-Gawen whispered. "RUN!" Calil-Gawen, Rarith, Ceng, Tiniwiel, Carandra, Elriowiel, Eowiweth, Eowiodth, and Galia ran. Calil-Gawen stopped, she pulled out her bow and yanked an arrow out of her quiver. She strung it to her bow. She felt the feathers in-between her fingers, pulled the arrow back and let go. It flew like lightning. A piercing light burst into the night sky knocking Calil-Gawen to the ground. She looked up the Shadowin were no where to be found. She exhaled slowly then looked around for her friends. They had been knocked down as well. "What in Seclya's name happened?" Rarith asked. "I-I don't know." Clil-Gawen stuttered. She looked back down the arrow was back in her hand. "How did my arrow get back in my hand?" Calil-Gawen questioned herself. "Well, we can't get to the troll caves from here best if we went through the bog." Elriowiel said. Ceng helped Clil-Gawen up. "Aright then we most go through the bog."
They walked for three days with out sleeping or eating. Shadowing blood was all over Calil-Gawen's clothes, she was trying to rub it off but it was stained. "Darn it and these are my best britches!" She said. They finally after many days walk were close to the bog. "What is that horrid stench?!" Eowiweth asked putting her arm over nose. "Bog Owacyn." Calil-Gawen said. "What exactly is this bog made of?" Eowiweth asked. "Well the top layer is sticky mud but it dose have growing things in it, the second layer is dry mud where all the worms and other creatures live, the third layer is made of very thin ice, and the fourth and last layer is water that has never been touched by the sun. One wrong move could coast you your life." Ceng said. "How do you know so much about it?" Eowiweth asked. "Well think amazing my grandmother came here to get to Shannara and she still lives in Shannara. So I wonder how I know what the bog is like?" Ceng asked rolling her eyes.
They made a few turns and were at the bog. It was an amazing yet dreadful sight. This bog had a-a-a "What the heck is a water fall doing in a bog?" "I think the Shadowin got bored. They took out an interior area and made a cliff." Rarith said. "Come along then we half to pass here or we'll never get across." Calil-Gawen said. She took a small step on the bog's surface half expecting it to break half expecting something to fly at her. Nothing happened, she took her foot off and looked behind her at the others. "I am not going first." She said. "Why not?" Galia asked. "Well, um.because I say so and I'm your queen and I say you all go before me." Calil-Gawen said. "You are such a chicken!" Eowiweth said. She put her foot on the surface and felt something move under it. "What was that?" She asked urgently. "I don't know but I'm not going first!" Calil-Gawen said. "Alright I'll do it sense he rest of you seem to be such cowards." Carandra said. She put her foot firmly on the surface and started walking across. After her went Tiniwiel and Ceng, third Galia, fourth Rarith, fifth Eowiweth, sixth Elriowiel, seventh Eowiodith, eight Eowiweth, and ninth Clil-Gawen. She was almost to the other side when her whole body feel through broke through the sticky mud, dry mud, thin ice and went straight down to sting cold water and her necklace somehow broke off her neck, Nebrini. "Cali!" Tiniwiel screamed. The surface started braking around their feet when suddenly they were all drug under the bog it went four different ways. Tiniwiel fell down the waterfall the exact same way Clil-Gawen did and lost her ring, Siowiel. Rarith, Galia, and Eowiweth went along the east way of the bog; Rarith and Galia lost their rings, Delebririth and Mioniel. Elriowiel and Ceng went the west way of the bog losing their rings, Unadith and Ranra, And Carandra and Eowiodth went north but they did not lose their rings no on the contrary they kept their rings, Amberindra and Tefur and caught Nebrini, Siowiel, Delebririth, Mioniel, Unadith and Ranra. Carandra and Eowiodth tried screaming but nothing came out but air bubbles.
Tell me how you all like it and I'm sorry I've taken so long to right don't worry though I'll let you read my teaser trailer for the next chapter. Her it is. "My lord!" A man yelled. He ran towards a sturdy looking man with the face of a noble king, him and another man held up 2 girls. "Who are they?" The king asked. "Clil-Gawen where is she?" the girl with dust blonde hair asked. Flashes to her hand and the other girl's hand in them were 7 rings and a necklace. A flash again shows Calil-Gawen punching through the surface of the bog. "Do you understand what they are saying?" The king asked an elven maiden. "They speak a language I have never heard." She replied. Flashes to a girl who looks like Clil-Gawen except for her eyes. Goes back to the girls in the city of Gondor Eowiodth is lying in the bed peacefully. She wakes up still holding Calil-Gawen's necklace. Scene goes to Mirkwood. Legolas, "What did you say your name was again?" It shows Calil-Gawen looking through the trees. Scene goes to Elriowiel and Ceng. Ceng opens her eyes and looks to see the Lady Galadriel looking down at her. Scene goes to the Shire three girls are floating in the water they are now on the shore knocked out and unnoticed.
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