~!~!~!~!~Hey Thank you so much for the reviews. This is the second part I
guess. I wasn't going to do anymore but then decided hey why not.I need the
practice anyways so may as well. So I don't own anything and this is my
first posted fan fiction.
So on with the story I hope that it is up to par! Thanks!!!!
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They soon broke away form their sweet but passionate kiss. Luke just stared at the women who had just opened up o him. Sure they had talked before but she had never shared any feelings deeper than whether or not Brad and Jennifer were good together or not. She was always on top of those things.Lorelei the human book of useless information, and he loved every part of her.
She had just said the words that he had waited years for her to say. He had never said anything to her to that extent before. He was the shy lonely type. You know the wall flower at parties that he actually attended. The kid that sat in the back of the class reading, and actually doing his work. He was a lot like Rory when he was a kid. He just didn't have the whole ritzy fantasy part of it. He read and worked in a hardware shop from the age of 11. His whole life had changed when Lorelei Gilmore walked into his life.
"Luke?" Lorelei was beginning to get worried. He had been staring at her for a while now and not saying anything, after there first kiss. "Luke are you okay?"
"Huh?" he blinked and brought himself back to the Gilmore living room. "Oh yeah, I'm fine. Better than fine, I'm in love."
"Oh my God! Where are my keys? We have to get you to a hospital.you are saying romantic things. Did you fall and hit your head on your way here?" she asked as she ran around the house pretending to look for her keys.
Luke followed her with his eyes as she moved gracefully yet forcefully around the living room.looking for keys. "No really Lorelei I love you too."
Lorelei stopped running around like a tyrant. She suddenly got Goosebumps and a flip floppy feeling in her stomach. She turned and made eye contact with the most comfortable eyes. She loved looking into those eyes. She could tell when he was mad, sad, happy, tired and right now she could tell that he was in love.with her. She could tell because she had had that look in her eyes so many times before, just when she was near him.
Lorelei sauntered over to the man in flannel. She placed he hands on his scruffy cheeks and smiled. She snaked her arms around his neck and leaned up. She headed toward his mouth and saw Luke close his eyes awaiting another kiss. She took a detour and whispered in his ear. "I love you too."
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Luke woke up that morning with a spring in his step. We woke up extra early so that he could make special pancakes and coffee for Lorelei. He also needed to go to the florist to buy some flowers and little bud vases to go on all the tables at the diner. He would make sure to get daisies, yellow and white. As well as his favorite flowers, the sunflower.
Luke went down stairs and ground up some of his special roast and started the pancake batter. He added strawberry extract and fresh strawberries. He then diced up some strawberries and let them marinate in sugar and fruit juice. That would be the special of the day. They were the pancakes that Luke saved for Lorelei's birthday. All year she would wait for them. But they had a new anniversary to celebrate now.
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Lorelei woke up to the fresh cool morning air. She smiled as she looked into the sky and noticed that it was the first clear day she had actually seen in 6 months. Every other day she woke up dreading what would become of it. But not this morning, this morning was the start of a whole new chapter. If she were writing her biography this would be the next chapter entitled Love- the flannel man. Because really. He love was the flannel man. The man in the flannel. Luke. She loved Luke and he wore the flannel.
Today was going to be the best Sunday ever. She hated Sundays. They were the day before you go to work, her last day to hang out with Rory. But not today. Not this Sunday this Sunday was going to be different. She and Luke were together now and they were in love. Well actually she didn't know if they were together. She just knew that they were in love. He had told her so in a very unluke like manner.
She got out of her comfy bed and walked to her closet and got her robe. She was going to take a shower and use her good shampoo and conditioner and body wash that was saved for her dates. Not that she smelt like a goat the other days.but this was the special stuff, the stuff that Luke had gotten her for her birthday the year before. Then she was going to go to the diner and bug the hell out of him until she got her coffee.that sounded as good a plan as any. She would call Rory later and tell her to meet her at the diner after she went to Paris' house to work on a chemistry project.
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Luke was serving a lady with three kids when he got a very strange feeling in his stomach. It felt like butterflies. He could tell that she was on her way to the diner. He went to the counter and grabbed her cup and vase. He had a special vase just for her. It had large daisies and sunflowers in it. He had even tied a bow around it. He glanced out the window and saw the jeep as she parked. He went to the kitchen and brought out her plate that had pink pancakes but into bite size hearts and the strawberry sauce all over them. He went back to the counter and pretended to be pre occupied with a piece of yellow legal paper.
He heard the bell on the door jingle letting him know that some one had entered his diner. He never looked up. He simply put the paper down, grabbed the pot of special Lorelei coffee, and walked to the table that he had prepared for her. He still hadn't made eye contact with her. He knew that she would have a shocked look on her face.
When he finally did look up he saw her crying.
"Lorelei what's wrong?" he asked in a voice full of concern.
"You." She said through weeps.
"What did I do?"
"This, the flowers, the hearts, and the coffee."
"I am so sorry I thought that it would all be good. You know I did it for you." He said getting angry.
"I know." Lorelei smiled and stood up. She hugged him and then gave him a kiss on the cheek. "I love you so much. Thank you."
Luke was shocked he thought that he had done something wrong. He pulled away from her. "Don't ever do that again."
"What?"
"I thought that I had done something wrong. You can't cry like that and not tell a guy that you are crying tears of happiness."
Lorelei looked around and noticed that the whole diner was watching them as if they were on stage. "Your food is getting cold!" she announced. Everyone turned back to their food, but kept looking at them from the corner of their eyes.
Luke hated the attention, but then he looked back to Lorelei and decided that she was well worth it.
So on with the story I hope that it is up to par! Thanks!!!!
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They soon broke away form their sweet but passionate kiss. Luke just stared at the women who had just opened up o him. Sure they had talked before but she had never shared any feelings deeper than whether or not Brad and Jennifer were good together or not. She was always on top of those things.Lorelei the human book of useless information, and he loved every part of her.
She had just said the words that he had waited years for her to say. He had never said anything to her to that extent before. He was the shy lonely type. You know the wall flower at parties that he actually attended. The kid that sat in the back of the class reading, and actually doing his work. He was a lot like Rory when he was a kid. He just didn't have the whole ritzy fantasy part of it. He read and worked in a hardware shop from the age of 11. His whole life had changed when Lorelei Gilmore walked into his life.
"Luke?" Lorelei was beginning to get worried. He had been staring at her for a while now and not saying anything, after there first kiss. "Luke are you okay?"
"Huh?" he blinked and brought himself back to the Gilmore living room. "Oh yeah, I'm fine. Better than fine, I'm in love."
"Oh my God! Where are my keys? We have to get you to a hospital.you are saying romantic things. Did you fall and hit your head on your way here?" she asked as she ran around the house pretending to look for her keys.
Luke followed her with his eyes as she moved gracefully yet forcefully around the living room.looking for keys. "No really Lorelei I love you too."
Lorelei stopped running around like a tyrant. She suddenly got Goosebumps and a flip floppy feeling in her stomach. She turned and made eye contact with the most comfortable eyes. She loved looking into those eyes. She could tell when he was mad, sad, happy, tired and right now she could tell that he was in love.with her. She could tell because she had had that look in her eyes so many times before, just when she was near him.
Lorelei sauntered over to the man in flannel. She placed he hands on his scruffy cheeks and smiled. She snaked her arms around his neck and leaned up. She headed toward his mouth and saw Luke close his eyes awaiting another kiss. She took a detour and whispered in his ear. "I love you too."
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Luke woke up that morning with a spring in his step. We woke up extra early so that he could make special pancakes and coffee for Lorelei. He also needed to go to the florist to buy some flowers and little bud vases to go on all the tables at the diner. He would make sure to get daisies, yellow and white. As well as his favorite flowers, the sunflower.
Luke went down stairs and ground up some of his special roast and started the pancake batter. He added strawberry extract and fresh strawberries. He then diced up some strawberries and let them marinate in sugar and fruit juice. That would be the special of the day. They were the pancakes that Luke saved for Lorelei's birthday. All year she would wait for them. But they had a new anniversary to celebrate now.
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Lorelei woke up to the fresh cool morning air. She smiled as she looked into the sky and noticed that it was the first clear day she had actually seen in 6 months. Every other day she woke up dreading what would become of it. But not this morning, this morning was the start of a whole new chapter. If she were writing her biography this would be the next chapter entitled Love- the flannel man. Because really. He love was the flannel man. The man in the flannel. Luke. She loved Luke and he wore the flannel.
Today was going to be the best Sunday ever. She hated Sundays. They were the day before you go to work, her last day to hang out with Rory. But not today. Not this Sunday this Sunday was going to be different. She and Luke were together now and they were in love. Well actually she didn't know if they were together. She just knew that they were in love. He had told her so in a very unluke like manner.
She got out of her comfy bed and walked to her closet and got her robe. She was going to take a shower and use her good shampoo and conditioner and body wash that was saved for her dates. Not that she smelt like a goat the other days.but this was the special stuff, the stuff that Luke had gotten her for her birthday the year before. Then she was going to go to the diner and bug the hell out of him until she got her coffee.that sounded as good a plan as any. She would call Rory later and tell her to meet her at the diner after she went to Paris' house to work on a chemistry project.
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Luke was serving a lady with three kids when he got a very strange feeling in his stomach. It felt like butterflies. He could tell that she was on her way to the diner. He went to the counter and grabbed her cup and vase. He had a special vase just for her. It had large daisies and sunflowers in it. He had even tied a bow around it. He glanced out the window and saw the jeep as she parked. He went to the kitchen and brought out her plate that had pink pancakes but into bite size hearts and the strawberry sauce all over them. He went back to the counter and pretended to be pre occupied with a piece of yellow legal paper.
He heard the bell on the door jingle letting him know that some one had entered his diner. He never looked up. He simply put the paper down, grabbed the pot of special Lorelei coffee, and walked to the table that he had prepared for her. He still hadn't made eye contact with her. He knew that she would have a shocked look on her face.
When he finally did look up he saw her crying.
"Lorelei what's wrong?" he asked in a voice full of concern.
"You." She said through weeps.
"What did I do?"
"This, the flowers, the hearts, and the coffee."
"I am so sorry I thought that it would all be good. You know I did it for you." He said getting angry.
"I know." Lorelei smiled and stood up. She hugged him and then gave him a kiss on the cheek. "I love you so much. Thank you."
Luke was shocked he thought that he had done something wrong. He pulled away from her. "Don't ever do that again."
"What?"
"I thought that I had done something wrong. You can't cry like that and not tell a guy that you are crying tears of happiness."
Lorelei looked around and noticed that the whole diner was watching them as if they were on stage. "Your food is getting cold!" she announced. Everyone turned back to their food, but kept looking at them from the corner of their eyes.
Luke hated the attention, but then he looked back to Lorelei and decided that she was well worth it.