My whole friggin story is out of whack, for crying out loud! I just found that out today, and I'll try to fix it tomorrow-well, later today, since it's 2:45 in the morning. Trip has been postponed until AFTER the 25, so I might Put up another chapter or two, I don't know. Oh, I had an evil idea. To try and get people to review after reading, instead of just freeloading, what if when you review, if you leave your email (or if you don't want to leave it where anyone can get it, mail your address to me) I will send you the latest chapter that I've written BEFORE I post it on ff.net . How's that sound?