A/N: This is my first fic . Pls review! P.s. Harry & company are in 7 th
year. ^_^
Harry
Harry Potter climbed onto platform 9 &3/4 . " Hi ! " he waved to his friends.
" Hi, Harry." His friend Hermione Granger said. She was already in her hogwarts robes ,her long brown hair flowed over her shoulders like a waterfall. Next to her was Harry's bestfriend Ron Weasley. "Hullo, Harry." Ron greeted him, smiling.Ron then turned and kissed Hermione on the cheek , causing her to blush bright red. Harry smiled, Ron and Hermione had been dating since 5th year and had come a really long way.Of course there had been that brief time when Viktor Krum visited the school , and hugged Hermione in the garden . Ron had misunderstood and broke up with Hermione, but after that the two talked things out and realized that it was a horrible misunderstanding and forgave each other. " Where are Jade and Lorelei?" Hermione's voice broke his train of thought. Jade and Lorelei were two of their friends.Jade's real name was actually Judith Frayne, which according to her ,sucked, hence the nickname. Jade got along very well with all of them , so they were all very shocked when they found out she was in Slytherin. Jade was actually more Hermione's friend though, afterall both were prefects, but Jade was also very loose,for a prefect . She had dyed green hair which she wore long and tangled and she wore dark kohl on her eyelashes to bring out her murky green eyes.Lorelei , though was Harry's friend .Also in Slytherin, and dating Draco Malfoy which was obviously why Ron didn't like her. Lorelei was very spirited and liked Malfoy a lot , so she disliked Ron as much as he disliked her. Leaving Harry in a tight spot , since she was his bestfriend after Ron. " Probably on the train ." Harry replied. " Ok then lets get on already" Ron said.
Draco
Draco Malfoy was sitting in one of the train's compartments happily chatting with his girlfriend Lorelei -soon to be Malfoy - Allan, and his friends: Vin,Greg,Ignace and Joel . With a few of Lorelei's friends such as: Blaise , Jade Frayne , Faye Gwyn and her bestfriend Val(Valire) Lindon. Yes, all was well until Potter, Granger and Weasel came in. "Oh hi ," Potter said without thinking"Hi Lorelei, Jade, Faye...." His gaze fell on the rest of us" Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle, Zambini , Frazer and ...." He trailed off. He had totally no idea what their names were. Draco sneaked a glance at him, Harry still looked completely clueless. Draco decided to cut in" Well Potter incase you didn't know .This is Joel Fabe and Lyris Mordicai. He said smugly.
A/N : Good ? Bad? Opinions? Should I change writing? 5 out of 10 for writing skills? Please Review!!!!! This chapter is dedicated to Kim , thanks for giving me the confidience to write! ^_^
P.s. If u have any requests , pls send 2 : metal_scorpion@starplace.com ok? Thankz I love ya guys!! Smilez, Faith
Harry
Harry Potter climbed onto platform 9 &3/4 . " Hi ! " he waved to his friends.
" Hi, Harry." His friend Hermione Granger said. She was already in her hogwarts robes ,her long brown hair flowed over her shoulders like a waterfall. Next to her was Harry's bestfriend Ron Weasley. "Hullo, Harry." Ron greeted him, smiling.Ron then turned and kissed Hermione on the cheek , causing her to blush bright red. Harry smiled, Ron and Hermione had been dating since 5th year and had come a really long way.Of course there had been that brief time when Viktor Krum visited the school , and hugged Hermione in the garden . Ron had misunderstood and broke up with Hermione, but after that the two talked things out and realized that it was a horrible misunderstanding and forgave each other. " Where are Jade and Lorelei?" Hermione's voice broke his train of thought. Jade and Lorelei were two of their friends.Jade's real name was actually Judith Frayne, which according to her ,sucked, hence the nickname. Jade got along very well with all of them , so they were all very shocked when they found out she was in Slytherin. Jade was actually more Hermione's friend though, afterall both were prefects, but Jade was also very loose,for a prefect . She had dyed green hair which she wore long and tangled and she wore dark kohl on her eyelashes to bring out her murky green eyes.Lorelei , though was Harry's friend .Also in Slytherin, and dating Draco Malfoy which was obviously why Ron didn't like her. Lorelei was very spirited and liked Malfoy a lot , so she disliked Ron as much as he disliked her. Leaving Harry in a tight spot , since she was his bestfriend after Ron. " Probably on the train ." Harry replied. " Ok then lets get on already" Ron said.
Draco
Draco Malfoy was sitting in one of the train's compartments happily chatting with his girlfriend Lorelei -soon to be Malfoy - Allan, and his friends: Vin,Greg,Ignace and Joel . With a few of Lorelei's friends such as: Blaise , Jade Frayne , Faye Gwyn and her bestfriend Val(Valire) Lindon. Yes, all was well until Potter, Granger and Weasel came in. "Oh hi ," Potter said without thinking"Hi Lorelei, Jade, Faye...." His gaze fell on the rest of us" Malfoy, Crabbe, Goyle, Zambini , Frazer and ...." He trailed off. He had totally no idea what their names were. Draco sneaked a glance at him, Harry still looked completely clueless. Draco decided to cut in" Well Potter incase you didn't know .This is Joel Fabe and Lyris Mordicai. He said smugly.
A/N : Good ? Bad? Opinions? Should I change writing? 5 out of 10 for writing skills? Please Review!!!!! This chapter is dedicated to Kim , thanks for giving me the confidience to write! ^_^
P.s. If u have any requests , pls send 2 : metal_scorpion@starplace.com ok? Thankz I love ya guys!! Smilez, Faith