Wishfully Swept Away
Sorry about prologue sucking^^;;; and the bad mechanics... SIGH.
WARNING: I *WILL* BE CUTTING THIS CHAPTER INTO PARTS. Why? Because I NEED
to. Every part will be around 5 pages. In the last one, Shuichi openly
"meets" Yuki, then in the 2nd actual chapter, is the dance.
Warnings are the same, only now it's REALLY shonen-ai^^;
Disc: Don't own either. And I'm assuming you don't either.
Chapter one:
"Oi, Shuichi, you ready! This is a REAL battle, no practice here!"
"I'm ready, Hiro!"
Hiro, Shuichi's friend, stood about five feet to his right, bent over at a
battle stance, his right arm outstretched, in his gloved hand the handle of
a long sword. The sword is plain, the handle a deep black mahogany, ridged
along the length of the hilt for easy grip. The rest is a simple blade,
nothing but a hilt and blade, there is no hand guard of any kind, and the
blade stands at least a yard tall.
Hiro is dressed, not in uniform, as Shuichi is not either, (and the teachers
hate it) he's wearing a skin tight maroon shirt under a leather jacket. And
torn jeans he'd let Shuichi doodle all over.
Shuichi, likewise, is in a battle stance. Both hand's in front of him, within
each are a single, thin jagged dagger. Personalized daggers with handles made
for small, girly hands. The weapons in his hands are much more intricate than
Hiro's. The handles are of two identical dragons wrapped around the top,
their tails stretching all the way down to the blade.
They're breathing fire, which goes from multicolored flames into black waves
on the twisted blade of the dagger. Two tail wings protrude just above the
blade itself, spreading out about and inch.
The daggers each stand at six inches.
Shuichi, also not in uniform, is wearing a yellow with green sleeves
t-shirt over a thin black, almost see-through long-sleeved shirt. He's
wearing faded form-fitting black jeans.
"Ok, Shuichi, this is your first battle. I'm gonna walk you through it. First
things first, the monster, in this case a Weedlik, does not always go first,
and same time doesn't not go last mostly. If you want to hit it first, you've
got to move quickly, run up to it, strike, and then run back to your
position, got it?"
"Hai!" Shuichi replied, not breaking his concentrating look at the monster
juggling around on the dirt trail. It's small, but almost as high up as
Shuichi's leg. It's weapon seemed to be the vines it twirls around over it's
head, and thrusts into the ground."
"Ok, I'll go first, Shuichi!"
"Hai!"
Hiro lunged forward about to slice the monster when...
"Aaaaaaarrrrrrr!!!!!" We stop in our tracks, we quit bouncing, ready to
spring, and turn around.
Towering about twenty feet above us, is a T-rexaur. huge, orange-brown, yellow
eyes and teeth as long as Shuichi's hand is wide. And those are only its
back teeth.
The monster growls, and roars again. Shuichi stopped thinking, and stared at
it in horror. T-rexaurs are monsters only the highest of level SeeD's should
fight. But with a Weedlik behind them, and forests to thick to escape through
on their sides, they could not run.
"Shuichi, we *have* to take out that Weedlik, then we can escape!" Shuichi
nodded blindly, not willing to argue when Hiro seemed so. panicked, and
angry.
"WEE!" ^FWAP-SNAP^ "AUGH!" Shuichi turned from he giant monster to Hiro,
who'd fallen to his knee from an attack from the Weedlik that took his life
down two-hundred points, from it's original three-forty.
*Shuichi's pov*
I fish in my pocket for a Potion, and throw it to Hiro. He stands up quickly.
I'm sweating from exertion and panic. My life points, are a measly one- fifty.
For my level is only five, and Hiro's is level ten.
If that Weedlik can take down that many, and it's a *weak* monster considering
everything else, I can't begin to think of hat the T-rexaur is capable of
taking down!
"Shuichi, strike the Weedlik, it's your turn!" I nod, and quickly turn,
sprinting for the yellowish thing and slice it two times, both diagonal, one
with each dagger in my hand.
I have done fifty-two points damage to the Weedlik. I wonder how much life it
has left? I run back to my place.
"AAAAAAAARRR!" I hear loud thumping behind me, and I can't bring myself to
turn around as I feel the HOT breath on me and the fierce, *BURNING* pain of
sharp, LONG teeth piercing my skin, the hot blood gushing out of my thin,
frail body. I can hear Hiro's pain filled cry of my name, I can almost see
the panic on his face. But everything is so blurry, so black, I am bobbed up
and down with each chewing bite it takes. The landscape of the training area
is much different this high up. I can see the unbreakable glass window
students can look through to watch others train.
I see vaguely, the forms of many students. And. is that blond hair? I can't
tell everything's going black.I don't feel anything anymore.
My last senses recognition are being dropped, hearing in my mind vaguely
"Four-thousand-ten damage", my body hitting the ground, the beast going back
to it's place, and knowing I died in the battle...
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Oh my gosh! Is Shuichi really dead? Can he be revived with a Phoenix down?
Would I REALLY kill the main character in the first chapter?
I need reviews! I want at least a grand total of six b4 I continue!
Sorry about prologue sucking^^;;; and the bad mechanics... SIGH.
WARNING: I *WILL* BE CUTTING THIS CHAPTER INTO PARTS. Why? Because I NEED
to. Every part will be around 5 pages. In the last one, Shuichi openly
"meets" Yuki, then in the 2nd actual chapter, is the dance.
Warnings are the same, only now it's REALLY shonen-ai^^;
Disc: Don't own either. And I'm assuming you don't either.
Chapter one:
"Oi, Shuichi, you ready! This is a REAL battle, no practice here!"
"I'm ready, Hiro!"
Hiro, Shuichi's friend, stood about five feet to his right, bent over at a
battle stance, his right arm outstretched, in his gloved hand the handle of
a long sword. The sword is plain, the handle a deep black mahogany, ridged
along the length of the hilt for easy grip. The rest is a simple blade,
nothing but a hilt and blade, there is no hand guard of any kind, and the
blade stands at least a yard tall.
Hiro is dressed, not in uniform, as Shuichi is not either, (and the teachers
hate it) he's wearing a skin tight maroon shirt under a leather jacket. And
torn jeans he'd let Shuichi doodle all over.
Shuichi, likewise, is in a battle stance. Both hand's in front of him, within
each are a single, thin jagged dagger. Personalized daggers with handles made
for small, girly hands. The weapons in his hands are much more intricate than
Hiro's. The handles are of two identical dragons wrapped around the top,
their tails stretching all the way down to the blade.
They're breathing fire, which goes from multicolored flames into black waves
on the twisted blade of the dagger. Two tail wings protrude just above the
blade itself, spreading out about and inch.
The daggers each stand at six inches.
Shuichi, also not in uniform, is wearing a yellow with green sleeves
t-shirt over a thin black, almost see-through long-sleeved shirt. He's
wearing faded form-fitting black jeans.
"Ok, Shuichi, this is your first battle. I'm gonna walk you through it. First
things first, the monster, in this case a Weedlik, does not always go first,
and same time doesn't not go last mostly. If you want to hit it first, you've
got to move quickly, run up to it, strike, and then run back to your
position, got it?"
"Hai!" Shuichi replied, not breaking his concentrating look at the monster
juggling around on the dirt trail. It's small, but almost as high up as
Shuichi's leg. It's weapon seemed to be the vines it twirls around over it's
head, and thrusts into the ground."
"Ok, I'll go first, Shuichi!"
"Hai!"
Hiro lunged forward about to slice the monster when...
"Aaaaaaarrrrrrr!!!!!" We stop in our tracks, we quit bouncing, ready to
spring, and turn around.
Towering about twenty feet above us, is a T-rexaur. huge, orange-brown, yellow
eyes and teeth as long as Shuichi's hand is wide. And those are only its
back teeth.
The monster growls, and roars again. Shuichi stopped thinking, and stared at
it in horror. T-rexaurs are monsters only the highest of level SeeD's should
fight. But with a Weedlik behind them, and forests to thick to escape through
on their sides, they could not run.
"Shuichi, we *have* to take out that Weedlik, then we can escape!" Shuichi
nodded blindly, not willing to argue when Hiro seemed so. panicked, and
angry.
"WEE!" ^FWAP-SNAP^ "AUGH!" Shuichi turned from he giant monster to Hiro,
who'd fallen to his knee from an attack from the Weedlik that took his life
down two-hundred points, from it's original three-forty.
*Shuichi's pov*
I fish in my pocket for a Potion, and throw it to Hiro. He stands up quickly.
I'm sweating from exertion and panic. My life points, are a measly one- fifty.
For my level is only five, and Hiro's is level ten.
If that Weedlik can take down that many, and it's a *weak* monster considering
everything else, I can't begin to think of hat the T-rexaur is capable of
taking down!
"Shuichi, strike the Weedlik, it's your turn!" I nod, and quickly turn,
sprinting for the yellowish thing and slice it two times, both diagonal, one
with each dagger in my hand.
I have done fifty-two points damage to the Weedlik. I wonder how much life it
has left? I run back to my place.
"AAAAAAAARRR!" I hear loud thumping behind me, and I can't bring myself to
turn around as I feel the HOT breath on me and the fierce, *BURNING* pain of
sharp, LONG teeth piercing my skin, the hot blood gushing out of my thin,
frail body. I can hear Hiro's pain filled cry of my name, I can almost see
the panic on his face. But everything is so blurry, so black, I am bobbed up
and down with each chewing bite it takes. The landscape of the training area
is much different this high up. I can see the unbreakable glass window
students can look through to watch others train.
I see vaguely, the forms of many students. And. is that blond hair? I can't
tell everything's going black.I don't feel anything anymore.
My last senses recognition are being dropped, hearing in my mind vaguely
"Four-thousand-ten damage", my body hitting the ground, the beast going back
to it's place, and knowing I died in the battle...
------------------------
Oh my gosh! Is Shuichi really dead? Can he be revived with a Phoenix down?
Would I REALLY kill the main character in the first chapter?
I need reviews! I want at least a grand total of six b4 I continue!