Back Again
By: Potions Master Snape Potter
Email: BritPopPrincess5@aol.com
Aim: BritPopPrincess5
Rating: R
Hey everyone, this is the revised version, and hopefully more well written version of Back Again. I know that my writing of chapter one was not the best in the world but i sort of wrote it in a spur of the moment, the idea came to me while i was cleaning. Well, this Chapter will be done from my Point of View though i might do different peoples point of view it will be separated into chapters. Please enjoy the story and yes chapter two is done but i wanna see how people like this version better, if anyone wants a copy of the first chapter after i replace it with this version so you can compare or you think its better just email me or ask me in review, and there is always Aim. Thank you for reading this. Out Of Character Warning!!
~**~ Potions Master Snape Potter ~**~
Disclaimer: i own none of the characters i use unless i make them up which in this chapter should be Sarah.
June: 1998
Harry James Potter packed his things for the last time. He was leaving, not just school but he was leaving back the magical world, the whole name of the boy who lived. However, he was not leaving alone, he was leaving with his companion and lover Severus Snape. They planned to leave Hogwarts and the magical world behind and just get a new start. No matter how much people tried to understand them, they needed to go to a place where they were not a former student going out with a teacher, but two people who loved each other and just wanted to be together. Harry had just recently defeated Voldemort, but the question on everyone's mind was if it was permanent. Once Severus had been discovered as a spy, the mark had disappeared and he was nearly killed but he proved himself, but some people would not get past the fact that we was an ex-deatheater. They had planned everything out to where they would stay and what they would do for a living but there were two main things they wanted, a life without magic to bother them (after some convincing on harry's part) and they wanted to be a family. Harry shrunk his trunk of things and met Severus in the front corridor of Hogwarts. They disappeared and reappeared at their new home, a two bed room flat in a small town in England. The last thing they did after unpacking was carefully hiding their wands in a small box in the closet. They both changed and headed to bed, finally after Harry kissed Severus softly as a means of saying goodnight, they both drifted off to a peaceful sleep.
The very next day they went to a small muggle orphanage in the next major town where they tracked down a little baby witch who was sent here because her parents lived as muggles. After Harry persuaded Sev. to adopting a child so they could be a complete family, finding a magic child in a muggle orphanage had been difficult but by the end of that day they finally had a daughter. A 2 day-old Sarah Abegail Potter Snape came home with a very frustrated Snape because she wouldn't stop crying and a laughing harry at Sev's reaction to changing a diaper had been.
~**~ 6 Years Later ~**~
Severus Snape and Harry Potter woke up to the sounds of I'm a slave for you being blasted from the next room but before even having the chance to properly wake up a blur of black hair ran into their room and jumped on the bed. Harry didn't even need to put on his glasses to recognize the blur. A 5 year old and very Hyper Sarah sat on their bed looking innocently at her two fathers.
" Sarah Abegail turn that noise down! its too early!" A very cranky Snape told his daughter.
" But daddy its Britney Spears! and its not noise its music! what's wrong with it?" The little girl looked up innocently at her father.
Sev mutter under his breath something about Sarah definitely taking after Harry.
Sev looked back at Harry "you know its all your fault she likes her, you got her the CD"
Harry had the same innocent look as Sarah did. " she asked for it"
Sev muttered. " well no wonder she has it, you give her everything she asks for and that is the reason she is spoiled"
Sarah looked up at her dark eyed father with her green eyes slightly watery " does that mean you don'ts love me no more?"
Sev could only smile, they went through this almost once a week so he lifted Sarah into his lap and pushed back her messy back hair. " of course i still love you, i always have and always will, even when i had to change your diapers and even now when your blasting that blasted song in my ear."
Sarah smiled at him. " i don't care what the other kids say about having a mommy is the best, they don't know because they don't have two Daddy's" Sarah then hugs both her fathers before jumping off the bed.
Harry looked at their little girl who was in black Pjs. She might have looked exactly like Harry but most of the time she acted just like sev.
"Go to your room and change Sarah, and please try to tame your hair" Harry said gently.
Sarah then nodded and ran out of the room.
Harry then looked at his Husband. " do you think they'll tease her?"
Severus sneered "Damn close minded muggles."
Harry could only sigh and place his head on Severus's shoulder. Sev ran a hand through the messy black hair and kissed Harry's lips softly before getting up and leaving Harry in bed.
" Come on out of the bed, before you become part of it Potter"
Harry grinned and got up. " If that is your best professor snape, i'd say you were losing your touch"
After making the bed the bed and both getting dressed they headed into the Kitchen. Severus was dressed in black slacks and black shirt with some Black house slippers while Harry was in jeans and a green shirt and his black house slippers. Sarah walked behind them dressed in a black tank top and jeans with her long black hair brushed and put up in a Ponytail and she already had her sneakers on. When Severus walked into the kitchen he stopped at the sight that met him. Harry looked at what Severus saw up ahead and immediately stopped moving. Sarah blinked and just walked ahead in her curiosity. Sev gently grabbed her shoulder to stop her from moving. In their kitchen were four people they never expected to see again.
To Be Continued!
Well, was that any better?? Reviews and constructive Criticism Are Welcome!!!
By: Potions Master Snape Potter
Email: BritPopPrincess5@aol.com
Aim: BritPopPrincess5
Rating: R
Hey everyone, this is the revised version, and hopefully more well written version of Back Again. I know that my writing of chapter one was not the best in the world but i sort of wrote it in a spur of the moment, the idea came to me while i was cleaning. Well, this Chapter will be done from my Point of View though i might do different peoples point of view it will be separated into chapters. Please enjoy the story and yes chapter two is done but i wanna see how people like this version better, if anyone wants a copy of the first chapter after i replace it with this version so you can compare or you think its better just email me or ask me in review, and there is always Aim. Thank you for reading this. Out Of Character Warning!!
~**~ Potions Master Snape Potter ~**~
Disclaimer: i own none of the characters i use unless i make them up which in this chapter should be Sarah.
June: 1998
Harry James Potter packed his things for the last time. He was leaving, not just school but he was leaving back the magical world, the whole name of the boy who lived. However, he was not leaving alone, he was leaving with his companion and lover Severus Snape. They planned to leave Hogwarts and the magical world behind and just get a new start. No matter how much people tried to understand them, they needed to go to a place where they were not a former student going out with a teacher, but two people who loved each other and just wanted to be together. Harry had just recently defeated Voldemort, but the question on everyone's mind was if it was permanent. Once Severus had been discovered as a spy, the mark had disappeared and he was nearly killed but he proved himself, but some people would not get past the fact that we was an ex-deatheater. They had planned everything out to where they would stay and what they would do for a living but there were two main things they wanted, a life without magic to bother them (after some convincing on harry's part) and they wanted to be a family. Harry shrunk his trunk of things and met Severus in the front corridor of Hogwarts. They disappeared and reappeared at their new home, a two bed room flat in a small town in England. The last thing they did after unpacking was carefully hiding their wands in a small box in the closet. They both changed and headed to bed, finally after Harry kissed Severus softly as a means of saying goodnight, they both drifted off to a peaceful sleep.
The very next day they went to a small muggle orphanage in the next major town where they tracked down a little baby witch who was sent here because her parents lived as muggles. After Harry persuaded Sev. to adopting a child so they could be a complete family, finding a magic child in a muggle orphanage had been difficult but by the end of that day they finally had a daughter. A 2 day-old Sarah Abegail Potter Snape came home with a very frustrated Snape because she wouldn't stop crying and a laughing harry at Sev's reaction to changing a diaper had been.
~**~ 6 Years Later ~**~
Severus Snape and Harry Potter woke up to the sounds of I'm a slave for you being blasted from the next room but before even having the chance to properly wake up a blur of black hair ran into their room and jumped on the bed. Harry didn't even need to put on his glasses to recognize the blur. A 5 year old and very Hyper Sarah sat on their bed looking innocently at her two fathers.
" Sarah Abegail turn that noise down! its too early!" A very cranky Snape told his daughter.
" But daddy its Britney Spears! and its not noise its music! what's wrong with it?" The little girl looked up innocently at her father.
Sev mutter under his breath something about Sarah definitely taking after Harry.
Sev looked back at Harry "you know its all your fault she likes her, you got her the CD"
Harry had the same innocent look as Sarah did. " she asked for it"
Sev muttered. " well no wonder she has it, you give her everything she asks for and that is the reason she is spoiled"
Sarah looked up at her dark eyed father with her green eyes slightly watery " does that mean you don'ts love me no more?"
Sev could only smile, they went through this almost once a week so he lifted Sarah into his lap and pushed back her messy back hair. " of course i still love you, i always have and always will, even when i had to change your diapers and even now when your blasting that blasted song in my ear."
Sarah smiled at him. " i don't care what the other kids say about having a mommy is the best, they don't know because they don't have two Daddy's" Sarah then hugs both her fathers before jumping off the bed.
Harry looked at their little girl who was in black Pjs. She might have looked exactly like Harry but most of the time she acted just like sev.
"Go to your room and change Sarah, and please try to tame your hair" Harry said gently.
Sarah then nodded and ran out of the room.
Harry then looked at his Husband. " do you think they'll tease her?"
Severus sneered "Damn close minded muggles."
Harry could only sigh and place his head on Severus's shoulder. Sev ran a hand through the messy black hair and kissed Harry's lips softly before getting up and leaving Harry in bed.
" Come on out of the bed, before you become part of it Potter"
Harry grinned and got up. " If that is your best professor snape, i'd say you were losing your touch"
After making the bed the bed and both getting dressed they headed into the Kitchen. Severus was dressed in black slacks and black shirt with some Black house slippers while Harry was in jeans and a green shirt and his black house slippers. Sarah walked behind them dressed in a black tank top and jeans with her long black hair brushed and put up in a Ponytail and she already had her sneakers on. When Severus walked into the kitchen he stopped at the sight that met him. Harry looked at what Severus saw up ahead and immediately stopped moving. Sarah blinked and just walked ahead in her curiosity. Sev gently grabbed her shoulder to stop her from moving. In their kitchen were four people they never expected to see again.
To Be Continued!
Well, was that any better?? Reviews and constructive Criticism Are Welcome!!!