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Chapter 20
Amwy
As the star drew near, it did not grow larger. It instead stayed the size of Legolas. It drew closer... and closer... until it landed with an earth rumbling crash. This woke Rouge and Ryken up. They scurried next to Myian and Legolas, wondering what the pink blob that landed in front of them was.
It looked like the portals that Legolas had gone through to get Rouge, and to get Ryken. They all looked at Legolas for guidence, and all he could do was pick up a rock. He threw it into the pink blob and it was sucked in, like they were all sucked into the portal in Ered Mithrin.
He grabbed his belongings and turned to the others. He somehow knew that this would lead him to the next, and last, of their company to save the life of Middle Earth. He walked into the pink blob, hoping to live to see the other side.
The others were dumbfounded, watching him once again risk his life. The only thing they could react, was to follow him into the portal. So they gathered their belongings, put out the fire, and went into the pink blob.
On the other side, they came to a grand garden. It was filled with exotic flowers that they have never seen before. They came by to see Legolas bending down next to a giant plant, larger than him, which bore huge purple leaves.
"So...," Myian said, confused over the haste they made walking into the portal. "What do we do? I know you believe that we will find the last person we need here, but something tells me that there is more to it...".
"I know," Legolas said and stood up from his crouching stance. He turned to the others motioning them to follow him.
"Is he always like this?" Ryken asked Rouge. "I am afraid so, Ryken," she responded.
"Do get over it. We have to adapt to his ways if we plan to finish this journey in one piece. He knows what he is doing," Myian repsonded, overhearing their short conversation.
They agreed and began to follow Legolas' footsteps. He was very quiet. He knew something was brewing in this garden, but he could't quite picture it. After 20 minutes of traveling, they came upon a small speck of a forest. He recongnized this, this was where something important happened. He knew this from somewhere... somehwere he couldn't remember.
He stared at the forest, looking fo ranswers in the back of his head. He knew he should remeber, but he just... couldn't...
Rouge stepped through the bordering trees staring at the center with wonder. Legolas followed, and the other two mimicked this action. Once they reached the middle they finaly reconginzed it.
Before them was pink haired girl, sleeping on a giant purple leaf. They girl that Legolas assumed was the final member that would help the rotting world. But with the sleeping girl, also appeared the skin-changer in her bear form. They wicked bear teeth formed a small smile that was abnormal for a normal bear.
And its two hind legs, it began to swing down its sharp claws which were poised above the pink haired girl. It came close to the girls creamy skin. Legolas attempted to draw an arrow, but even his skills were to slow for this task.
The claws drew near, but when they cam centimeters away from the girl, her eyes popped open and she quickly rolled off the leaf. She drew to long weapons from under the bushes near her and began to attack.
The weapons were sais. Fork-like weapons with three spikes with one longer in the middle, leaving the handle three inches long.
She flew through the air, as if she were flying, kicking and slashing the blades with unmatchable technique. She kicked, punched, and slashed with her powerful limbs and weapons, causing the skin changer to attempt retreat.
The skin-changer let out a sharp cry that echoed through the sky. Soon after many other wild creatures appeared to attack. Wolves, birds of prey, wild cats, and many other verocious creatures appeared. This caused the others to draw there battle weapons and join the attacking girl.
Rouge drew the blades from her staff, while Myian loaned Ryken a dagger so he wouldn't tear his clothes with his spiked armsbthat he baturly used for battle. Legolas clumsily placed his bow in his quiver, and drew his long white dagger from his belt.
They slashed at the fiends, causing some to die, while the pink haired girl jumped off of trees and dodged the enemies attacks. Rouge added a little fire magic to her staff, causing burns of high degree. Myian in her continous motion began to weaken, being slashed every now and then by a flying fiend from the sky. Ryken eventualy gave up on the dagger and climbed a tree, attempting to stop the birds.
When most were cleared or dead, a wolf managed to bite down on the pink haired girls arm. She looked at the flowing blood that was being spurted by her wound. She looked at the wolf with anger in her eyes that Legolas would never manage. She receited words of a foreighn language that was similar to Elven Tounge.
She then raised her sais to her chest and crossed them at her neck. A little ball of fire appeared in the center. She quickly extended the sais straight in front of her, causing the fire to form a wall and fly at the fiends. They disenagrated into ashes and she collapsed on the ground.
They were all afraid of the girls power. All but Legolas, who had no fear because he desired death as a soloution to his problem.
He crouched above her and checked for a pulse on her neck. She of course had one and they built a camp waiting for her to wake from her lonely sleep.
Legolas had lcimbed into a tree and comfortably slept on a thick branch. Rouge was lying next to the fire using her thick blanket as a pillow. But once again, Rouge was visited by the Sight she possessed, making her moan in fear and discomfort.
Ryken loaned Rouge the comfort of his arms and they both went into a quite sleep. Myian was asleep on the purple leaf where the girl was when they first found her. She was and appeared to be combfortable. All but Legolas joined a quite world inside their minds.
All he did was plot their future plans and hope for the best.
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Legolas had climbed from the tree, checking on the pink haired girl. While doing so, the rest woke from there sleep.
He brushed the hair from the girls face, causing her to wake from her unintentional sleep. She looked around at the group of people and smiled.
"...Thank you...," the girl said, leaning up from her flat sleeping position.
"I owe you all my life. I am in your depth."
"No need to offer us life service, my lady," Ryken said in his propper speach he carried around for charm.
"But may I ask your name so I can properly address you."
She smiled, not exactly enjoying his attemptive courting, but not exactly dislinking it either.
"I am called Amwy. I am the princess of the great Nymph kingdom Alexandria. I would like to invite you to join me at the royal palace, you will be welcomed with open arms at my home for the help you have lent."
She nodded, eyeing everyone else.
"Can you all be accounted for?" Amwy asked tying her hair into a ponytail with a lime green ribbon.
All the people present nodded.
She looked at evryone again, then stopped her gazing at Legolas. She stepped before him, staring at him with blue eyes. Legolas returned the stare she had linked to him. He stared, just stare, nothing more. But Amwy had stared because she was searching for something behind them. But all she could find was a deep blue abyss.
"What are you hiding?" She asked Legolas, not knowing what lay behind the invisible curtian that covered their secrets. She could usualy find anything about a person she desired in their eyes, but she, as Ryken had troubled with, couldn't.
"We shall proceed to the Alexandrian fields," Amwy said poiting to the flower covered plains to the east.
"There is the largest kingdom in this deminsion, whicih is Alexandria. There you may find answers you wish and, for some, things you don't desire. Follow me to my kingdom and you shall be rewarded. Then you may tell my father the reasons for your presents in this hidden part of Middle-Earth."
They all began to follow the pink haired girl. Trying not to annoy her in any way, for they valued their lives...
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Chapter 20
Amwy
As the star drew near, it did not grow larger. It instead stayed the size of Legolas. It drew closer... and closer... until it landed with an earth rumbling crash. This woke Rouge and Ryken up. They scurried next to Myian and Legolas, wondering what the pink blob that landed in front of them was.
It looked like the portals that Legolas had gone through to get Rouge, and to get Ryken. They all looked at Legolas for guidence, and all he could do was pick up a rock. He threw it into the pink blob and it was sucked in, like they were all sucked into the portal in Ered Mithrin.
He grabbed his belongings and turned to the others. He somehow knew that this would lead him to the next, and last, of their company to save the life of Middle Earth. He walked into the pink blob, hoping to live to see the other side.
The others were dumbfounded, watching him once again risk his life. The only thing they could react, was to follow him into the portal. So they gathered their belongings, put out the fire, and went into the pink blob.
On the other side, they came to a grand garden. It was filled with exotic flowers that they have never seen before. They came by to see Legolas bending down next to a giant plant, larger than him, which bore huge purple leaves.
"So...," Myian said, confused over the haste they made walking into the portal. "What do we do? I know you believe that we will find the last person we need here, but something tells me that there is more to it...".
"I know," Legolas said and stood up from his crouching stance. He turned to the others motioning them to follow him.
"Is he always like this?" Ryken asked Rouge. "I am afraid so, Ryken," she responded.
"Do get over it. We have to adapt to his ways if we plan to finish this journey in one piece. He knows what he is doing," Myian repsonded, overhearing their short conversation.
They agreed and began to follow Legolas' footsteps. He was very quiet. He knew something was brewing in this garden, but he could't quite picture it. After 20 minutes of traveling, they came upon a small speck of a forest. He recongnized this, this was where something important happened. He knew this from somewhere... somehwere he couldn't remember.
He stared at the forest, looking fo ranswers in the back of his head. He knew he should remeber, but he just... couldn't...
Rouge stepped through the bordering trees staring at the center with wonder. Legolas followed, and the other two mimicked this action. Once they reached the middle they finaly reconginzed it.
Before them was pink haired girl, sleeping on a giant purple leaf. They girl that Legolas assumed was the final member that would help the rotting world. But with the sleeping girl, also appeared the skin-changer in her bear form. They wicked bear teeth formed a small smile that was abnormal for a normal bear.
And its two hind legs, it began to swing down its sharp claws which were poised above the pink haired girl. It came close to the girls creamy skin. Legolas attempted to draw an arrow, but even his skills were to slow for this task.
The claws drew near, but when they cam centimeters away from the girl, her eyes popped open and she quickly rolled off the leaf. She drew to long weapons from under the bushes near her and began to attack.
The weapons were sais. Fork-like weapons with three spikes with one longer in the middle, leaving the handle three inches long.
She flew through the air, as if she were flying, kicking and slashing the blades with unmatchable technique. She kicked, punched, and slashed with her powerful limbs and weapons, causing the skin changer to attempt retreat.
The skin-changer let out a sharp cry that echoed through the sky. Soon after many other wild creatures appeared to attack. Wolves, birds of prey, wild cats, and many other verocious creatures appeared. This caused the others to draw there battle weapons and join the attacking girl.
Rouge drew the blades from her staff, while Myian loaned Ryken a dagger so he wouldn't tear his clothes with his spiked armsbthat he baturly used for battle. Legolas clumsily placed his bow in his quiver, and drew his long white dagger from his belt.
They slashed at the fiends, causing some to die, while the pink haired girl jumped off of trees and dodged the enemies attacks. Rouge added a little fire magic to her staff, causing burns of high degree. Myian in her continous motion began to weaken, being slashed every now and then by a flying fiend from the sky. Ryken eventualy gave up on the dagger and climbed a tree, attempting to stop the birds.
When most were cleared or dead, a wolf managed to bite down on the pink haired girls arm. She looked at the flowing blood that was being spurted by her wound. She looked at the wolf with anger in her eyes that Legolas would never manage. She receited words of a foreighn language that was similar to Elven Tounge.
She then raised her sais to her chest and crossed them at her neck. A little ball of fire appeared in the center. She quickly extended the sais straight in front of her, causing the fire to form a wall and fly at the fiends. They disenagrated into ashes and she collapsed on the ground.
They were all afraid of the girls power. All but Legolas, who had no fear because he desired death as a soloution to his problem.
He crouched above her and checked for a pulse on her neck. She of course had one and they built a camp waiting for her to wake from her lonely sleep.
Legolas had lcimbed into a tree and comfortably slept on a thick branch. Rouge was lying next to the fire using her thick blanket as a pillow. But once again, Rouge was visited by the Sight she possessed, making her moan in fear and discomfort.
Ryken loaned Rouge the comfort of his arms and they both went into a quite sleep. Myian was asleep on the purple leaf where the girl was when they first found her. She was and appeared to be combfortable. All but Legolas joined a quite world inside their minds.
All he did was plot their future plans and hope for the best.
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Legolas had climbed from the tree, checking on the pink haired girl. While doing so, the rest woke from there sleep.
He brushed the hair from the girls face, causing her to wake from her unintentional sleep. She looked around at the group of people and smiled.
"...Thank you...," the girl said, leaning up from her flat sleeping position.
"I owe you all my life. I am in your depth."
"No need to offer us life service, my lady," Ryken said in his propper speach he carried around for charm.
"But may I ask your name so I can properly address you."
She smiled, not exactly enjoying his attemptive courting, but not exactly dislinking it either.
"I am called Amwy. I am the princess of the great Nymph kingdom Alexandria. I would like to invite you to join me at the royal palace, you will be welcomed with open arms at my home for the help you have lent."
She nodded, eyeing everyone else.
"Can you all be accounted for?" Amwy asked tying her hair into a ponytail with a lime green ribbon.
All the people present nodded.
She looked at evryone again, then stopped her gazing at Legolas. She stepped before him, staring at him with blue eyes. Legolas returned the stare she had linked to him. He stared, just stare, nothing more. But Amwy had stared because she was searching for something behind them. But all she could find was a deep blue abyss.
"What are you hiding?" She asked Legolas, not knowing what lay behind the invisible curtian that covered their secrets. She could usualy find anything about a person she desired in their eyes, but she, as Ryken had troubled with, couldn't.
"We shall proceed to the Alexandrian fields," Amwy said poiting to the flower covered plains to the east.
"There is the largest kingdom in this deminsion, whicih is Alexandria. There you may find answers you wish and, for some, things you don't desire. Follow me to my kingdom and you shall be rewarded. Then you may tell my father the reasons for your presents in this hidden part of Middle-Earth."
They all began to follow the pink haired girl. Trying not to annoy her in any way, for they valued their lives...