Thak you to my two *NEW* reviewers Kawaii Mistress and GraciePixie. Glad you seemed to both Like it, YAY! =o)
Amwy, PERFECT!? That has to change!!! Anybody have any ideas? Im being serious, I don't like perfect characters, she needs a flaw other than being perfect! =o) I'll think of something to add before the end of the story!
Thank you for your 'productive reviews' Im sick of the ones that say 'nice job, keep on writing!' etc. I L-O-V-E ones that tell me things they like and things they don't like.
I know you guys are going to LOVE the sequal. I'll have the first chapter out by tomarrow!
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Chapter 40
Legolas' Trial
Myian and Legolas were on the other side of the door. It was comepletely dark until the door shut and light was everywhere. They were now in what appeared to be a underground cave. It had roots of plants coming from the ground above. What was unique about the roots is that they were the source of light. They glowed as bright as the sunlight in the cave. Myian turned towards Legolas and smiled. She dragged him further down the cave until they found an exit. They walked through, hands clasped, and were suprised by what they saw.
They saw a huge wasteland in fron of them. There were stakes on the ground with human corpses on them, some have been burned, some died of starvation, and some you don't want to know about. "Ugh! How awful of that these people had to suffer like this!" She said pointing to a woman who had died of starvation, ankles tied together and to the steak, wrists placed above her head.
"We must continue...," Legolas said to her, removing their clapsed hands and walking forward. But he suddenly stopped whne he heard a roaring sound from afar. He looked at Myian and she responded by gripping her dagger and put her self in attacking stance. Legolas drew his bow form his quiver and one of the arrows along with it.
But he saw the figure coming to them. It was a large wolf like creature that had three heads. There heads were tangling about as drool leaked from the yellow teeth. Myian gave a gasp when she saw it start to run after them. Legolas quickly shot the arrow and grabbed for. The arrow hit the neck of the middle head, and bounced right off. He was dumbfounded, what was he going to do.
While the beast was running to them it managed to hit a pile of bones with two of its four legs, and barked in pain. "The legs, Legolas!" Myian screamed. Looking around for somehting she could also throw. She needed the dagger. Legolas shot two arrows at a time at the each leg, slowing the beast, but when he was going to shoot another round, he no longer had any.
He turned to Myian who was searching through the armor piles for weapons. But she did manage to find something. It was a large bone that was spiked on the end. She had no idea what kind of bone it was, but also did not want to know. "Legolas, here!" She told him, tossing him the spike bone.
"Try and aim fo rthe stomach! Maybe its tender like its legs!" Legolas tried to aim for the stomach, but the beast never gave him the opportunity. "Are you ready," Myian told him pulling a dagger from the armor pile.
"What?" Legolas asked, confused. The dog was a few yards away from them. "Trust me!" She said running to the beast, daggers spread out to her side.
Legolas put trust in her, it was all he could do. She ran to the beast and then jumped on to its back. It reared up, giving Legolas the chance for the shot. He did, and just as Myian suspected, it went right through the beast and cut it spinal cord, paralyzing it.
She was knocked of the beast's back and landed on the wasteland's hard ground. Legolas came to her, "All you all right?" Legolas asked, pulling her up. She dusted the dirt off her dress and smiled, "I'm dead Legolas, I don't think it could get much worse!" Legolas did somehting he never had done for Myian, he smiled.
Legolas gathered all the arrows in the legs of the three headed dog and placed them in his quiver. The continued down the warm wasteland until they saw an exit. They walked in and were now suprised to be in a large flower garden. They both inhaled sweet perfumes of wild flowers and plants.
Legolas was the first to move along, waking Myian up from her daydream that the flowers perfume gave her. He paused when they saw a very large flower. It was a large flower bud, colored pink. It had a thin, small heighted stem underneath that had many vines coming through it.
"Beautiful...," Myian said walking closer. She touched the bud and to her suprise, it came open and one of the large vines grabbed her and took her up in the air. The flower began to squeeze her, breaking of her circulation and the ability to breath. Legolas acted quickley by pulling out his dagger and slicing the vine that held her.
She dropped down and readied her daggers once more. The plant whipped three vines at the two elves, but Myian managed ot cut through all three with two slices with her daggers. It then rose all of the vines placed at its stem and they all came ot Myian and Legolas.
Many vines grabbed Legolas and swung him around and squeezed him tight. Myian dodged and sliced all the ones after her and she went striaght for the opened flower bud. She was about to cut the stem off, but vines finally did catch up to her. She gave her only hope to her two daggers.
She slung the one she found in the wasteland at the stem. It cut the stem almost all the way, letting blue liquid ooze out of it. She was about to throw her other one, but a long white one took the job for her. The plant fell from its stem, letting the pink bud turn brown and wither. Myian smiled as the vines released Legolas and her and he ran for his white dagger.
He met up with her and the exit appeared right behind the plant. When they walked through, the walls in the room were green with paintings of plants everywhere. Myian walked away from Leoglas and stood near a pillar. She turned to him and let tears fall from her eyes once again.
"This will be that last time I see you alive, Legolas," she said, lowering her head. "I will miss you always. But don't come to join me anytime soon, I would like someone to live on and tell stories about me back in Mirkwood," she added smiling.
Legolas walked up to her and gave her a strong hug which she gratefully accepted. She then forced herself to pull away and sat on top of the pillar. The door closed behind them and they both felt the room start to rise.
Myian looked up to see them both still in the room. "Your still here?!" She said confused and semi-excited. Then she frowned and looked around.
"Somethings wrong... somethings VERY wrong..."
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Umm... I didn't make this one very long... did I? Oh, well. Somethign is VERY wrong, isn't that ENOUGH for you people!?!?!?!?! Guess not ;o) REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!
*Note: You might want to push refresh on the browser to see if I added new chapters. It doesn't show till about 30+ minutes to reflect on the site. If you push refresh you can see on the navigation scroll bar thingy if I did or not. i will have the story finished tonight or tomarrow! then comes the COOL sequal!
Amwy, PERFECT!? That has to change!!! Anybody have any ideas? Im being serious, I don't like perfect characters, she needs a flaw other than being perfect! =o) I'll think of something to add before the end of the story!
Thank you for your 'productive reviews' Im sick of the ones that say 'nice job, keep on writing!' etc. I L-O-V-E ones that tell me things they like and things they don't like.
I know you guys are going to LOVE the sequal. I'll have the first chapter out by tomarrow!
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Chapter 40
Legolas' Trial
Myian and Legolas were on the other side of the door. It was comepletely dark until the door shut and light was everywhere. They were now in what appeared to be a underground cave. It had roots of plants coming from the ground above. What was unique about the roots is that they were the source of light. They glowed as bright as the sunlight in the cave. Myian turned towards Legolas and smiled. She dragged him further down the cave until they found an exit. They walked through, hands clasped, and were suprised by what they saw.
They saw a huge wasteland in fron of them. There were stakes on the ground with human corpses on them, some have been burned, some died of starvation, and some you don't want to know about. "Ugh! How awful of that these people had to suffer like this!" She said pointing to a woman who had died of starvation, ankles tied together and to the steak, wrists placed above her head.
"We must continue...," Legolas said to her, removing their clapsed hands and walking forward. But he suddenly stopped whne he heard a roaring sound from afar. He looked at Myian and she responded by gripping her dagger and put her self in attacking stance. Legolas drew his bow form his quiver and one of the arrows along with it.
But he saw the figure coming to them. It was a large wolf like creature that had three heads. There heads were tangling about as drool leaked from the yellow teeth. Myian gave a gasp when she saw it start to run after them. Legolas quickly shot the arrow and grabbed for. The arrow hit the neck of the middle head, and bounced right off. He was dumbfounded, what was he going to do.
While the beast was running to them it managed to hit a pile of bones with two of its four legs, and barked in pain. "The legs, Legolas!" Myian screamed. Looking around for somehting she could also throw. She needed the dagger. Legolas shot two arrows at a time at the each leg, slowing the beast, but when he was going to shoot another round, he no longer had any.
He turned to Myian who was searching through the armor piles for weapons. But she did manage to find something. It was a large bone that was spiked on the end. She had no idea what kind of bone it was, but also did not want to know. "Legolas, here!" She told him, tossing him the spike bone.
"Try and aim fo rthe stomach! Maybe its tender like its legs!" Legolas tried to aim for the stomach, but the beast never gave him the opportunity. "Are you ready," Myian told him pulling a dagger from the armor pile.
"What?" Legolas asked, confused. The dog was a few yards away from them. "Trust me!" She said running to the beast, daggers spread out to her side.
Legolas put trust in her, it was all he could do. She ran to the beast and then jumped on to its back. It reared up, giving Legolas the chance for the shot. He did, and just as Myian suspected, it went right through the beast and cut it spinal cord, paralyzing it.
She was knocked of the beast's back and landed on the wasteland's hard ground. Legolas came to her, "All you all right?" Legolas asked, pulling her up. She dusted the dirt off her dress and smiled, "I'm dead Legolas, I don't think it could get much worse!" Legolas did somehting he never had done for Myian, he smiled.
Legolas gathered all the arrows in the legs of the three headed dog and placed them in his quiver. The continued down the warm wasteland until they saw an exit. They walked in and were now suprised to be in a large flower garden. They both inhaled sweet perfumes of wild flowers and plants.
Legolas was the first to move along, waking Myian up from her daydream that the flowers perfume gave her. He paused when they saw a very large flower. It was a large flower bud, colored pink. It had a thin, small heighted stem underneath that had many vines coming through it.
"Beautiful...," Myian said walking closer. She touched the bud and to her suprise, it came open and one of the large vines grabbed her and took her up in the air. The flower began to squeeze her, breaking of her circulation and the ability to breath. Legolas acted quickley by pulling out his dagger and slicing the vine that held her.
She dropped down and readied her daggers once more. The plant whipped three vines at the two elves, but Myian managed ot cut through all three with two slices with her daggers. It then rose all of the vines placed at its stem and they all came ot Myian and Legolas.
Many vines grabbed Legolas and swung him around and squeezed him tight. Myian dodged and sliced all the ones after her and she went striaght for the opened flower bud. She was about to cut the stem off, but vines finally did catch up to her. She gave her only hope to her two daggers.
She slung the one she found in the wasteland at the stem. It cut the stem almost all the way, letting blue liquid ooze out of it. She was about to throw her other one, but a long white one took the job for her. The plant fell from its stem, letting the pink bud turn brown and wither. Myian smiled as the vines released Legolas and her and he ran for his white dagger.
He met up with her and the exit appeared right behind the plant. When they walked through, the walls in the room were green with paintings of plants everywhere. Myian walked away from Leoglas and stood near a pillar. She turned to him and let tears fall from her eyes once again.
"This will be that last time I see you alive, Legolas," she said, lowering her head. "I will miss you always. But don't come to join me anytime soon, I would like someone to live on and tell stories about me back in Mirkwood," she added smiling.
Legolas walked up to her and gave her a strong hug which she gratefully accepted. She then forced herself to pull away and sat on top of the pillar. The door closed behind them and they both felt the room start to rise.
Myian looked up to see them both still in the room. "Your still here?!" She said confused and semi-excited. Then she frowned and looked around.
"Somethings wrong... somethings VERY wrong..."
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Umm... I didn't make this one very long... did I? Oh, well. Somethign is VERY wrong, isn't that ENOUGH for you people!?!?!?!?! Guess not ;o) REVIEW REVIEW REVIEW!
*Note: You might want to push refresh on the browser to see if I added new chapters. It doesn't show till about 30+ minutes to reflect on the site. If you push refresh you can see on the navigation scroll bar thingy if I did or not. i will have the story finished tonight or tomarrow! then comes the COOL sequal!